Howtowritealetterforadvice

Howtowritealetterforadvice如何写建议信•写作指导英文建议信属于应用文写作范畴，是向征询建议者就某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。高考中此类信件多属于半开放性作文，要求考生根据所给的材料(多为征求建议信)，提出合理化建议，或者给出有针对性的解决办法。建议信要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，并且提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要委婉礼貌。此外，建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、语言要具有合理性和说服力。三段式：首段——开门见山，表明写作意图。在本段中，写信人应该先简单介绍自己，然后陈述事由，表明写信的目的及原因。正文——委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告。末段——礼貌地总结并期盼对方的回复。如何给阅卷人更好的第一直观印象整体三部分：1.Heading：点题，一两个句子；慨括性；暗示性。2.Body：中心记述部分；层次分明。3.Ending：小结，呼应主题。•万能句式•开头常用句式Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…Iwouldliketosuggestthat…You’dbetter…/It’sbetterto…Youhaveaskedformyadviceon…andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.•表达建议常用句式Inmyopinion/AsfarasIamconcerned,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction…Whenitcomestosuchsituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushould…Asto…Isuggestthatyoushould…Foronething…,foranother…IfIwereyou,Iwould…Ithinkitisnecessary…Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyou…•结尾常用句式Ihopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/advicepractical/useful/helpful.Intheend,Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.•白金模板Dear____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto_____,andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.AsfarasIamconcerned,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions._____.Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou.Yours,RobertDearLucy,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_________(引出主题).Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto___________.Then,italsohelpsto______________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________________.Youcanalso____________.(此三句不同的句式提出建议)Asto_________,Isuggest____________(有时根据需要具体到某一反面).Inaddition,____________(其他建议).I'msure___________(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).I'mlookingforwardto_____________(表达愿望).Sincerelyyours,Robert•典题例练假如你是某英文报“PLEASETELLME”专栏的编辑Robert。某校高二年级学生Lucy因担心无法适应忙碌的高三生活而写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解2、提出建议并给出理由注意：词数120左右（信的开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。分析：第一步：审题题材：Aletter人称：Person(Thefirst/thirdperson…)时态：Tense(thesimplepresenttense)要点：…篇章结构：⑴说明建议的内容；⑵提出具体建议的原因；⑶指出采纳建议的益处。注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。第二步：搜索相关词组或句型问题：高二年级学生Lucy因担心无法适应忙碌的高三生活而写信向你求助。建议：应该如何适应，例如制定计划等。Actually,itiscommonformoststudentstobe（形式主语句型）anxiousaboutthebusyandtoughschoollifeofSeniorThree,so（and,so,or前面有逗号隔开，连接两个句子）youneedn’tworrytoomuch.Myadviceisasfollows.First，youshouldbeconfidentandoptimistic,whichisthebasisofachievingagoal.（定语从句）Secondly,yououghttomakeproperschedulesforyourstudiesandlife.Onlyifyouarrangethemreasonablycanyoumakeprogressinyourstudiesandlivehappily.(倒装)Thirdly,youneedtolearntosolveyourproblemsactively.Whenfacedwithdifficultiesinyourlife,（状语从句）youcanalwaysaskyourteachersorclassmatesforadvice,whichmaybeofgreathelptoyou.（定语从句）Ihopethatthesesuggestionswillwork.第三步：运用模板（范文）DearLucy,I’msorrytolearnthatyouarebecomingworriedabouttheapproachofSeniorThree.Actually,itiscommonformoststudentstobeanxiousaboutthebusyandtoughschoollifeofSeniorThree,soyouneedn’tworrytoomuch.Myadviceisasfollows.First,youshouldbeconfidentandoptimistic,whichisthebasisofachievingagoal.Secondly,yououghttomakeproperschedulesforyourstudiesandlife.Onlyifyouarrangethemreasonablycanyoumakeprogressinyourstudiesandlivehappily.Thirdly,youneedtolearntosolveyourproblemsactively.Whenfacedwithdifficultiesinyourlife,youcanalwaysaskyourteachersorclassmatesforadvice,whichmaybeofgreathelptoyou.Ihopethatthesesuggestionswillwork.Yours,Robert•课后习作假定你是李华，在一个英文网络论坛上，你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发贴（post）寻求帮助。请根据以下内容、写作要点和要求回帖。Hi,everyone,I’m17yearsoldandIamgoingtouniversitythisautumn.Butmymothercontinuestotreatmeasaseven-year-old.WhatshouldIdo?写作要点：1.告诉Grown-up要理解母亲2.给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议要求：1.短文须写在答题卡指定区域2.短文字数不少于80（不含写好的部分）3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯4.书写清晰、工整Q1.人称：___________,时态：_____________Q2.你联想到了什么好的词组/句子？首段——比如：It’scommonforteenagersto…/Astoyourproblem,Ihaveseveralsuggestionstoputforwardasfollows.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________正文——比如：firstofall…secondly…thirdly/finally/Lastbutnotleast______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Youshouldtrytounderstandyourmother,whoseintentionistocareforyou./Themoreyoucommunicatewithher,thebetteryouwillunderstandeachother._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________末段——比如：IdohopewhatImentionedabovecanhelpyou./__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Q3.快动起来，小单词们站错队了~-~①talkyourmotherwithmoretoit’sadvisablefirst_______________________________________________________________②heart-to-hearthelptalksyoueachotherunderstandbetter_______________________________________________________________③youlearntodosecondshouldyourwellownthings________________________________________________________,provingtoyourmotherthatyouarealreadya“grown-up”.④It’sevenbette