第30讲 读后续写（精讲精炼）-【一轮复习讲义】2024年高考英语高频考点题型归纳与方法总结（新高考

资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【一轮复习讲义】2024年高考英语高频考点题型归纳与方法总结（新高考通用）第30讲读后续写（精讲精练）读后续写是近年来高考英语科目新增的一个写作题型，要求考生根据所给文章、段落开头语及标出的关键词(部分试题无关键词)对所给材料进行续写，将其完善为一篇与给定内容融治度高、衔接合理、结构紧凑的完整短文。《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》对本题型的说明为:提供篇350词以内的材料，要求考生根据所给情节续写一篇150词左右的文章，使之构成一个完整的故事。读后续写所给文章的体裁非常固定，均为记叙文。在考查形式上，则根据关键词(在所给文章中用下划线标出)的有无分为两种。故事主题主要倾向于选择家庭趣事或温馨小事，或者惊险刺激、充满悬念的野外遇险故事、善举助人、难忘回忆:故事主要角色的属性较为固定，通常为同个家庭的成员;故事主要场景一般是家中或者野外;同时，多次有动物角色登场。在对所给文章进行续写时，动作、语言、神态和心理的描写是四大基本要素。备考时，考生需重点积果这四大要素的常用及出彩表达，并不断进行相应主题的练习。此外，考生也应注意积累环境描写以及动物描写相关的表达，并对一些节日风俗有基本了解。题型分析【典例】（2023·河北·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Twothingschangedmylife:mymotherandabikebasket.It’strue.Iwouldbeadifferentpersonifmymomhadn’tturnedabikebasketintoalifelessonIcarrywithmetoday—alessonaboutthevalueofefforts.Mymotherandfatherwereunitedintheirwayofraisingchildren,butitmostlyfelltomymothertoactuallycarryitout.Lookingback,Ihonestlydon’tknowhowshedidit.Managingthefamilybudgetmusthavebeenaveryhardtask,butshemadeitlookeffortless.Ifwecomplainedaboutnothavingwhatotherkidsowned,we’dhearsomethinglike,“Idon’tcarewhatso-and-sogotforhisbirthday.YouarenotgettingaTVinyourroomorabigparty.”Wehadtoearnourallowance(零用钱)bydoingchores(家庭杂务)aroundthehouse.Icanstillrememberhowlongittooktopolishthelegsofourcoffeetable.Mybrotherscannodoubtrememberhoursspentcleaningthehouse.Wehadtokeeptrackofourbelongings,andifsomethingwaslost,itwasnot一、知识点梳理资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】replaced.Itwasonesummerday.Mymotherdrovemetothebikeshoptogetatirefixed—andthereitwasinthewindow—white,shiny,plasticanddecoratedwithflowers:ThebasketwinkedatmeandIknew—Ihadtohaveit.“It’sbeautiful,”mymothersaidwhenIpointeditouttoher.“Whataneatbasket.”Itriedtoholdoffatfirst,butthenIcouldn’tstanditanylonger.“Mom,pleasecanIgetit?I’lldoanything,please,Mom,please?”Iwasdesperate.“Youknow,”shesaid,gentlyrubbingmybackwhilewebothstaredatwhatIbelievedwasthecoolestthingever,“ifyousaveup,youcouldbuythisyourself.”“BythetimeIhaveearnedenough,it’llhavegone!Someoneelsewillbuyit.Please,Mom,please?”“Theremightbeanotherway,”shesaid.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。“I’llbuyitnowbutyouonlygetitafter3weeksofdoublechores,”Momexplained.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,Igotmydreambasket,butsoonIsadlyfoundthesamebasketonothers’bikes!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“I’llbuyitnowbutyouonlygetitafter3weeksofdoublechores,”Momexplained.IagreedimmediatelyandMomboughttheflowerybasketandkeptitsomewhereIcould’tfind.Eachday,Ifinishedmynewroutineofdoublehouseholdchoreswithpassionandenthusiasm.资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Eachnight,IcrossedoffanotherdayonthecalenderasIcounteddownthedays.Asthedayspassed,thebasketseemedtobecomeevenmorebeautifulinmyimagination.Theextrachoresdidn’tbotherme.Thebasketwasworthit.Theanticipationgrewstrongerasthedaystickeddown.Finally,Igotmydreambasket,butsoonIsadlyfoundthesamebasketonothers’bikes!SoshockedandupsetwasIthatIimmediatelywenthometoreportthisdisastertomyMom.Seeingmysadface,shegentlywipedawaymytears.Holdingmylittlefaceinherwarmthhands,shespokeoutwhathasbecomethelessonIstillcarrywithmetoday.“Yourbasketisnotthesamebasket.It’suniquebecauseitwasobtainedbyallyourworthwhileeffortandwaiting.”【导语】本文以事情发展的顺序为线索展开，讲述了一个夏日，妈妈带作者去修理车胎时，作者看上了一个闪闪发光的车筐，于是问妈妈能不能买下它。妈妈不同意，告诉作者有别的方法可以得到它。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“妈妈解释说:‘我现在就去买，但是你要做三个星期的双份家务才能拿到。’”可知，第一段可描写接下来三周作者的表现和其心理活动。②由第二段首句内容“最后，我得到了我梦寐以求的篮子，但很快我就悲伤地在别人的自行车上发现了同样的篮子！”可知，第二段可描写作者看到别人有和自己一模一样的车筐时很失望，跑回家告诉妈妈，妈妈说了一些话让作者改变了自己的看法，意识到努力的价值。2.续写线索：做家务——期盼——得到车筐——看到别人有一模一样的车筐——失望地跑回家——告诉妈妈——妈妈教育作者3.词汇激活行为类①完成：finish/complete②回家：gohome/returnhome③告知：report/tell/inform情绪类①震惊的：shocked/astonished②生气的：upset/annoyed【点睛】[高分句型1]Asthedayspassed,thebasketseemedtobecomeevenmorebeautifulinmyimagination.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句）[高分句型2]SoshockedandupsetwasIthatIimmediatelywenthometoreportthisdisastertomyMom.（运用了部分倒装句）[高分句型3].It’suniquebecauseitwasobtain