高一上册英语作文建议信教师用

书面表达假设你是MissWang，你的朋友XiaoDong今年刚上高中。他来信向你倾诉他不善沟通，在新的环境没有什么朋友,也不知该如何结交新的朋友，感觉很孤单。请你用英语给他回一封信，给他提一些建议。要点如下：1.对他的现状表示关心；2.提出几点交友建议（至少三点）。要求：1.词数100左右；2.信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。课本中SuggestionLetter建议信2.建议信的内容1.建议信的格式3.建议信的注意事项DearXiaoDong,Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavetroubleinmakingfriends,butthesituationwillbeeasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou:First,youcangoandtalktopeoplestandingontheirown,andIamsureyouwillsoonhaveanewfriendbecausethatpeoplemayalsobelonely.Second,youcanbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes,whichwillmakeyoufindpeoplewhohavethesameinterestsasyou.Finally,youshouldtrytojoininadiscussion,lettingpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours,MissWangDearXiaoDong,Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavetroubleinmakingfriends,butthesituationwillbeeasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou:First,youcangoandtalktopeoplestandingontheirown,andIamsureyouwillsoonhaveanewfriendbecausethatpeoplemayalsobelonely.Second,youcanbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes,whichwillmakeyoufindpeoplewhohavethesameinterestsasyou.Finally,youshouldtrytojoininadiscussion,lettingpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours,MissWang建议信的内容开头：收信感受和写信的目的；（包括存在的问题）；主体：分条写出建议，附带原因；结尾：表达希望;（希望自己的建议能够对对方有所帮助）课本P7.2主体部分的建议该如何写呢？首先，可以通过列提纲的方式归纳写作要点打开课本P7,模仿第一题，小组讨论三分钟，写出三条建议和原因IdeasWhy1.toaskpeopletheirlikesanddislikes2.tojoinindiscussionandshowinterestinotherpeople'sideas3..........1.tofindclassmateswiththesameintersets2.togettoknowdifferentpeopleandletthemseeyouarefriendly3............其次，把归纳出的要点连接成句。同学们试着用第二题蓝色部分的句型，把第一题的ideas与why连成句子。DearXiaoDong,Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavetroubleinmakingfriends,butthesituationwillbeeasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou:First,youcangoandtalktopeoplestandingontheirown,andIamsureyouwillsoonhaveanewfriendbecausethatpeoplemayalsobelonely.Second,youcanbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes,whichwillmakeyoufindpeoplewhohavethesameinterestsasyou.Finally,youshouldtrytojoininadiscussion,lettingpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours,MissWang注意事项1.合理安排建议信的内容结构。2.掌握建议信的语言特点。语气要诚恳，有礼貌；建议内容要详尽具体，不能含糊其辞；可提供的建议通常是多个，因此要注意各个建议之间的衔接。3.提出建议是，适当使用情态动词表达自己的情感。4.时态，多用一般现在时和一般将来时。5.熟悉建议信的常用句型。文章整体First...Second...Thirdly...Finally...Firstofall...Secondly...Thirdly...Finally...First...Next...Besides...Finally...文章内部Notonly....,butalso...However,inspiteof,otherwises,what'smore=furthermoreontheonehand...,ontheotherhand...insteadof衔接单词短语开头Iamverysorrytohearthat...Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.Iamwritinginreplyto…常用句型过渡句（即第一段最后一句话）Mysuggestionareasfollows.Inmyopinion,someeffectivemeasuresmustbetakentosolvetheseproblems.Theycanbelistedasfollow.Thisproblemwillbemoreseriousunlesswetakesomeeffectivemeasures.提出建议时常用的句型：Inmyopinion,itwouldbebeneficialif…Iwouldrecommendthat…Thereisasuggestionasto(关于)…Isuggestthat…结尾：Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestions/advice/helpful/practical/usefulIwouldappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionintoconsideration.假设你是李梅，你的好朋友苏珊前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件。（1）学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会。（2）多交一些朋友，友情会使你忘记孤独。（3）积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。词数：100字左右，可适当增加细节。课下作业DearSuan,IamsorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroubleadaptingtoyournewschoollifeinAmerican,butthissituationcanbeeasilychangedifyoutakemyadvice.Firstly,youshouldworkhardatEnglish,whichcangiveyoumoreopportunitiestocommunicatewithothers.Secondly,whynotmakesomefriends?TheycanhelpyoutoknowmoreaboutAmerican,andfriendshipcanhelpyoutoforgetyourloneliness.Thirdly,itwouldbeagoodideaifyoutookanactivepartinallkindsofactivities,whichwillhelptomakelifemoreinteresting.Bydoingthese,youwillbehappierwithyournewlifesoon.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideas/suggestionsuseful/helpful.Yours,LiMeiBye