专题21 书面表达 考点3 咨询建议类（第01期）-2020年中考英语真题分项汇编（全国通用）（解析

2020年中考真题英语分项汇编专题21书面表达考点3咨询建议类（一）【2020•山东省泰安市】52.新冠肺炎疫情期间，很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务。这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷，丰富多彩，但同时也存在着不少的弊端。请根据以下思维导图及要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈网上点餐的利与弊，并阐述你的看法和建议。要求：（1）语句通顺，意思连贯，可根据提示适当发挥；（2）词数：80~100（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（3）文中不得出现学校姓名、地名等与考生本人相关的任何信息。参考词汇：网上点餐orderfoodonline；减少外出reducegoingout；规避风险avoidrisks；塑料包装plasticpackagesWiththeoutbreakofCOVID-19,manyyoungpeoplepreferorderingfoodonline.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】本文是一篇材料作文，新冠肺炎疫情期间，很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务。这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷，丰富多彩，但同时也存在着不少的弊端。要求根据所给出思维导图及要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈网上点餐的利与弊，并阐述自己的看法和建议。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。【参考范文】WiththeoutbreakofCOVID-19,manyyoungpeoplepreferorderingfoodonline.It’struethatorderingfoodonlinehasmanyadvantages.Firstofall,itisconvenientandcansavetime.Besides,wecangetallkindsofdeliciousfoodbyshoppingonline.Wecanreducegoingout.Themostimportantthingisthatthefoodonlineisalwayscheaper.However,therearesomeproblemswithorderingfoodonline.Thequalityofthefoodseemsnotasgoodasitispromised.Theplasticpackageswillpollutetheenvironment.Intheway,eatinghabitsarenothealthy.Inaddition,itisnotgoodtoimproveourindependence.Inmyopinion,orderingfoodonlineshouldonlybeusedwhenneeded.That’stosay,youmaybuythingsyoucan’tfindinlocalmarkets.Besides,peopleshouldneverrelytoomuchontheInternet.【名师点评】1.例文点评：本文紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。而且还使用了一些较好的句式，为文章增添了不少色彩。2.高分亮点：短语：Firstofall，allkindsof，notas…as，inlocal，toomuch，ontheInternet。句型：It’struethatorderingfoodonlinehasmanyadvantages.的确，网上订餐有很多优势。that引导宾语从句。Thequalityofthefoodseemsnotasgoodasitispromised.这食物的质量似乎没有它所承诺的那么好。notas…as…不如……，是原级比较。（二）【2020•四川省达州市】76.近年来，全球自然灾害频发，极端天气频频出现，2020年新冠肺炎几乎在全球爆发，环境恶化给全球带来的危害正日益凸显。尽管我国政府出台了一系列环境保护方面的政策，采取了很多措施，成效也很显著，但是，我们还需要付出更多的努力。地球是人类共同的家园，时代的一粒灰，落在个人头上就是一座山，没有人能独善其身。假如你叫李华，作为达州的学生，应该为环境保护做出哪些贡献呢?请以“Let’stryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment”为题，向达州的学生发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，尽最大的努力保护环境!写作要点:（1）了解并让更多的人知道环境保护的重要性；（2）在日常生活中节约用水，节约能源；（3）为了减少空气污染，最好乘坐公交车、骑自行车或步行上学；（4）学会垃圾分类:少用塑料袋。（5）保护野生动物，不食用野生动物。写作要求:（1）要点齐全并适当发挥。（2）全文字数不少于90词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（3）条理清楚，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。（4）卷面整洁。参考词汇；（1）reducev.减少（2）sortgarbage垃圾分类（3）fourcategories（四类垃圾）:recyclable,harmful,dryandwetwaste（4）Nobusiness,nokilling.没有买卖就没有杀害。Let’stryourbesttoprotecttheenvironmentDearfriends,I’mastudentofGrade9inDazhou.MynameisLiHua.Asweknow,wehaveonlyoneearth.Butinrecentyears,manydisastershappenedontheearthandunusualweatherappearedveryoften.Evenworse,thenovelcorona-virusbrokeoutnearlyallovertheworldthisyear.Allthesebadthingswerecausedbytheterribleenvironment,buttheterribleenvironmentwascausedbyhumans.Althoughourgovernmenthasmadesomepoliciesandtakenmanyusefulmeasurestoprotecttheenvironmentinthepastfewyears,therearestillmanythingstodo.AsstudentsinDazhou,whatshouldwedo?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifweallkeepdoingthesethings,Ibelievetheenvironmentwillbebetterandbetter.Let’stryourbest!Astudentworryingabouttheenvironment【写作思路】这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“Let’stryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。【参考范文】Let’stryourbesttoprotecttheenvironmentDearfriends,I’mastudentofGrade9inDazhou.MynameisLiHua.Asweknow,wehaveonlyoneearth.Butinrecentyears,manydisastershappenedontheearthandunusualweatherappearedveryoften.Evenworse,thenovelcorona-virusbrokeoutnearlyallovertheworldthisyear.Allthesebadthingswerecausedbytheterribleenvironment,buttheterribleenvironmentwascausedbyhumans.Althoughourgovernmenthasmadesomepoliciesandtakenmanyusefulmeasurestoprotecttheenvironmentinthepastfewyears,therearestillmanythingstodo.AsstudentsinDazhou