广东省2014高考英语一轮短文改错书面表达训练(15)

-1-广东省2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（15）附参考范文短文改错----（全国II）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。George,It'sbeenaweekafterweleftyourfamilyandwearenow76._______backhome.Thankyouverymuchforshowingthemaround77.______yourcityandprovidingusforthewonderfulmeals.After78._______wesaidgoodbyetoyou,wewenttoWashingtonD.C.,79._______wherewestayedforthreedays.Mybrotherwassomuchfond80._______ofthemuseumstherethathebeggedmyparentstostaying81．________anothercoupleofday.However,myfatherhadtoreturnto82.________workonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.It83．________wasreallyaniceexperience.Ifyou'dliketomaketripto84._______ourcitysomeday,Iwillbebetterthanhappytobeyourguide.85._______Yours,Mike76.after---since77.them---us78.for---with79.正确80.去掉much81.staying---stay82.day----days83.fly---flew84.trip前a85.better----more***************************************************************结束-2-表格提示类4.你校同学进行了一场有关高考英语听力测试的讨论。讨论的主题是：高考英语测试中的听力部分该不该取消？请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。一些同学认为不应该取消另一些同学认为应该取消听是语言的四项基本技能之一，不能忽视听是获取信息的重要途径之一国际合作日益增多，听说能力应加强考试中各地收听效果好坏不一、不公平英语教师和语音设备城乡差异过大今后并非人人都要与外国人口头交流注意：1．文章的起始句已给出。2．词数：100左右（不包括已给的起始句）。3．参考词汇：取消—cancel国际合作—internationalcooperationThestudentsofourschoolhadadiscussionaboutwhetherlisteningtestintheNationalMatriculationEnglishTestshouldbekeptorcanceled.Somestudentsthinkthatlisteningtestshouldnotbecanceled.Theyinsistlisteningisamongthefourbasicskills.Wethereforecannotignoreit.Besides,listeningisoneoftheimportantchannelsforustogetinformationfromtheoutsideworld.Soitshouldbestrengthenedtodaywheninternationalcooperationisbecomingmoreandmorefrequent.Butothersdon’tagree.Theythinknoteveryonehastocommunicatewithforeignersinthefuture.Moreover,listeningtestisunfairtothestudentsintheareaswhereradiosignalscannotbepickedupeffectively.Andforcertainreasons,thereisabigdifferenceinteachersandequipmentbetweenthecountrysideandthecity.***************************************************************结束短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。(2012·唐山三模）Onlineshoppingisincreasingpopularamongpeopleinrecentyears.Somepeoplelikedtobuygoodsonline.AndIdon’tlikeit,becauseonlineshoppingislessreliablethanthetraditionalsale.Firstly,somedishonestmerchantofferconsumers-3-tofalseinformationonline.Secondly,consumerscan’tfeeltheitemsthatisusuallypresentedbymeansofpictures.Thismeanstheitemsdeliveringmaydifferfromwhichconsumersexpect.Asaresult,theymayriskreturningtheitemsatourownexpense.Thirdly,theitemsmightbedamagedduringdelivery.Inword,onlineshoppingisn’treliableatall.答案解析******短文改错Onlineshoppingisincreasingpopularamongpeopleinrecentyears.Someincreasinglypeoplelikedtobuygoodsonline.AndIdon’tlikeit,becauseonlineshoppingislesslikeButreliablethanthetraditionalsale.Firstly,somedishonestmerchantofferconsumerstomerchantsfalseinformationonline.Secondly,consumerscan’tfeeltheitemsthatisusuallyarepresentedbymeansofpictures.Thismeanstheitemsdeliveringmaydifferfromdeliveredwhichconsumersexpect.Asaresult,theymayriskreturningtheitemsatourownwhattheirexpense.Thirdly,theitemsmightbedamagedduringdelivery.In∧word,onlineshoppingisn’treliableatall.a**********************************************************结束表格提示类5.请以MyfavoriteNewspaper为题用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍21世纪报，短-4-文应包括下面表格中所提供的内容。报纸名称及使用语言21stCentury,英文报纸出版地点及出版周期北京，每周一期版面内容每周新闻，今日世界，语言课堂，体育与音乐，学生报导特色图文并茂目的学习英语词汇，提高英语水平，获取各种信息效果广为人知，深受喜爱MyFavoriteNewspaper21stCenturyismyfavoritenewspaper.ItisanEnglishlanguagenewspaperwhichispublishedinBeijingeachweek.Ithassectionsofdifferentkinds,includingNewsoftheweek,theWorldToday,LanguageClass,SportsandMusicandStudentsReport.Thereareplentyofbeautifulpicturesandinterestingarticlesinit.Ienjoyreadingthepaper.IreadittoimprovemyEnglish.Ihavelearntalotofnewwordsandusefulexpressions.Besides,Icangetinformationaboutdifferentthings,frompoliticstosportsandmusic.21stCenturyisverypopularwiEnglishlearners.Idoloveit.*********************************************************结束【重庆南开中学高】第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）请对标有题号的每一行作出判断，每一行只有一个错误，按下列情况改下。此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。DearMrs.Smith,Iappreciateyourhelpverywell.Onthefirstdayof76．thecamp,youcameuptomyselfwhileIwassittingalone.77．Afterthat,youalwaysgavemespeciallyattentionand78．inspiredmetojoininactivity.Asaresult,Igradually79．gottoknowothercampers.Becausethehelpyougaveme80．thatsummer,my.lifechanged.Igainsomuchconfidencethat81．Iwentbacktoschoolasnewperson.Mygradesimproved.I82．becameactivebutmadenewfriends.Yesterday,Igotaletter83．thatwassaidIwasadmittedtoacollege.Iamproudofit.Ijust84．-5-wanttothankyouforhelpingmebecomingadifferentperson.85．YoursBob改错76．well改为much77．myself改为me78．specially改为speci