高考英语作文高分素材训练：5-做好起承转合-行文美不胜收-

高考英语作文高分素材训练5.做好起承转合,行文美不胜收完成了审题的过程,有了具体要点和整体布局后,就要整合信息点,让庞杂的内容变得富有逻辑性和层次感。在句与句内在衔接的基础上,做到段落间的起承转合,使文章有整体性、连贯性。学会正确使用连接词、衔接句,能为写作助一臂之力。Ⅰ.用好连接词在句与句之间、段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接性词语是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。连接性词语归纳如下:1.起始关系:tobeginwith,firstofall,asweallknow,asisknown,asisshownin...,accordingto等。Asweallknow,goodlearninghabitscontributetoefficientstudy.2.时间顺序:atthebeginning,then,later,finally,atlast,intheend,afterwards,sincethen,afterthat,immediately,meanwhile等。Atthebeginning,Icollectedallthethingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.ThenIwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.Afterthat,Imoppedthefloor.3.条件关系:if,unless,incase(of),as/solongas,onconditionthat,provided(that)等。Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldmeetmyuncleattheairport.4.转折关系:but,yet,however,while,otherwise,onthecontrary,nevertheless等。However,notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwelostit.5.因果关系:because,as,since,for,thanksto,dueto,asaresultof,so,therefore,asaresult/consequence等。Therefore,thereisnoreasonforustolookdownuponordinaryjobs.6.并列关系:and,or,aswellas,notonly...butalso...,either...or...,not...but...,neither...nor...等。WewillhaveagoodtimethereandIwillsendyousomephotostakenthere.7.递进关系:besides,what’smore,moreover,furthermore,what’sworse,stillless,tomakemattersworse,worsestill,moreimportantly等。Manyofthemcanhardlylookafterthemselves,stilllessmanagetheirownlives.8.列举事实:suchas,forexample/instance,take...forexample,thatistosay,asfollows,inotherwords,ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...,foronething...foranother...等。Ontheonehand,Icanearnsomemoneybydoingittohelpmyparents;ontheotherhand,Icangainsomeexperiencefromit,whichwilldogoodtomyfuturelife.9.表示观点:inmyopinion,inmyview,frommypointofview,asfarasIamconcerned,asforme,personally等。AsfarasIamconcerned,theystandforlove,friendshipandunity.10.总结:inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,tosumup,allinall,onthewhole,ingeneral,generallyspeaking等。Allinall,travelingisthebestchoiceforustoenrichourlivesandgetreadyforthenewchallenges.Ⅱ.写好衔接句1.引出开头Itiswellknowntousthat...我们都知道……Asfarasmyknowledgeisconcerned...据我所知……Recentlytheproblemof...hasbeenbroughtintofocus.=Nowadaysthereisgrowingconcernovertheproblemof...最近……问题引起了关注2.表达不同观点People’sviewson...varyfrompersontoperson.Someholdthat...However,othersbelievethat...Peoplemayhavedifferentopinionson...人们对……可能会持有不同见解3.表示结尾Inshort,itcanbesaidthat...总之,……意思是……Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,wecancometotheconclusionthat...从上面提到的,我们可以得出结论……4.提出建议Itishightimethatweputanendtothetrend.该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。Onlyinthiswaycanwe...只有这样,我们才能……。5.预示后果Obviously,ifwedon’tcontroltheproblem,thechancesarethat...willleadusindanger.6.表示观点AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion...就我来说……7.给出原因或顺序Foronething,...foranotherthing,...=Ontheonehand,...ontheotherhand...一方面……另一方面……请根据上下文填写适当的连接词,并体会其用法。DearJack,Thankyouforyourletteraskingaboutourdiscussiononlowcarbonlifestyle.Hereissomethingaboutit.Weshoulddosomethingtoprotectourenvironment.Atfirst,weshouldsavewaterandelectricity.Weshouldn’twasteourwater.Soweshouldusethesamewateragainandagain.Ifweleaveourroom,weshouldturnofflightsandcomputertimely.Second,weshouldn’tthrowthetrasheverywhere.Andweshouldseparatethegarbageprocessing.Next,weshouldusetissueless,anduseitagainandagain.Finally,ifwegoout,wecangoonfootinsteadoftakingcarsandwealsocangooutbybikeandbus.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua