MBA-作文(-大作文讲解)

Writing大作文大作文大纲要求•大作文–说明文或议论文–150字（标点符号不计算在内）–图画、图表或文字–15分评分标准•13-15分•很好得完成了试题的任务，对目标读者产生了预期的效果–包含所有的内容–使用丰富的语法结构和词汇–语言自然流畅，语法错误极少–有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰–格式与语域恰当贴切评分标准大作文评分重点在于内容的完事性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的多样性及语言的准确性。英语（二）大作文年份考查形式主题2010柱状图手机用户量的变化2011柱状图不同汽车品牌市场占有率的变化2012表格不同年龄段员工工作满意度的差异2013柱状图不同年级大学生兼职状况的差异2014柱状图中国城城乡人口数量的变化2015饼形图评春节期间居民的开销比例2016饼形图高校学生旅行目的调查篇章结构•三段式Para.1•图表描述•解读态势3-4句•引证态势Para.2•评论（分析原因、利弊或意义）5句Para.3•结论或评价•预测或建议2句•Para.1:–图表描述–解读态势–引证态势Para.1•1.Asisvividlyrevealedinthetable,somenoticeablechangeshavecomeupasregards_____(主题词e.g.theemploymentsatisfaction)•2.Itcanbeseenclearlyfromthetablethatsignificantchangeshavearisenintermsof______(主题词e.g.theemploymentsatisfaction)Para.1•Table(表格)•Graph/Chart（图表）•Diagram/barchart(柱状图)•Piechart(饼状图)Para.1•解读势态：•1.Accordingtothefiguresprovidedbythetable,onecanseethatthenumberof________(相关人或物)hasbeenonasteadyriseallthetime.•2.Basedonthedataoffered,wecanfindthatthenumberof________(相关人或物)hasbeenincreasingsteadily.Para.1•Ona…rise处于上升状态•Onadecline处于下降状态•Steady稳定的•Rapid快速的•Dramatic/sharp急剧的•Slight轻微的•Allthetime一直的Para.1•Number数量•Percentage百分比•Share份额•Ratio比率•Proportion比例Para.1•引证态势1：•1.In____(年)，thenumberwasatthebottomend,onlyabout____(数字)，whilewithinnomorethanseveralyearsitjumpedto_____(数字).•2.Intheyearof____(年),thenumberwasmerely_____(数字),whereas_____(数字)yearslater,itclimbedtomorethan_____(数字)Para.1•引证态势2：•1.Meanwhile,however,the______(对比对象)have/haswitnessedasharpdecline,reaching____(数字)in___(年头).•2.Incontrast,however,thenumberof____(对比对象)hasremainedconstantalltheway.•Para.2:–总述–分述Para.2总述---有因可析1.Itisofnodifficultytocomeupwithsomepossiblefactorsforthesechanges.2.Whataccountsforthisscenario?Atleast,formypart,threefactorscontributetoit.3.Thissituationcanbetracedtoamultitudeoffactors;thefundamentalones,however,canbesoughtasfollows.Para.2•分述---因1•1.Firstandforemost,withtherapiddevelopmentofoureconomyandsociety,___(句子).•2.Tobeginwith,thesechangesarecloselyrelatedto_____(名词短语)•3.Atthetopofthelistis____(名词短语)Para.2•例证---因1•1.AccordingtoarecentInternetsurvey,approximately___%of____(相关人或物)___(谓语).•2.Basedonarecentofficialreport,roughly___%of____(相关人或物)___(谓语).Para.2•分述---因2•1.Inaddition,wemustadmitthatthistendencyalsohasalottodowith____(名词短语).•2.What’smore,thereisnodenyingthatthecurrentscenario,toalargeextent,resultfrom____(名词短语)Para.2•分述---因3•1.Lastbutnotleast,______(名词短语)isanothersignificantfactorthatcannotbeignored.•2.Finally,wemustrecongizethat____(名词短语)producesacontributingeffectuponthecurrentcondition.Para.2•Para.3:–结论或评价–预测或建议Para.3•结论或评价•1.Takingintoaccountwhathasbeenarguedsofar,asoundconclusioncanbedrawnthatthisscenarioisnothingbutablessing.•2.Asdiscussedabove,itisnosurprisetoseethecurrentscenario.Para.3•预测或建议•1.AndIfirmlybelievethathistendencywillcontinueintheforthcomingyears.•2.Consequently,urgentactionsmustbetakenbytherelevantauthoritiestoeliminatethishellassoonaspossible.Para.32015真题•Directions:•Writeanessaybasedonthefollowingchart.youshould•1）interpretthechartand•2）giveyourcomments.•Youshouldwriteabout150wordsontheANSWERSHEET.(15points).2015真题2015真题•Para.1图表描述与解读–图表总述：有关居民礼物的支出比例–具体描述1：新年礼物的支出比例–具体描述2：交通、宴会和其他的支出比例–主题解读：国人对人际关系的重视2015真题•Para.2发表评论，对图表现象做原因解读–总述：三个原因导致该现象–原因1：收入增加导致社交投入增多–原因2：中国由来已久的交际传统–原因3：缓解社会孤独感的心理需求2015真题•Para.3给出结论和建议–结论：该现象的出现并不令人吃惊–建议：保持警醒以防变质为享乐主义2015真题•Thepiechartabovemanifestlydepictsthestructureofcitizens’expenditureontheSpringFestival’scelebrationsinacertainChinescity.Asisrevealedbythechart,thepercentageofexpensesonNewYeargiftsisthelargestamongallthefourcategories,accountingfor40%.Incomparison,themoneyspentontransportation,feasts,andtheresttakesupa20%sharerespectively.ItgoeswithoutsayingthatthechartismeanttoemphasizeourChinesepeople’saccentuponinterpersonalrelationships.2015真题Frommystandpoint,atleastthreefundamentalfactorsareresponsibleforthisscene.Tostart,itmustbeadmittedthatChinesepeople,withthevastimprovementoftheirincome,nowadaysareabletoinvestmoreinsocializingwithothers.Besides,toexchangepresentswithrelativesorfriendsduringthelunarNewYearisalongestablishedtraditioninourland.What’smorethegaietyoftheFestivalfromgathering,dining,andexchanginggiftscangreatlyrelievepeople’sincreasingsocialisolation.2015真题Inviewoftheanalysis,it’soflittlesurprisetoseethisphenomenoninthecurrentera.Ontheotherhand,however,everyoneofusoughttostayalerttoitsdegenerationintomaterialism.