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Writing教学目标:1.灵活运用所学英语语法,词汇,组句成文。2.准确表达表格中涉及的要点。1.说起什么是幸福这个问题,不同的人持不同的观点。2.一些人认为幸福就是取得成功,赚很多钱,而另一些人认为幸福意味着有很多朋友陪伴左右。3.在我看来,幸福取决于对生活的态度,而不是一个人的贫富。4.然而无论幸福是什么,成就我们幸福的重要因素有两个,即爱与健康。5.因此,要想幸福,无论何时何地,我们都必须保持健康,让自己充满爱。Whenitcomestothequestionwhatishappiness,differentpeopleholddifferentviews.Somepeoplethinkhappinessisachievingsuccessandearningmuchmoney,whileothersarguethathappinessmeansbeingsurroundedbyfriends.Inmyopinion,happinessdependsonaperson'sattitudetolife,notwhetherheorsheisrichorpoor.However,whateverhappinessis,there'retwoimportantfactorscontributingtoourhappiness,thatis,loveandhealth.Therefore,tobehappywemuststayhealthyandmakeourselvesfulloflove,anytime,anywhere.中央电视台曾推出一期特别调查节目“幸福是什么?”。一时间,“幸福”成了各媒体使用的高频词汇。在英语课上,老师在全班同学中进行了幸福的调查,请你根据以下提示,写一篇150词左右的英语短文。被调查学生比例幸福感的来源50%衣食无忧,备受关爱30%学业成功,考上重点大学20%有兴趣爱好和梦想你的感想谈谈你的幸福观以及怎样获得幸福Writingpractice调查结果写作基本步骤:1.仔细审题,列举大纲。2.围绕要点,写出句子。3.添加过度,确保连贯。4.先求正确,再求灵活.5.认真眷写,卷面整洁。Canyoulisttheoutlineofthewriting?Introduction(topic)Body(supportingideas)ConclusionTheoutlineofthewriting:Conclusionparagraph:…Introductionparagraph:…Point2…BodyPoint1…supportingidea1supportingidea2supportingidea1supportingidea2Keywords:进行调查carryoutasurry主题句的内容要明确具体,语言简洁,开门见山Introduction:What'sthetopic?Howwillyoustartyourpassage?ThebodypartPoint1:50%的学生认为Point2:30%的学生认为Point3:20%的学生认为巧用过渡句,过渡词,理顺文章的逻辑关系Conclusion我认为:Thediscussionabouthappinesshasrecentlyattractedpeople'sattention.OurEnglishteacherhascarriedoutasurveyaboutwhatishappinessinourclass.Theresultareasfollows.50%ofthestudentsfeelhappyabouttheircomfortablelifewithoutworryingaboutfoodandclothing.About30%ofthestudentsfindhappinessintheiracademicachievementandtheirconfidenceingoingtokeyuniversities.Whiletherestthinkthatifyouhavehobbiesanddreams,youwillbefilledwithhappiness.Toachievehappiness,asfarasIamconcerned,wemustkeepagoodstateofmindanddevelopasenseofself-worth.Wecanderiveself-worthfromgivinghelptothoseinneed,suchasshowingmuchconcernfortheagedandthepoor.What'smore,doingourbesttoworkhardatourlessonsandimproveourallroundabilitiesreallycountsinmakingushappy.影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素1.语篇信息是否完整2.行文是否连贯流畅,语言是否得体。3.是否使用高级词汇4.是否使用复杂句5.卷面整洁,书写工整表示观点对比类写作套语A.总起:Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Differentpeopleholddifferent/oppositeopinions.Peoplehavetaken/adopteddifferentattitudestowards…Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion.B.表达观点一:…ofthemholdtheopinionthat….…ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat…Peoplewhoarefortheideathink…C.表达不同观点之间的衔接:However,…ofthemholdadifferentview./…ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.Peoplewhoareagainstitdon’tthinkso.However,everycoinhastwosides.Differentfromthose….,…peoplethink….Ontheotherhand,…peoplethink….D.结尾常用套语:Inmyopinion/Personally,…AsfarasI’mconcerned,…Inshort/inbrief/inaword,…表列举说明的关联词:•Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith,....Secondly…Thirdly…•Inthefirstplace…Inthesecondplace…Inthethirdplace…•Finally/Lastbutnotleast/,....表示递进、强调的关联词•....Besides/Apartfrom/What’smore/Inaddition/Furthermore/Moreover/worsestill/tomakemattersworse…A、运用高级词汇或短语B、增加形容词或副词C、灵活运用各种句型亮点点拨Homework:Finishandimproveyourcompositionandhanditintomorrow.
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