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•记叙文,也是按照这个写作思路,能起到化难为易,思考问题是什么,造成什么样的结果,思考人物的心理及行为变化;动物的行为变化;周围环境的变化;人与自我与他人与自然的关系及言语等等,•如何用英语语言(包括使用按照原题要求所给的5个以上的关键词造句)、词语表达出来,从逐句造句到最终形成续写的语篇,而且是连贯的符合逻辑顺序的续写语篇。•请看今年2018年浙江卷读后续写:•所标注的关键词语是:•dad,UnclePaul,farmhouse,river,feed,sheep,late,track,getlost,sight•两段开头语分别是:•Paragraph1:•Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________•Paragraph2:•Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.__________________________________________•————————————————————————————————————•Paragraph1•提出问题:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.•问题结果:Instinctively,Iyelledoutloud,puulingonthereins(缰绳)hardinordertostopthehorse.Butuselessly,thehorsespedoffthetrackintoanotherdirection.•解决问题:Dadfollowedcloselybehind,callingouttotellmehowtosoothe(安慰;使平静)theterrifiedhorseandIdidastold.Finally,thehorsecalmeddown,•提出问题:butweseemedtogetlost,unabletogobacktothemountainroad•Paragraph2•提出问题:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark•问题结果:Tearsoffearandregretfilledmyeyes.Wegotstuckintheforest.•解决问题:Muchtoourdelight,thesoundofwaterinthedistancecaughtourattentionanddroveustotheriverbank.Dadproposedthatweshouldwalkalongtheriverwhichmayleadustothefarmhouseandnothingseemedbetterthanthat.TimeappearedtobemerrierandshorterwhenIstayedtogetherwithDadandbeforelongthefarmhousecameintosight.Finally,wearrivedhomesafelyjustintimeforsupper.•Whatathrillingbutmemorableexperienceitwas!•记叙有动作;有人与人之间的关系;人与自然的关系;人与动物的关系;人的心理描写,摆出问题-问题造成的结果-如何解决的问题,按照这样的思路,形成语篇脉络等等跃然纸上,一篇续写作文就这样完成了。Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Instinctively,Iyelledoutloud,pullingonthereinshardinordertostopthehorse.Butuselessly,thehorsespedoffthetrackintoanotherdirection.Dadfollowedcloselybehind,callingouttotellmehowtosoothetheterrifiedhorseandIdidastold.Finally,thehorsecalmeddown,butweseemedtogetlost,unabletogobacktothemountainroad.Paragraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Tearsoffearandregretfilledmyeyes.Wegotstuckintheforest.Muchtoourdelight,thesoundofwaterinthedistancecaughtourattentionanddroveustotheriverbank.Dadproposedthatweshouldwalkalongtheriverwhichmayleadustothefarmhouseandnothingseemedbetterthanthat.TimeappearedtobemerrierandshorterwhenIstayedtogetherwithDadandbeforelongthefarmhousecameintosight.Finally,wearrivedhomesafelyjustintimeforsupper.Whatathrillingbutmemorableexperienceitwas!
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