重点话题突破 09 励志故事类（读后续写高频主题分类）（讲义）（解析版）

资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】►读后续写重点话题突破09励志故事类1精选最新名校试题2话题故事背诵模板3分类话题情节分析4分类话题写作步骤5分类话题高分词汇6分类话题写作高分句型1．（2023·安徽铜陵·统考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwastheworstdayever.TheexactdatewasJanuary10,2010.Andmylifewaschangedcompletelywhenthataccidenthappened.BeforethatdayIhadjuststartedmycollegelifeandlovedbeingatthatstageinmylifewhereIcouldeatallthepizzaIwanted,yetengageinadultconversationswithmyparentsabouttheresponsibilitytomakelifebetterforothers.IwasprettysureIcouldbesomeoneinthefuture,agreatvolunteermaybe.Thenonthatday,allthepossibilitiesweredestroyedbyacarelessdriver.ThedaysIspentinhospitalweredreadful,sufferingseverepainandhearingthedoctortellingmethatIcouldneverwalkanymore.WhenIwasfinallypermittedtoleavethehospital,Ihadmyselfinasmallapartmentandrefusedanyvisit,blamingeveryoneintheworldanddrowningmyselftodespair.AfterImissedtencallsfrommydad,hejustcouldn’tleavemealone.Andwhenheenteredtheapartment,itwasinamess,withpizzaboxesontheflooranddirtydishesinthesink.Inthecorner,therewasagarbagecanaroundwhichwerepiecesofgarbageandwastepaper.Heturnedaroundandfinallyhadhiseyesonme.Afewstepstowardsmeandhestrokehisfingersthroughmyhair,gentlyasking,“Youwanttoseesomething?”Ifeltalittleguiltyformakingmydadsoworried,soIfakedasmileandnoddedmyhead.Heopenedmyfridge,searchedforawhileandtookoutsomeiceandsometealeavesafterboilingsomewaterinapot.Mysteriously,heputtheiceintheboilingwater.Afterawhile,heasked,“Howistheicenow?”“What?”Iwasalittleconfusedabouthisquestion,wonderingwhathewasabouttodonext.Whenherepeatedthemoveandaskedmethesamequestion,Ibegantofeelbored.“Howistheicenow?”“Whatice?Thereisnoiceinthewaternow!Itmelted!”Iansweredwithmyeyesfixedontheroof.Suddenly,Dadheldmyhead,lookedatmestraightlyandexplained,“Theicewasoncetoughandhard.”Dadcontinued,“Butwhenitwasputinthepot,theboilingwatermelteditandmadeitdisappearasifithadneverexisted,justlikewhatthedifficultiesmaydotoone’sdream.”资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。“Wanttoseesomethingdifferent?”Dadwentontopouraspoonfuloftealeavesintheboilingwater,too._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iknewitwastimetochange._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文模板】“Wanttoseesomethingdifferent?”Dadpouredaspoonfuloftealeavesintheboilingwater,too.Itdidn’ttakelongbeforewesawtheboilingwaterturnedintoapotoftea.“Seethetealeaves?”Dadasked,pouringacupofteaforme.Holdingthecuptightlyinmyhand,itstruckmehowtheaccidenthadchangedme.Theteasmellingwonderful,Iwasovercomewithemotion,whispering,“Yes,Dad.Thetealeaves,they’vechangedthewateritself.”DadwatchedwithreliefasIfinallysmiledtohim.NotuntilthendidIfinallyrealizethatIwastheonlypersontodeterminewhatIcouldbeinthefuture.Iknewitwastimetochange.Ipickedupmydreamofvolunteeringagainandsparednoeffortstoconquereveryobstacleintheway.Allofasudden,allmymisfortunesseemedlessmiserable.OnthedayIwasfinallyawardedasthechiefvolunteerinmygroup,IknewIhadmademylifethecupofteaIwanted.Now,wheneverImeetsomeoneupset,Iwillalwaysinvitehimtocomehomeandpreparesometealeaves,notonlyforacupofteaaftertalking,butalsoforanimportantlesson—tryyourbesttobecomethetealeavesandturntheboilingwaterintoyourcupoftea!【情节分析】本文以事件发展顺序为线索展开，作者刚开始大学生活，畅享未来的志愿服务梦想，但是一场突如其来的车祸令他受伤住院，失去了行走的能力。出院之后，作者陷入消极苦闷的情绪中，将自己关在公寓里，任由生活陷入一团混乱。直到有一天父亲来到公寓看望作者，他把冰块放进沸水中，让作者明白沸水可以融化坚硬的冰块，正如困难可以消磨一个人的梦想。【写作步骤】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容““想看看不一样的东西吗？”父亲也在沸水里倒了一勺茶叶”可知，第一段可描写茶叶进入后沸水发生了变化，父亲由此对作者进行开导，作者恍然大悟。②由第二段首句内容“我知道是时候做出改变了”可知，第二段可描写作者做出了改变，不再消极苦闷，最后实现了梦想，由此而产生感悟。资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】2.续写线索：父亲倒入茶叶——水变成一壶茶——父亲和作者的交流——作者恍然大悟——作者打算做出改变——作者克服困难完成梦想——作者感悟【高分词汇】行为类①把……变成：turnsthinto/changesthinto/transformsthinto②突然想到：strike/hit/cometo/occurto/dawnon③改变：change/alter/convert④被……压倒：beovercomewith/beoverwhelmedwith⑤决定：determine/decide/shape⑥克服：conquer/overcome/surmount/defeat情绪类①轻松：relief/comfort/relaxation/ease②悲惨的：miserable/sorrowful/depressed/downhearted③不高兴的：upset/unhappy/disappointed【高分句型1】Theteasmellingwonderful,Iwasovercomewithemotion,whispering…（独立主格结构作伴随状语，现在分词作伴随状语）【高分句型2】NotuntilthendidIfinallyrealizethatIwastheonlypersontodeterminewhatIcouldbeinthefuture.（notuntil置于句首引起部分倒装，that引导名词性从句作realize的宾语，what引导名词性从句作determine的宾语）【高分句型3】OnthedayIwasfinallyawardedasthechiefvolunteerinmygroup,IknewIhadmademylifethecupo