写作教程第二版(邹申)-unit-3-Places--Development-by-Space

MadebyPizza.C站长站素材OMArkeyWorksUnit3DevelopmentbySpaceMadebyPizza.CUnitObjectives1.Becomefamiliarwithfeatureandorganizationalpatternofideasbasedonspaceorspatialrelationshipsinparagraphwriting;2.Knowhowtodevelopdescriptionaccordingtospacearrangement;3.BeabletoconstructaparagraphbyarrangingdetailswithlinkingwordsoflocationanddirectionMadebyPizza.CDevelopmentbySpace•Beforewebegintodescribeaplace,whetheritisalargecountryorasmallroom,wehavetodecideontheorderinwhichtonamethedifferentpartsordetails.Forthiscase,weshouldfindoutthespacerelationshipsbetweenthemandarrangeourdescriptionaccordingly.MadebyPizza.CGroupWorkWhat’syouroverallimpressionoftheuniversity?Whichbuildingorlocationcatchesyourattentionfirst?Whichplacedoyouwanttodescribenext?Andthen?Whatdoyouwanttodescribelast?Whatorderdoesyourdescriptionfollow?Whydoyouchoosethisorder?MadebyPizza.C1.Importantlandmark,anddescribeotherlocationsinrelationtoit.2.Stressanboundariesofanarea3.Alongtheroad4.Accordingtonorthsouthorwest-east5.OutsidetoinsideinsidetooutsideTipsMadebyPizza.CTian’anmenSquareGoldenWaterBridgeMonumentMuseumMemorialHallGreatHallMadebyPizza.CgatepathlawnsflowerbedwoodpavilionstonebenchespondlawnsMadebyPizza.C•Wearegoingtobuildasmallgardenoncampus.•Thestraightnorthwardpathinsidethegateleadstoaconventionalpavilionwhichinfrontofsomedelicatestonebenches.•Verdantlawnsareatthebothsidesofthepath.•Thereisasmallpondinlaysthelawnatsoutheastpart.•Ifyouchoosetheotherpathgoesacrossthegardenfromwesttoeast,thenyoucanenjoyluxuriantlygreenwoodbesidesthepavilionatnorthwesternpartandappreciateabeautifulflowerbedatnortheast.MadebyPizza.CAdditionalWork1.Bath(bathtub)2.Plug3.Shower4.Towel-rail5.Bath-mat6.Showercurtain7.Wash-basin8.Face-flanneltowel9.Nail-brush10.Razor11.Toilet(lavatory)12.Cistern13.Flushinghandle14.toilet-paperMadebyPizza.CDevelopmentbySpace1.theCaspianSea里海里海位于亚洲与欧洲交界，是世上最大及蓄水量最多之湖泊，面积37万1千平方公里(143,000平方英里)，体积78,200立方公里，最深处1,025米，平均深度209米，湖面海拔负28米，最深处湖床海拔负1,054米，也是内流湖、咸水湖、海迹湖。2.AsiaMinor–Anatolia小亚细亚土耳其的亚洲部分被称为安纳托利亚，也称小亚细亚。安纳托利亚位于平均海拔高度１０００米的高原上，山脉环绕四周，夏季的高原到处都是种植的谷物。这里白昼炎热，夜晚寒冷，即使在夏天也须穿御寒服。3.Phoenicians–腓尼基人腓尼基人是历史上一个古老的民族，自称为闪美特人，又称闪族人。生活在今天地中海东岸相当于今天的黎巴嫩和叙利亚沿海一带，他们曾经建立过一个高度文明的古代国家。公元前10世纪至公元前8世纪是腓尼基城邦的繁荣时期MadebyPizza.CSummary–Sample21.Itisadescriptionof“mygrandfather’sbarn”2.Deplorable–specificwordsandarrangesthesedescriptivedetailsinanaturalorderoftheirphysicallayout:exteriortotheinteriorofthebarn.3.outside–fromtoptothebottom4.inside–fromlefttotherightandtotheoverhead5.Thereadercanvisualizethesceneveryvividlyandgrasptherelationshipsoftheobjects.MadebyPizza.CMadebyPizza.CsuitMadebyPizza.CKeysforSample3P261.Anathlete’sroom2.Closet/dresser/accordingtothespatialorder/thewriterpresentsanorderlydescriptionjustashiseyemightmovefromrighttotheleftaroundtheroom.Closet–tomyrightCap–ontheshelfBed–thefarwallLamp-onthetopofanightstandtotheleftofthebedSchedule–onthewallabovethenightstandDesk–theleftwallMedals–ontheshelvesWindow–nexttothedeskDresser–betweenthewindowandtheleftcornerMadebyPizza.CSummary–Sample3•1.Displayanartisticgroupingofdetailsinspace•2.Thingsarerelatedtoeachotherbytheorderinwhichtheyareplacedinspace•3.Withtheuseofspecificspacesignals,weareledbythewritertoexperiencetheroomvividlyfromrighttoleft,fromlargertosmalleronesasifwewereactually“seeing”it.MadebyPizza.CLinkingDevicesP28Spatialsignalsareoftenusedtohelporganizedetailsindescriptiveparagraph.E.G.inside,intheright-handside,outside,intheoppositeend,downthecenter,attheendof,theleft-handThewriterorganizestheparagraphinaparticularorder.Readerswillnotgetlostwhilethedescriptionproceeds.Question1MadebyPizza.CDepressingPuppiesbehindglassUnpleasantsmellChainedbirdsRowsofcagesDirtytubcontainingturtlesStuffatmosphereKittensinthewindowSoundsofcagedanimalsDroppingsandurineonnewspaperLogicalarrangementTransitionaldevicesMadebyPizza.C•4.•sight,touch,hearingandsmell.•Throughtherichperceptionsthereaderwillgainafullerandmorevividpictureofthescene•5.•Sight:black-and-whitekittenspiledtogether;alineoflargewoodenperches;parrotsfluttertheirclippedwings;stagnant-lookingwater;motionlessturtles•Sound:clawing;shufflingsound•Smell:unpleasantmixtureofstrongchemicaldeodorizers;urine-soakednewspapers;mustysawdust•Touch:lickthehumanhandsMadebyPizza.CWords&Phraseswhere,inwhich,under,below,beneath,down,over,above,along,through,north(en),totheleft,nextto,ontheoppositeside,totheleft(right),inback,nearby,beyond,intheforeground,inthebackground…MadebyPizza.CSummary–Sample21.Itisadescriptionof“mygrandfather’sbarn”2.Deplorable–specificwordsandarrangesthesedescriptivedetailsinanaturalorderoftheirphysicallayout:exteriortotheinteriorofthebarn.3.outside–fromtoptothebottom4.inside–fromlefttotherightandtotheoverhead5.Thereadercanvisualizethesceneveryvividlyandgrasptherelationshipsoftheobjects.MadebyPizza.CReviewtheUnit1.Verticalorder2.Horizontalorder3.Depthorder4.Circularorder5.Center-to-circumferenceorderMadebyPizza.CKeysforExercises•P30–3•3614752•Relationship:Primarily,theorganizationoftheparagraphrepresentsmovementingeographicalspace•P31-4•1).