大学英语四级优秀作文

大学英语四级考试优秀范文Part1:2010年12月1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2.为了让孩子独立，父母应该……HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent①Itisbeyondreproachthatchildrenarealwaysconsideredtheappleofparents”eyes,whichisespeciallytrueinsingle-childfamilies.②However,manyparentsgosofarastotakeovereverythingfortheirlifeandstudyeventotheirfuture.③Itisnotunusualtowitnessthatanincreasingnumberofchildrenareaccompaniedbyparentontheirfirstdayincollege.④Ideclareinnouncertaintermsthatitwillendupwiththechildren”slackofindependence.Insuchaworldfulloffiercecompetition,beingindependentbecomesessentialforawould-besuccess.Thus,⑤whatshouldparentsdo?Inmyhumbleopinion,⑥ontheonehand,parentsshouldraisechildreninafree-rangingwayinsteadofbeing“helicopter”parents,whoalwaysseemtohoverovertheirchildren;⑦ontheotherhand,parentsshouldteachchildrentoberesponsiblefortheirownbehaviorsinsteadofmonopolizingeverything.⑧Iclingtothebeliefthatonlywhenparentsrealizewhatisbetterfortheirchildrenandcaretheminarightway,cantheyhelpchildrendevelopindependence.精彩点评：①引入话题：孩子是父母的掌上明珠。②自然过渡：但是，有些父母却为孩子包办一切。③引用生活中的实例，证实父母为孩子包办并非空穴来风。④分析包办所带来的后果。⑤提出问题：父母应该如何做？⑥和⑦具体阐述解决问题的策略，层次分明。⑧简要总结前文所提的具体侧咧，是文章结尾不显突兀。加分亮点：beyondreproach无可非议beaccompaniedby…有……陪同declareinnouncertainterms毫不讳言fiercecompetition激烈的竞争essential至关重要的clingtothebelief坚信Part2:2010年6月1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2.出现这种现象的原因是……3.为了改变这种状况，我认为……DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpellingNowadays,①anincreasingnumberofstudentsseemtoattachlessimportancetospellinginEnglishlearning.②Thus,numerousmisspellingsappearintheirpapers,③andwhat”sworse,awell-organizedessayisthereforetotallyimpossible.④Therearevariousreasonsresponsibleforthisembarrassingsituation.⑤Foronthing,muchmorestudentsgiveprioritiestooralEnglishatthecostofdosinglessspellingexercises,letalonereflectonwhattheylearnedtheotherday.⑥Foranother,manyteachersputsomuchemphasisoncommunicationandgrammarinteachingthattheyseldomhighlightspelling,andoccasionallyworsestill,theythemselvesarecaughtinspelling.Tochangethissituation,⑦Iholdtothebeliefthatstudentsandteachersshouldworktogether.⑧Ontheonehand,studentsshouldstopcomplainingaboutspellings,andtheyshouldrealizecorrectspellingisamustinlearningEnglish.⑨Ontheotherhand,teachersshouldpaymoreattentiontospellinginteaching,forexample,focusingonpronunciationandwordformation.Onlyviajointeffortcanstudentsgainmuchgroundinspelling.精彩点评：①开门见山，描述现象：很多学生不重视拼写。②和③使用thus,andwhat”sworse说明该现象造成的结果：拼写错误连篇，文章结构混乱。④本段分析造成上述结果的原因。⑤和⑥foronthing…foranother…具体列举不同的原因，层次分明。⑦概括提出解决问题的方法。⑧和⑨使用ontheonehand…ontheotherhand…结构，针对上述成因，提出两种对应的解决方案。最后结尾常用的倒装句，总结前文。加分亮点：embarrassing令人为难的，尴尬的giveprioritiesto认为优先Putemphasison强调Part3：2009年12月1.建设绿色校园十分重要2.绿色校园不仅是指绿色的环境……3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该……CreatingaGreenCampusDuringrecentyears,①thetopicofagreencampus,whichhasarousedwidelypublicattention,isbecomingmoreandmorepopular.②Undoubtedly,agreencampus,theindispensablepartforthedevelopmentofcollegestudents,hasaprofoundimpactonbothindividualsandsociety,foritssignificancecannotbeneglectedAgreenenvironment,ratherthananythingelse,playsadecisiveroleinthegrowthofcollegestudents.Meanwhile,③itshouldalsobementionedthatapreencampusincludesnotonlytheplaceswherethestudentslive,butalsothementalenvironment.Withoutgreensurrounding,thesoulofstudentswouldbenotaspureaswewish.Inthatcase,④innoplaceotherthancampusshouldweattempttomakeagreenatmosphere.Duetotheseriousnessofthesituation,itiscrucialforustotakeeffectivemeasurestocreateagreencampus.⑤Inthefirstplace,it”sessentialthatlawandregulationsshouldbeworkedoutandenforcedbythegovernmentandauthorities.⑥Furthermore,itishightimethatweenhancedtheawarenessofthestudentsthemselves.⑦Onlyinthiswaycanwegetsatisfactoryresults.Withthesemeasurestaken,itisreasonableforustobelievethatagreencampuswillbeachievedinthenearfuture.精彩点评：①开门见山，提出绿色校园的话题已经引起社会关注。②点名绿色校园的重要意义。③用notonly..butalso句型介绍绿色校园的内涵和外延。④半倒装句的运用恰到好处，引出下文要阐述的内容，即社会各界应行动起来，推动绿色校园的建设。⑤和⑥结构连接词inthefirstplace和furthermore的运用，使得论述清晰明了。⑦结尾常用的倒装句，总结前文。加分亮点：undoubtedly毋庸置疑地indispensable必不可少的，必需的significance意义Part4:2009年6月1.越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是……2.有人认为这样做会带来一些问题3.在我看来…FreeAdmissionstoMuseums?①Recently,moreandmoremuseumsareopentothepublicfreeofcharge.Bydoingso,theycanattractmorevisitors,andofferthevisitorsmoreopportunitiestoexploreandgeteasyaccesstotheworldofhistory,cultureandknowledge.②However,somepeopleviewthatthepracticealsobringsproblemsandconcerns.Theyarerightinasense.③Foronething,theirmainconcernisthatwithmorevisitors,itispossiblethatobjectsexhibitedcangetdamagedmoreeasily.④Foranother,itbecomesahugeeconomicburdenformuseumstorunasusualwithoutanyprofitsfromthevisitors.⑤Inmyopinion,Iamabsolutelyinfavorofthispractice.Thereasonliesinthefactthatthegovernmentshouldprovidemoreopportunitiesforcitizenstoexploreandgetaccesstotheknowledgeworld.Moreover,kidsandteenagerscanacquireknowledgeinamorevividwayinthemuseums.⑥Ihopeallthepeoplecansharethesamenationaltreasuresinmorefreemuseums.精彩点评：①开门见山，提出论点。并说明这样做的目的。②话题一转，阐明这个举措的弊端。③和④运用关联词Foronething…Foranother…,使文章层次分明。⑤利用inmyopinion衔接文章，引出自己的观点。⑥最后提出希望，总结全文。加分亮点：getaccessto接触infavorof赞同vivid生动的鲜明的Part5:2008年12月1.一次性塑料袋曾广