高考应用文写作指导之建议信

高考英语应用文写作指导之建议(recommendationletter)Objectives:2.Masteranduseusefulexpressions,structureandformworkoftherecommendationletter.3.Completeawritingofrecommendationletter.Inthisclass,wewillbeableto1.Knowhowtoanalyzethematerialoftherecommendationletter.高考常见的应用文类型有：信件类建议信其他类别通知邀请信海报道歉信广告申请信招领祝贺信演讲稿感谢信留言条投诉信发言稿咨询信电子邮件二找三列一审四写五润纠正错误和润色文章写建议信找结构列要点审题目建议信的写作步骤Sample：假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。思考的问题样题分析第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？（type）要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？(order)动作是什么时候发生的？(tense)第一人称建议信对英语学习给出建议说理的逻辑性一般现在时第一步：审题目如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象结构三部分1.Heading点题——一两个句子；概括性2.Body陈述事实，提出建议，给出理由；层次分明3.Ending总结全文，表明希望；呼应主题第二步：找结构readEnglishaloudeveryday/spendoneorhalfhourinreadingEnglishbooksWatchEnglishmovies/films.第三步：列要点listentoEnglishsongs/learntosingEnglishsongs第三步：列要点practiceyourspokenEnglishwithanative-speaker.Howtobeginanrecommendationletter?第一段：开头是成功的一半…Dear….:(开门见山，点明意图）(1)IknowyouhavesometroublesinlearningEnglishafterreadingyourletters.Therearesometipsforyou.(2)IamgladtohearyouwanttolearnEnglishwell.Inmyopinion,..(3)IamwritingtosharemyadvicewithyouonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Itwillbewiseofyouifyoutakethefollowingactions.读了你的信后，我知道你在学习英语上有困难….我很高兴听到你想要学好英语.在我看来,…我写信和你分享如何学好英语方面的建议。如果你能采取以下措施，将是明智的选择。第四步：写作文建议信重点第二段：⑴说明建议的内容；（是什么）⑵提出具体建议的原因；（为什么）⑶指出采纳建议的益处。（怎么样）注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。Tolistyoursuggestions亲们，别东拉西扯，闹糊涂啊First,…Secondly,…Finally,…Ontheonehand,…ontheotherhand,…Whatismore/besides/moreover/furthermoreTobeginwith,…Inaddition,…Lastbutnotleast(注意连贯和逻辑，合理使用连接词或短语）Aperfectending!第三段：完美的Ending，可不是说灰姑娘的故事哦。•Inaconclusion/inaword（结论简洁，指明观点）(1)Practicemakesperfect！NothingisdifficultIfyouputyourmindintoit.(2)Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful.(3)Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeyourimprovements.适当运用模板DearLiHua,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaid+你碰到的问题.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,____________,because________.Secondly,youshould________________,because_________.Thirdly,you’dbetter___________________.Onlyinthiswaycanyou__________.What’smore,_____.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx第五步：该错误、美文章Summary一审二找三列五美四写时态人称题材顺序主题第二篇建议信：对于我的朋友花大量时间上网，耽误学习的建议信建议内容：1）和他面对面地交流、沟通；2）给她发邮件或短信；3）告诉他学习的重要性。•Practice:DearLiHua,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaidyourfriendspendsmostofhistimechattingontheInternetandoftengoestotheInternetcafeinsteadofattendingclasses.Youreallywanttohelphimoutbutyoudon’tknowwhattodowithit/howtohelphim.Well.Iwouldliketogivemyadviceforyou.Myadviceareasfollows.Firstly,Ithinkyoushouldhaveatalkwithhimsincerely.Becauseifyourfriendskipsclasses,heisnotgoingtodowellatschool.Secondly,youcane-mailhimorleaveamessage.Thirdly,youshouldtellhimtheimportanceofstudy.Becauseeveryoneofusjusthasonechancetogotohighschool,heshouldstudyhardandnotwastetimeinindulgingontheInternet.Inaword,Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,EditorThankYou!假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信中李华提到自己是高一的学生，在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。建议：1.课堂上认真听老师讲课；2.多和同学和老师用英语交流：3.坚持每天记单词，读英语课文；多练、多问等。4.培养对英语学习的兴趣爱好。•Homework:DearLiHua,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem.Inyourletter,yousaidyouhavesomedifficultiesinlearningEnglish.IthinkIcangiveyousomeusefulsuggestions.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstly,youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass.Secondly,thebestwaytolearnEnglishisreadingitwellandknowingthemeaningsofit.Thirdly,youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers,whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities.What’smore,themostimportantadviceisreadingEnglishbooksbeforetheclassandaftertheclass.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：⑴参加中文学习班；⑵看中文书刊、电视；⑶学唱中文歌曲；⑷交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。DearPeter,I'mgladtohearthatyoucanaskformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua•Homework:DearPeter,I'msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblemsonhowtolearnChinesewell.IthinkIcangiveyousomeusefulsuggestions.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,becauseyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourclassmates.Second,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersinChinese.Third,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingit,you'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanmakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.LiHuaDearWangNan,I’msorrytohearthatyouarefeelingannoyedthesedaysbecauseyouarenotabletocommunicatewithotherseffectively.Iwillgiveyousomeusefuladvice.Myadviceareasfollows.First,asasayinggoes,everymanhashisfaults,Inoticesomepeoplearoundusarenotgoodatcommunication.Soyoudon’thavetoworrytoomuchaboutit.Second,goodcommunicationisnotonlyhelpfultoourstudybutalsogoodforoursuccess.Third,behonestandfranktothosewhomyoutalkto,soyoucouldbeunderstoodbyotherseasily.What’smore,you’dbettertrytounderstandotherswhenth