高中英语-Unit-3-A-taste-of-English-humour-Section-4-Wr

Unit3AtasteofEnglishhumourSectionⅣWriting•如何写幽默类叙事性记叙文•一、文体感知•1．文体特点•故事类文章属于记叙文文体。在写作过程中一些技巧需要灵活地掌握和运用：•(1)要把握住记叙文的六个要素，即时间(when)，地点(where)，人物(who)，事件(what)，原因(why)和过程(how)。•(2)要把握故事性记叙文的结构。在文章开头要交代故事发生的时间、地点和人物，然后写事件的原因及发展过程，最后写结果。并且要有一条线索贯穿全文，使整个文章融为一体。•2．亮点句式•(1)Oneday/Theotherday，sb.planned/intended/wanted/hopedto...某一天/几天前，某人计划/打算/想要/希望……•(2)Unfortunately/Fortunately/Suddenly，sb.foundthat...•不幸的是/幸运的是/突然，某人发现……•(3)sb.raninto/cameacross/metwith...inthe...某人在……遇到了……•(4)sb.feltverycontent/happy/sad/terrible/embarrassed...•某人感到非常满意/高兴/伤心/可怕/尴尬•(5)sth.happenedtosb...•某人突然发生了某事•(6)Ithit/occurredto/strucksb.that...某人突然想到……•3．写作模板•(事件)happened________(时间，地点).Luckily/Surprisedly/Toone'surprise________(结果).•When________(另一件事件发生)，(这件事).Atfirst，________事件进行的情况.Then/Suddenly，________(情况发生转变).Later，________(情况的变化).Intheend/Atlast，________(事情的结局).Inmyopinion/Ithink，________(观点或看法).If________(条件)，希望或建议.•二、典题演练•结合下面的提要，写一篇100个词左右的幽默故事。•1．一个过度肥胖的妇女找医生，想寻求减肥的方法；•2．医生建议她吃谷物和蔬菜两天，然后隔一天(skipaday)，再反复如此两周；•3．一段时间后，她减肥将近20磅。医生很吃惊；•4．秘诀：跳跃。S审题谋篇体裁记叙文话题一则幽默小故事时态一般过去时人称第三人称结构开始：妇女需要减肥，咨询医生的建议发展：医生提出建议，妇女按医嘱减肥结局与高潮：减肥成功，出乎医生意料•1．完成句子•(1)一个过度肥胖的妇女找她的医生，想寻求减肥的方法。•Aterriblyoverweightwomanwenttoaskherdoctoraboutwaysoflosingweight.•(2)她的医生让她节食。•Herdoctorputheronadiet.•(3)医生建议她吃谷物和蔬菜两天，然后隔一天(skipaday)，再反复如此两周。•Thedoctoradvisedhertoeatvegetablesandgrainsfor2days，thenskipaday，anddoitlikethisfor2weeks.Q遣词造句•(4)下次我见你时，你会至少减去5磅。•ThenexttimeIseeyou，youwillhavelostatleast5pounds.•(5)一段时间后，当她回来时，她减肥将近20磅。•Sometimelater，whenshereturnedshelostnearly20pounds.•(6)她的医生很吃惊。•Herdoctorwasshocked.•2．句式升级•(7)用and连接(1)(2)。•Aterriblyoverweightwomanwenttoaskherdoctoraboutwaysoflosingweight，_______________________________.•(8)用by＋doing的形式合并(5)(6)。•Sometimelater，whenshereturnedsheshockedthedoctor_____________________________.andherdoctorputheronadietbylosingnearly20pounds•ThePerfectDiet•Aterriblyoverweightwomanwenttoaskherdoctoraboutwaysoflosingweight，andherdoctorputheronadiet.•“Iadviseyoutoeatvegetablesandgrainsfor2days，thenskipaday，anddoitlikethisfor2weeks.ThenexttimeIseeyou，youwillhavelostatleast5pounds.”•However，whenthewomanreturned，sheshockedthedoctorbylosingnearly20pounds.M妙笔成篇•“Why，that'samazing！”thedoctorsaid.“Didyoufollowmyinstructions？”•Thewomannodded，“Totellyouthetruth，IthoughtIwasgoingtodropdeadonthethirdday.”•“Fromhunger，youmean？”•“No，fromskipping.”