BEC-商务报告模板

例题1（文字题）Thestaffatyourcompanywererecentlyaskedwhattheythoughtaboutworkingconditions.Yourlinemanagerhasaskedyoutowriteareportsummarizingtheiropinionsandsuggestingpossibleimprovements.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.Write120-140words.Iknowyourhadameetingwithstaffrecently.Canyourwriteareporttellingmewhatstaffthoughtaboutworkingconditions,whatchangescanbemade,andhowthecompanywillbenefitfromimprovingconditions?betterproductivityMeetingwithemployeesaboutworkingconditionsStaffhadsomegoodthingstosaybuttheyalsomentionedtheseproblems:theneedformoreflexibleworkinghourspoorconditionofsomeofficeareastoolittlepaidholidaygiveanexampleexplainwhyneededsaywhatbiggestproblemissuggestasolutionSample1Reporton:StaffopinionaboutworkingconditionsThisreportaimstosummarizetheresultsofthelaststaffmeeting.FindingsFirst,mostoftheemployeesarereallysatisfiedwiththenewsmokingpolicy.Buttherearealsosomeproblems.Duetothefactthatmanyemployeeshavetocareforchildrentheywouldratherpreferflexibleworkinghours.Furthermoresomeofficeareasareinapoorcondition,mostimportantisthatafewofthemdonothavesunlightattheirworkplace.Thereisalsoaproblemwiththepaymentwhengoingonholiday,whichistoolessforourworkers.ConclusionInconclusiontheopinionsaboutthistopicaremuchbettercomparedwithlastyear,butthereisstillalottodo.Recommendation:Itissuggestedtocreateabonussystemforincreasingholidaypaymentandnotofleasttoincreaseproductivity.Band3Allthecontentpointsarecoveredanddespiteanumberorlanguageerrors,themessageisclearlyconveyed.Thereporthasbeenorganisedintosections,althoughattimesparagraphingisinneedofattention.Sample2Reportonsatisfaction-levelofstaffmembersIntroductionThisreportaimstoshowweatherourstaffmembersaresatisfiedwiththeirworkingconditionsornot.FindingsTherecentmeetingshowsclearlythatourstaffisquitesatisfiedwiththeworkingconditions.Especially,alotofthemhavepraisedourpensionschemeandourchildcarevouchers.Nevertheless,somecomplainedaboutunflexibleworkinghours,astheyhavetotakecareoftheirchildrenathome.Apartfromthis,thepoorconditionofsomeofficeareaswasmentioned.Alotofthemaredissatisfiedwiththedirtonthefloorsandtheold-fashionedcomputersystems.Finally,Iwouldsuggesttoincreasethenumberofdaysoff,asmostmembersfeelquiteexhaustedafter6monthswithoutholiday.ConclusionInmyopinion,weshouldtrytoimproveworkingconditionsforthiswillleadtomoreproductivityintheend.Band5Allthecontentpointshavebeenaddressedandthetargetreaderwouldbefullyinformed.Thereportiseffectivelyorganised,makinguseofheadingsanddiscoursemarkers.Therangeofvocabularyandgrammarisgood,andwhereerrorsoccurtheyareminor.Theregisterandformatareconsistentlyappropriate.