重点话题突破 08 文化、艺术类（读后续写高频主题分类）（讲义）（解析版）

资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】►读后续写重点话题突破08文化、艺术类1精选最新名校试题2话题故事背诵模板3分类话题情节分析4分类话题写作步骤5分类话题高分词汇6分类话题写作高分句型1.（2023·湖南岳阳·统考三模）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。IlovetoplaythepianoandIgreatlyenjoyperformingmysongs,sowhentheannualwinterrecitalwascanceled,Iwasdisappointed.Ihadlookedforwardtoitforalongtimeandhadalreadypreparedtwoofmybestsongs.Mymomhadawonderfulidea,however,toturnthisdisappointingletdownintosomethingworthwhile.“YoucanperformyoursongsatCarriageHouseSeniorLiving,”mymomsuggestedbrightly.“I’msuretheseniorstherewhodonothavefamiliesvisitthemthatoften,wouldreallyappreciatethemusicandyoucouldplaymorethanjusttwosongs.”Iimmediatelythoughtthiswasagreatidea.OneofthethingsIdidnotlikeabouttherecitalswasthatIwaslimitedtoplayingjustacoupleofsongs.PlayingthepianoatCarriageHouseseemedlikeawin-winsituationbecausenotonlywouldIgettoplaymoresongs,butIwouldalsohavethechancetocheeruptheresidentstherewithsomelivelytunes.MymomcalledCarriageHouseandmadearrangementsformetoperform.Inthecomingdays,IworkedespeciallyhardtopolishupfifteenpiecesthatIthoughtthecrowdwouldenjoy,includingmanyoldclassics.Whenthemuch-anticipateddayfinallyarrived,myfamilyandIdrovetoCarriageHouse.Walkingthroughtheenormousdoubledoors,westeppedintoanentrywaythatoverlookedthespaciousgranddiningroom.Rightattheentrancetothediningroomstoodthepianoasifitwerejustwaitingtomakesomemusictoliventheplaceupabit.Atnearlyeverytableseveralgray-hairedwomenormenwereseatedenjoyingtheirdinnerandthecompanythatthecrowdedroomprovided.Despitetheconversationsgoingonatvarioustablesthough,isolationhunglikeadarkcloudintheroom.Almostimmediately,weweregreetedbyanoldwomanwithawalkerwhointroducedherselfasPhyllisinchargeofCarriageHouse.Shewelcomedmeandledmetothestage.注意:资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。AsIsatdownonthebench,Ipressedakeyonthepianoandwassurprisedtohearnosound.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________NervousnessmeltedawayandIstartedtoenjoytheperformancewiththeold.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文模板】AsIsatdownonthebench,Ipressedakeyonthepianoandwassurprisedtohearnosound.Feelingasifthewholeworldwaswatchingme,Iwasstruckdeadwithembarrassment.HowcouldIperformthesongwithoutthepiano?IwasonpinsandneedleswhenPhyllisslowlymadeherwaytothefrontofthecrowdofdinnersandannouncedinacomfortingtone,“Thisgirlhascometosingforusbutthepianoseemstobealittlenervous.”Almostimmediately,therewasscatteredapplauseandseveralpeoplesteppedforwardtohelpmepluginthepianoandsetthemicrophone.Witheverythingready,Itookadeepbreathandcommencedmyperformance.NervousnessmeltedawayandIstartedtoenjoytheperformancewiththeold.Onewomangotupandbegantoanimatedlydanceabouttheroom.Someofthepeopleswayedintheirchairstothebeatofthemusicwhileotherstappedtheirstoes.Theperformanceendedupwithastormofapplausefromthecrowd.IrealizedthatitwasfarbetterthanapianorecitalbecausealmosteveryoneseemedtotrulyappreciatemymusicandI’mproudthatIhavethepowertospreadkindnesstothem.Itendedupbeingablessingindisguisethattherecitalwascanceled,leadingtomesharingthegiftofmusicwiththosewhoneededitmost.【情节分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者喜欢弹钢琴，也非常喜欢表演自己的歌曲，所以当年度冬季独奏会被取消时，作者很失望。然而，妈妈提议去CarriageHouse为老年人表演时，作者欣然同意并为之积极的做准备。【写作步骤】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“当我坐在长凳上时，我按下了钢琴的一个键，奇怪的是没有听到任何声音。”可知，第一段可描写作者表演时发现钢琴没有声音的内心的紧张以及问题解决后大家对作者的鼓励。由第二段首句内容“紧张的情绪消失了，我开始喜欢上了和老人一起的表演。”可知，第二段可描写作者的演奏给老人带来的快乐和作者的感受。资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】2.续写线索：演出时钢琴出问题——紧张不已——老人鼓励——紧张消失——融入音乐——感悟【高分词汇】行为类①表演：perform/show②.宣布：announce/declare情绪类①.尴尬：embarrassment/awkward②.紧张的：nervous/intense/beonpinsandneedles【高分句型1】IwasonpinsandneedleswhenPhyllisslowlymadeherwaytothefrontofthecrowdofdinnersandannouncedinacomfortingtone（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）【高分句型2】Irealizedthatitwasfarbetterthanapianorecitalbecausealmosteveryoneseemedtotrulyappreciatemymusic.（运用了由关系代词that引导的宾语从句）2.（2023·山西·长治市上党区第一中学校校联考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写，使之构成一篇完整的短文。WecallTalentShowthebiggeststageinourcountry.Istoodonthathugestage,withmythroatdry.AsIstaredattheaudience,Iknewthismomentcouldchangemylifeforever.WhenjudgesaskedmynameandItriedtospeak,nothingcameout.Thecrowdfellsilent,waitingforthewordstocome.FinallyIstuttered(结巴地说)mynameandmyage.“Asyoucantell,”Isaid,“Ihaveaspeechdisorder…”I’dlovetosingandhadalreadysignedupfortheschooltalentshowinfourthgradewhenIstartedstuttering.Fortunately,mostofthekidsatmyschoolwerekin