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资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已经为你写好。“Okay,”saidourteacher,Mrs.Woodland:“It’stimeforthegiftexchange.”Iwasactuallyalittleexcited.Iknewwhatalotofthegirlshadbrought,andanyofthosegiftswouldbegreat,especiallymybestfriendSara’s.Shehadmadesomecandyandputitinthissupercutebearmug(马克杯).Mrs.Woodlandhadusputourgiftsonourclassroomtable.Thenweopenedthegiftslikeagame.Weeachdrewnumbersandwegottothetableandchoseawrapped(包装好的)giftwhenournumberwascalled.Butwedidn’tnecessarilyhaveto.Wecouldtakeagiftfromsomebodyelsethathadalreadyhadtheirnumbercalled—ifwethoughtwe’dlikethatgiftbetterthanthewrappedones.Whenitwasmyturn,Ididn’ttakeawrappedgiftfromthetable.AndIdidn’ttakeSara’seitherthoughIreallywantedto.Itooktheperfume(香水)Meganhadbroughtinstead.Ididn’thaveenoughmoneytogetMomsomethingspecial,buttheperfumewasreallynice.Shemightreallylikeit.IwasbusythinkingabouttheperfumeandwhetherMomwouldlikeitornotwhentherewasabigcommotion(嘈杂).IthadbeenHannah’sturntochoose.Shewasthelastone.Andunsurprisingly,shedidn’tgoforthelastwrappedgiftonthetable.Instead,she’dtakenSara’sgiftfromLauren.Well,thatmeantLaurenhadtotakethewrappedgift.Shelookedalittleupsetwhenshegottothetable.EveryoneknewthelastgiftwasfromKali.Thatwaswhynoonehadchosenit.Kaliwasreallypoor.Andshealwaysbroughtgiftsthatnooneeverwanted.Thistime,shebroughtapairofold—fashionedcrochetedpotholders(编织的防烫套垫)!“Idon’twantthese,”Laurenwhined(哀怨).“Iwantmycandyback.”“Noway,”Hannahprotested,keepingthemugofchocolateoutofLauren’sreach.“ThenIwantMegan’sperfume.”Laurencameovertotakemyperfume.“Comeon,Melanie,tradewithme.”Paragraph1:Mrs.WoodlandadvisedmetotradewithLaurensinceIhadalwaysbeenkind.Paragraph2:“Here,”IsaidtomymomafterIgothome,handingherthepotholders.“TheyareanearlyNewYeargift.”资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】【文章概要】本文讲述了作者的班级互换礼物,作者为妈妈换到了香水,但是同学Lauren对自己的礼物不满意,想要和作者互换。可推断续写部分的内容也与是否换礼物有关,且要与妈妈的场景相关联。【参考范文】Paragraph1:Mrs.WoodlandadvisedmetotradewithLaurensinceIhadalwaysbeenkind.ButIwasunwillingtogiveitupbecausethatwasformymum.ThenInoticedKalisittingsilentlyinthebackoftheclassroom.SuddenlyIfeltashamedofmyself.Shehadobviouslyworkedhardonthepotholders.“Sure,Iwilltakethepotholders,”IsaidtoMrs.Woodland.IgavemybestefforttosmileandglancedoveratKali.“Didyoumakethemyourself?Theyarereallypretty.”IsaidtoKali.Kalinoddedandsmiled.Paragraph2:“Here,”IsaidtomymomafterIgothome,handingherthepotholders.“TheyareanearlyNewYeargift.”MomseemedsoexcitedandcheerfulthatIwasworriedshethoughtImadethem.IquicklyexplainedthattheyweremadebyKali.Momsmiledandtoldmeshehadalreadyknown.ItturnedoutthatMrs.Woodlandhadcalledtotellhereverythinghappeningintheclassroom.Mompraisedmeforhandlingthesituationwonderfullyandgrowingtobeathoughtfulyoungwoman.Shetoldmethatwasthebestgiftamothercouldaskfor.【详解】结合续写的两个段首句,可知第一段主要内容“我”不愿意换礼物到愿意换礼物的心理和动作描写;据第二段首句第二段应该写我把礼物给妈妈,担心妈妈不满意,妈妈已经知道了事情的经过,表语了“我”,并告诉我这是一个妈妈收到的最好的礼物,我能够很好的处理事情,已经是一个有思想的人。续写也可以写其他合理的情节,但注意一定要与文章主题有关联两个段首句线索。最后还要注意所续写短文的基础时态为一般过去时。高级词汇和短语:tradewith,giveup,feelashamedof,glanceover,turnout,thoughtful从句使用ButIwasunwillingtogiveitupbecausethatwasformymum.但我不愿意放弃,因为那是为了我妈妈。状语从句,高级词汇apologisesforMomseemedsoexcitedandcheerfulthatIwasworriedshethoughtImadethem.妈妈看起来很兴奋很高兴,我担心她会以为是我做的。(that引导的状从)资料整理【淘宝店铺:向阳百分百】注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已经为你写好。Itwasacooleveninginspring.Iwasjustfinishingthedinnerdisheswhenthephonerang.Itwasunusualbecauseourlandlineseldomrang.Nearlyeveryoneweknewcontactedusonourcellphones.“ThisisJanetRhodes.”saidafamiliarvoicethatIstruggledtoplace.Thatnameseemedfamiliar,too.Iknewalotofpeople,havinglivedontwocoastsandinmostmajorcitiesinCaliforniaforthepastthirtyyears.“IamcallingbecauseIneedtoapologizetoyou,”Janetstated.That’swhenIsuddenlyrealizedwhoshewas.“ThatdaywhenIcameintoyourclassroomandchewedyououtfordiscipliningmydaughter,Iwaswayoutofline.Iknownowthatyouweredoingwhatwasbestforher.Youwereright.”Twentyyearsearlier,itwasonlymysecondyearofteaching.Janet’sdaughter,Stephanie,hadactedouttowardsomeoftheothergirlsintheclassroom,andIhadmadeherstayinfrombreaksbetweenclasses.IwaskindandfairwhenIpunishedher.ThetruthisthatIreallylikedStephanie,butsheclearlydidn’tlikebeingdisciplined.Shetoldhermother,andJanetfelttheneedtodefendherchild.Afterschool,sheflewintomyclassroomandaccusedmeofeverythingfrombeingunfairtoplayingfavoritestonotcaringaboutmystudents.Shewasyellingsoloudlythateveryteacherinthebuildingheardheraccusations,includingmyprincipal.Herwordsshockedmebecausenoneofhercriticismswastrue.Imanagedtokeepfromcryingwhileshestoodinfrontofme,butassoonasshelefttheroom,Ibrokedown.Icriedalleveningonandoffthroughthatsleeplessnight.Ihadoncefeltsuchjoyteachingmykids,butnowIfeltlikeIwasunderamicroscopeinmyclassroom.Forthenextfewweeks,herwordscausedmetosecond-guesseverythingIdidwithmystudents.Idoubtedmyabilityandevenmyownheart.Despitehowhermotherhadtreatedme,IknewIwoulddisciplineStephanieagainifsheactedout.Itwastherightthingtodo.Paragraph1:Andnow,twodecadeslater,theangrymotherwasapologizingtome.Paragraph2:“Canyoufinditinyourhearttoforgiveme?”Janetaskedfinally.资料整理【淘宝
本文标题:读后续写思维方向专练(02)-2024届高三英语一轮起航
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