专题21 书面表达 考点4 叙事描写类（第01期）-2020年中考英语真题分项汇编（全国通用）（解析

2020年中考真题英语分项汇编专题21书面表达考点4叙事描写类（一）【2020•浙江省温州市】56.年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰富、美味，像年糕（NewYearcake）、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。请以TheFamilyDinneronSpringFestivalEve为题，写一篇约100词的短文，向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭，让他们更好地了解中国丰富多样的文化习俗。注意：文中不可出现人名。标题已经给出，不计入总词数。TheFamilyDinneronSpringFestivalEve________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“TheFamilyDinneronSpringFestivalEve”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。【参考范文】TheFamilyDinneronSpringFestivalEveThefamilydinneronSpringFestivalEveisthemostimportantdinnerintraditionalChineseculture.OnSpringFestivalEve,familymembersgettogethertoenjoythedinner.Thereareallkindsofdeliciousfoodanddrinks.Manyofthemusuallyhavegreatmeanings.Forexample,inWenzhou,NewYearcakeisoftenthefirstdish,whichmeanshavingmoreluckandbecomingbetterinChinesepronunciation.Anotherdishisfish,whichmeanshavingmorethanweneed.Childrenalllikethisfamilydinner.Atdinnertheyreceivenotonlybestwishesbutalsoluckymoneyfromtheirparents.ItisaChinesetraditionthatwehavekeptforthousandsofyears.【名师点评】例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态以一般现在时为主；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。高分亮点：短语：gettogether；allkindsof；Forexample；thousandsof等。句型：Forexample,inWenzhou,NewYearcakeisoftenthefirstdish,whichmeanshavingmoreluckandbecomingbetterinChinesepronunciation.Atdinnertheyreceivenotonlybestwishesbutalsoluckymoneyfromtheirparents.（二）【2020•北京市】39.从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李华，你不小心把Peter借给你的书弄丢了。为表达歉意，请用英语给他写一封邮件，告知此事，并提出弥补的办法。提示词语：lose,makeup（弥补）,buy,send提示问题：Whathappenedtothebook?Whatwillyoudotomakeupforit?DearPeter,Howareyougettingon?I’mwritingthisemailtosaysorry________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【写作思路】该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。开头介绍我写信的目的；接下来介绍我打算如何弥补我的过失；最后希望你能原谅我。【参考范文】DearPeter,Howareyougettingon?I’mwritingthisemailtosaysorry,becauseIlostthebookwhichIborrowedfromyouaweekago.Iwanttomakeupformyerror.Iwillbuythesameonefromthebookstoreandsendittoyou.Whatdoyouthinkofmymethod?Ihopethatyoucanforgiveme.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【名师点评】1.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时，用一般将来时介绍我提出的弥补办法，介绍全面，条理清晰，用连词连接并列成分，文章前后连贯。2.高分亮点：短语：borrowfrom；wanttodosth；send…to…；lookforwardto。句型：定语从句whichIborrowedfromyouaweekago；宾语从句thatyoucanforgiveme。（三）【2020•浙江省宁波市】71.假如你是李华,学业考试后要参加21世纪杯中学生英语演讲大赛,题目为A/An_____________WinterHoliday,请你根据所给信息完成一篇英文演讲稿,讲述刚过去的那段寒假经历,并谈谈它对你今后的影响。注意:(1)将演讲稿标题补充完整;(2)演讲稿必须包含所有要点,并适当拓展;(3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;(4)词数100左右;首尾句已给出,不计入总词数。A/An_____________WinterHolidayLadiesandgentlemen,itismypleasuretopresentmyspeechhere.Mytopictodayis____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sallformyspeech.Thankyouforyourtime.【写作思路】本文是一篇演讲稿。文中描述了在一个难忘的寒假里做的事情，学到的东西以及对自己未来的影响。【参考范文】AnUnforgettableWinterHolidayLadiesandgentlemen,itismypleasuretopresentmyspeechhere.Mytopictodayisanunforgettablewinterholiday.Personally,thiswinterholidaywasquitedifferent.BecauseoftheCOVID-19,Ihadtostudyathomeandtakeonlineclasses.Asaresult,IfoundIwasabletolearnbymyself.Ialsohelpedparentswithhouseworklikecoking.AndIlearnthowtocookwell.Lastbutnotleast,Ihadmoretimetocommunicatewithmyparents.Therefore,Ilearnttogetonbetterwiththem.WhatIlearntduringthisholidaywillsurelyinfluencemyfuturelife.Iwillbemoreself-controlledandindependent.AndI’msureIwillfacedifficultiesandchallengesmorebravely.That'sallformyspeech.Thankyouforyourtime.【名师点评】1.例文点评：本文主要采用的是第一人称，时态采用的是一般过去时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。句子通顺，逻辑性强。2.高分亮点：短语：becauseof因为；asaresult因此；learnbyoneself自学；helpsbwithsth帮助某人做某事；communicatewithsb与某人交流。句子：AndIlearnthowtocookwell句中用的是宾语从句的简略形式；Iwillbemoreself-controlledandindependent句中用的是形容词比较级；I’msureIwillfacedifficultiesandchalleng