公开课课件-如何在高考英语作文中增加细节

Howtoaddreasonabledetailstoyourarticle假定你是李华。上周日在地铁站捡到了英国人Steven的护照。请你用英语给你市某英文报社编辑写一封信，内容包括：1.简述时间过程;2.交代护照相关信息;3.委托报社刊登招领启事.注意:1.词数100左右2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。广东一模书面表达一个问题主体信息写完往往只有60-70个字，不足100词，怎么弥补词数？需要“适当增加细节，以使行文连贯”。Deareditor,I’mLiHua,ahighschoolstudentinourcity.I’mwritingtotellyouapieceofurgentinformation.IpickedupapassportlastSundayinthesubwaystationwhenIwastakingaridehome.TherewasnobodyaroundwhenIfounditonawaitingbench.TheownerofitisStevenwhocomesfromEngland.Havinglostthepassport,hemustbeveryanxious,butIhavenoideahowtoreturnittohim.SoIneedyourhelp.Iwishyoucouldpostanoticeonyournewspapertotellhimaboutthemissingpassport,sothathecangetitback.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucoulddomethefavor.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua结果交际语心理感受具体化同位语原因如何适当增加细节1.增加同位语2.补全前因后果或目的3.适当将写作内容具体化4.写出个人感受、评价或后果5.补充功能性（交际性）语言Whatkindofinformationcanoftenbeaddedtoyourarticle?1增加同位语1IamLiHua,_________________________________(我们学校的学生会主席)./_________________________________________(来自中国的一位交换生).2.Iwanttohaveapenfriend,________________________________________(希望是一位跟我有相同兴趣的女孩).ChairmanoftheStudents’Unionofmyschool.anexchangestudentfromChina.hopefullyagirlwithinterestssimilartomine.2.补充前因后果或目的___________________________________________(因为知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣），Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinthisactivity.______________________________________________________________________(为了获得一些实践经验)I’mplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncompany.(1)KnowingthatyoushowgreatinterestinChinesetraditionalculture,(2)Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,______________________________________________________________________(由于我有过丢身份证的经历），IcanfeelhowanxiousMrStevenwillbenow.(3)SinceIhavetheexperienceoflosingmyIDcard,（1)Theactivitywillbeheld____________________________________________(具体时间、地点）(2)IknowtheownerisSteven__________________________(相关身份信息)3WhenIreceivedthedictionary,Ifoundthat__________________________________________________________________________(具体存在问题如错印、缺页等)3.适当将写作内容具体化from9a.m.to10a.m.onApril11inClassroom501.fromEngland,aged38,married.thereweresomemisprintsandpagesfrom23-45weremissing.4增加结果或者是效果(1)Ithinkitisagoodchancetoappreciatelocaloperas,__________________________________________________________(这必将有助于你学到更多的中国文化）(2)Wecansetoutearly,____________________________________(以便我们有更多的时间阅读和挑选图书）(3)Therearequiteafewmissingpages,_________________________________________(变得无法使用)sothatwecanhavemoretimetoreadandselectbookswhichwillsurelyhelpyoulearnmoreaboutChineseculture.makingitimpossibletouse.1___________________________________________________________________（如果你能帮我这个忙，我将不胜感激（2）_________________________________（期待着你的早日回复）5.补充功能性（交际性）语言(3)____________________________________________________________________(如果有什么能帮到你的，请不要犹豫告诉我）Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucoulddomethefavour.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.IfthereisanythingIcandoforyou,pleasedon’thesitatetoletmeknow.practice(addreasonabledetails）1.I’mLiHua,___________________.(同位语)2.I’mwritingtoaskyoutohelpmefindtheownerofapassport,___________________.(具体来源等)3Withcaution,Iopenedtheplasticbag,______________________________.（结果）4Lastweek,IboughtanEnglishdictionaryfromyouronlinebookstore____________________________________(目的/原因)5________________________________________________________(若你能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激)..假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信。要点：1、参加中文学习班。2、看中文书刊、电视。3、学唱中文歌曲。4、交中国朋友。注意：1.词数：100左右。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语已为你写好.DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinese.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.BestwishesLiHua(2016全国课标卷)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教MsJenkins写信，请她修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。I'myourstudentLiHua.I'mapplyingforapart-timejobataforeigncompanyinmycityduringthesummervacation.CouldyoucorrectthelanguageandtheformatoftheapplicationletterandresumeIhavewritten?Theyareintheattachment.DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddi