2019年高考英语专题六书面表达第二讲怎样跳出“大众分”课件

第一部分语法题型突破篇专题六书面表达第二讲怎样跳出“大众分”解题技法巧应用技法一书写要美观整洁卷面整洁是书面表达获得高分的首要因素。你必须明白，你的考卷是给阅卷老师看的，让老师看得舒服、方便、清楚非常重要。所以你应该给老师呈现一份美观、清晰的答卷。字体大小也很重要，字太小老师看起来费眼，所以字宜大一点、宜疏一点；笔画宜实一点，如果笔画过虚，扫描到电脑上会不清晰。若书写较差，影响识读，其得分将降低一个档次。技法二表达要“明”，错误要“少”(一)掌握基本句型，力避常见错误1．主语＋谓语(不及物动词)该句型常用来表示主语的动作或状态。其特点为：句子的谓语动词都能表达完整的意思，这类动词叫作不及物动词，后面可以跟副词、介词短语、状语从句等。①(2017·浙江卷)Wewillstartat6o'clockearlyinthemorningfromtheschoolgate.②(2016·天津卷)Howtimeflies!2．主语＋谓语(及物动词)＋宾语该句型特点为：谓语动词均为实义动词，都是主语发出的动作，但不能表达完整的意思，后面必须跟宾语(宾语可以由名词、代词、动名词、不定式等来充当)，即动作的承受者，才能使意思完整。①(2017·北京卷)YoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople.②(2017·北京卷)Thestudentsandteacherssharedagreattime.3．主语＋系动词＋表语这就是常说的主系表结构。此句式侧重说明主语是什么或怎么样，谓语动词需用系动词(主要是be动词)，表语多为形容词，也可以是名词、介词短语、不定式及分词等。①(2017·课标全国卷Ⅰ)YouaresodiligentandIamgladtoteachyou.②(2017·北京卷)I'mhappytoreceiveyourletterandknowyou'recomingtoChina.4．主语＋谓语(及物动词)＋间接宾语＋直接宾语该句型中的谓语动词必须跟两个宾语才能表达完整的意思：一个是表示人的间接宾语；一个是表示物的直接宾语。一般间接宾语在前面，直接宾语在后面。①(2018·课标全国卷Ⅱ)Youcangiveussomevaluablesuggestionsabouttheshortfilm.②(2017·北京卷)Thatsurelygaveusagreatsenseofachievement.5．主语＋谓语(及物动词)＋宾语＋宾语补足语该句型中的动词虽然是及物动词，但是只跟一个宾语还不能表达完整的意思，必须加上一个补充成分来说明宾语，才能使意思完整。宾语补足语是用来补充说明宾语的情况的，直接跟在宾语之后。①(2016·课标全国卷Ⅲ)Ifnot，letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.②(2015·北京卷)What'sworse，somedrivers，cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkitvitaltoobeytrafficrules.(二)考场作文常见的“3类错误”第一类词汇类错误1．单词拼写错误误：Inadition，Ihaveastrongteamspirit.改正：In________，Ihaveastrongteamspirit.addition2．词形变化错误误：Manypeopleexpressedastrongpreferancefortheoriginalplan.改正：Manypeopleexpressedastrong_____________fortheoriginalplan.3．词类使用错误误：Thepurposeoftheprogramistomakeourschoolbeautifully.改正：Thepurposeoftheprogramistomakeourschool__________.preferencebeautiful第二类语法类错误1．时态错误误：Theotherday，Ihappentoreadyouradforaserverinanewspaper.改正：Theotherday，I__________toreadyouradforaserverinanewspaper.happened2．语态错误误：What'smore，somestatusoffamouspeoplewillset_uptoencourageustoworkharder.改正：What'smore，somestatusoffamouspeoplewill________toencourageustoworkharder.3．非谓语动词使用错误误：Ihopeallthepeoplecometothelibrarybehavethemselveswhileenjoyreading.改正：Ihopeallthepeople__________tothelibrarybehavethemselveswhile__________reading.besetupcomingenjoying第三类结构类错误1．纯汉语式思维和汉语式语序误：Recentlyourvillagehastakenplacegreatchanges.改正：__________________________________________________.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourvillagerecently2．句子成分残缺误：Therewerehundredsofstudentscouldn'tgotoschoolbecausetheywerepoor.改正：___________________________________________________________________________________.Therewerehundredsofstudentswhocouldn'tgotoschoolbecausetheywerepoor3．句子成分多余误：Recently，ineverymorningandevening，manypeoplegathertodanceinourcommunitysquare.改正：_________________________________________________________________________________.Recently，everymorningandevening，manypeoplegathertodanceinourcommunitysquare技法三词汇要“美”，妙语要“多”(一)运用高级词汇三原则1．标新立异恰当地使用一些蕴含感情色彩或其他考生不容易想到的高级词汇，会彰显自己的水平。①Ifinallycameoutofthecontestasthefirstprizewinner.→Eventually/Atlast，Iwonfirstprizeofthecontest.②I'llthankyouifyouthinkaboutmysuggestion.→I'llappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionintoconsideration.③We'lltryourbesttoimprovetheworkingconditions.→We'llsparenoeffortstopromotetheworkingconditions.(2014·山东卷标准范文)2．短语优先写作中，要想写出“亮点”就要注意挖掘自己现存的词汇潜力。多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，会使短文内容丰富，表达更有力度，从而增添文采。①Yourartskillsareexcellentandadmirable，whichimpressedmegreatly.→Yourartskillsareexcellentandadmirable，whichleftmeadeepimpression.②Weshouldtrytoimproveourselvesthroughlearningandprepareforthefuture.→Weshouldtakepainstoimproveourselvesthroughlearningandgetpreparedforthefuture.(2015·福建卷书面表达)3．手法多样在表达相同或相近的意思时，要尽量地避免过多地使用同一个单词，用其他相应的词或短语来代替，这样能让阅卷老师感觉到你词汇量丰富。实在找不到，可以变更说法，“曲径通幽”或许会有更好的效果。①Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate...Ifyouwanttoparticipate，[e-mail].→Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate...Ifyouwanttojoin，[e-mail].(2016·课标全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)②Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavedifferentwaystodealwithsuchasituation.→Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavevariouswaystodealwithsuchasituation.(二)高分必备的亮点词汇1．第一first→tobegin/startwith/inthebeginning2．第二second→inaddition/what'smore3．最后finally→lastbutnotleast4．总之inaword→tosumup/inconclusion/insummary5．但是but→however6．机会chance→opportunity7．现在now→atpresent8．考虑consider→takeintoaccount/consideration9．喜欢like→befondof10．充足的enough→adequate11．影响effect→haveaneffecton/makeadifference12．最终finally→eventually/intheend13．勤奋的hardworking→diligent14．帮助help→assist/rescue15．很快soon→afterawhile/inaflash/immediately16．后果result→consequence17．得到get→obtain18．拒绝refuse→deny/turndown19．应该should→besupposedto20．缺点shortcoming→drawback/disadvantage21．理解understand→makesenseof/figureout22．相信believe→beconvinced23.使用use→employ/makeuseof24．艰难的difficult→painstaking25．不知道don'tknow→beataloss26．种类繁多allkindsof→awidevariety27．但是but→however/otherwise28．导致leadto→resultin29．厌烦beboredwith→befedupwith30．忙于bebusyin/with→beoccupiedin/with31．发生happen→occur/comeabout32．几乎不hardly→barely/rarely33．想出thinkof→