高三英语二轮复习公开课求助信

高考备考书面表达应用文专题求助信之丰顺中学高三19班李洪庆•Step1analyzetherequirements(认真审题)•Step2drawupanoutline(谋篇布局)•Step3organizethesentences(联句成篇)•Step4getthearticlepolishedup(锦上添花)•Step5checkthemistakes(查漏补缺)FivestepstowriteanEnglishessay：求助信的文章框架：1.直言目的2.描述困难3.表达希望得到的帮助（自我介绍）（联系方式）1.askforhelp/seekforhelp__________________2.encountersomeproblems_________________3.befacedwithdifficulties_________________4.offersomeconstructiveguidance__________________5.begratefultosb.forsth________________6.offersb.ahand____________________7.(做)某事有困难____________________8.给某人留下深刻印象____________________9.设法成功做某事____________________10.进一步的消息____________________11.请某人帮忙____________________12.一次难忘的经历____________________寻求帮助遇到一些问题面临困难提供一些有建设性的指导havetroublein（doing）sth.给某人帮助leavesb.adeepimpressionmanagetodosth.furtherinformationasksb.afavoranunforgettableexperience因某事感激某人提出请求帮助1.我想知道您是否能够……2.如果您能帮助我，我将感激不尽。阐明自己的问题3.AndI’vefoundthatmyproblemlieschieflyintwoaspects.Foronething,...Foranotherthing,...4.Therefore,it’smyhopethatyoucangiveussomepracticaltipsonhowto...表达谢意5.谢谢您一切的好意。Usefulpatterns1.Iamwritingthislettertoaskyoutodomeafavor/givemeahand.2.Iamencounteringthreeproblemswhichtroublesmealot.Tobeginwith,…What’sworse,…Whattroublesmemostis…3.Unfortunately,Ifinditquitedifficulttodo.4.Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iameagertogetyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceon…?5.Iwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththesedifficulties.Ireallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.1.ThewholethingisgettingverydifficultandIrealneedyourgoodadvice!real改为really2.ThemainreasonI’mwritingisthatIhavelittefavourtoask.little前面加a3.Ithankyouintheadvanceforyourpromptattentiontothesematters.删掉the4.Iwouldliketobringyourattentiontosomeproblemswhatareoccurringinthisblock.what改为that/which5.Thepeopleintheapartmentbelowmineoftenplayloudlymusiclateatnight,makingitverydifficultformetosleep.loudly改为loud6.Also,thereisoftenrubbishleavinginthestairway.leaving改为left7.Iwouldappreciateyouifyouwouldhelpmesolvetheseproblems.第一个you改为it8.We’retryingtofindsomeonetolookafterthecatswhileweaway.away前加are9.Therearehundredsofpeoplegotoworkincarsandbuses.go改为going10.Ilookforwardtohearfromyouabouttheactionthatthecouncilwilltakeonthismatter.hear改为hearingDearMr.Brown,I’mnowsafelybacktohome.ThanksyouverymuchforallthekindIgotfromyouduringmystay.Hopeeverythingarefinewithyouthere.NowIwonderwhetherIcouldaskyoufavor.WhenIcomeback,IsuddenlyrealizedthatIhaveleftmyEnglishdictionarybehindatyourplace.Thankkindnessis˄acamehadItisanpreciousgiftfrommyAmericanteacher.Wouldyoupleasebesokindlyastosenditbacktome?I’llpayforthepostage.Thedictionarymustonthebookshelfinmybedroom.Itistheonewitharedcover.Thanksandallthebest.Yours,LiHuaakind˄be【2013新课标Ⅰ卷：请求帮助接机】假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号：CA985到达：8月6日上午11:30DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?①I’mwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingtohaveameetinginyourcity.②DoyouremembertheChinesepaintingIpromisedyoulastyear?Myunclewillbringittoyousoon.Ihopeyouwilllikeit.③Iwonderifyoucoulddomeafavour.ThisisthefirsttimethatmyunclevisitstheUS,soIhopeyoucanmeethimattheairport.Hearrivesat11:30a.m.onAugust6thandhisflightnumberisCA985.④Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakehimtohishotel.Myuncleistall.Hewillbewearingdarkglassesandabluejacket.Thankyouverymuchinadvance.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua写信目的困难；问题具体细节感谢及回复【2011山东卷改编：演讲比赛写稿求助】作文原题假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speechcontest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况；2.谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。亲爱的Tom，你来北京学习已经一个月了。一切如何？我真的很开心和你在这里度过这么难忘的一段经历。今年七月，我将参加中学生英语演讲比赛。为了有更好的表现，我正在做准备。然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料上有困难。同时，我发现难以恰当地使用英语。如果你能帮助我，我会非常感激。你知道，自从你离开后，我一直想着你，所以我希望在英语比赛后在北京见到你。我等不及再次和你见面了。你的，李华It’sbeenamonthsinceyoustudiedinBeijing.Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?1.你来北京学习已经一个月了。一切如何？我真的很开心和你在这里度过这么难忘的一段经历。2.今年七月，我将参加中学生英语演讲比赛。为了有更好的表现，我正在做准备。IamgoingtotakepartinanEnglishspeechcontestformiddleschoolstudentsinJuly.Tohaveaverygoodperformance,Iammakingpreparationsforit.However,Istillhavesometroubleincollectingusefulmaterials.Meanwhile,IfindithardtouseEnglishproperly.3.然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料上有困难。同时，我发现难以恰当地使用英语。4.如果你能帮助我，我会非常感激。Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermeahand./Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucoulddomeafavor.Youknow,Ihavebeenmissingyousinceyouleft,soIhopetoseeyouinBeijingaftertheEnglishcontest.5.你知道，自从你离开后，我一直想着你，所以我希望在英语比赛后在北京见到你。6.我等不及再次和你见面了。Ican’twaittoseeyouagain!【模仿翻译】DearTom,It’sbeenamonthsinceyoustudiedinBeijing.Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?IamgoingtotakepartinanEnglishspeechcontestformiddleschoolstudentsinJuly.Tohaveaverygoodperformance,Iammakingpreparationsforit.However,Istillhavesometroubleincollectingusefulmaterials.Meanwhile,IfindithardtouseEnglishproperly.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermeahand.Youknow,Ihavebeenmissingyousinceyouleft,soIhopetoseeyouinBeijingaftertheEnglishcontest.Ican’twaittoseeyouagain!Yours,LiHua求助信写作三步走：•介绍自己、提出请求-说明原因及其它事项-表达谢意、期盼答复Tips:•在许多情况下，求助信是写给不太认识的人或者机构，所以在信的开头可以做一下简单的自我介绍。同时，由于提出的请求往往都是需要麻烦别人的事情，所以要注意语气的礼貌程度，不要吝啬你的感谢。1．正确把握时态,保证语言准确性----目前某方面存在困难····一般现在时-----描绘得到帮助后的进步···一般将来时2.