2015中考复习主题写作(8)

德州市陵城区义渡口镇初级中学英语组九年级1主题写作(八)交通安全篇安全问题主要涉及校园安全、交通安全等。此类试题常利用要点提示的方式来考查。1．Asstudents,weshouldkeepsafetyinmind.2．Inshort,safetymustcomefirst!3．Weshouldtryourbesttomakesurewearesafe.4．Ifweareindanger,wecancallthepoliceforhelpsothatwecankeepourselvessafe.5．Wemustrememberitisdangerousforustoswimintheriver.6．Weshouldalwayspayattentiontothetrafficonourwayhomeortoschool.为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高其自我保护能力，某校开展了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。词数：80词左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：becareful,online,danger,call…for,gobadHowtokeepsafe?Asteenagers,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Buthowcanwekeepourselvessafe?Herearesomeofmysuggestions.First，_________________________________【审题思路】1．明确主题：本文的主题是就“如何保持安全”这一话题根据要点提示进行阐述。2．写作要点：(1)慎重交友；(2)遇险报警；(3)安全饮食；(4)自己的观点。3．时态：一般现在时4.人称：第一人称【写作模板】德州市陵城区义渡口镇初级中学英语组九年级2【佳作赏析】Howtokeepsafe?Asteenagers,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Buthowcanwekeepourselvessafe?Herearesomeofmysuggestions.First(与second,also,last一起使文章布局合理，条理清晰),weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends(时间状语从句),especiallyonline.Second,ifweareindanger(条件状语从句，用一般现在时表示将来),weshouldcallthepoliceforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe(目的状语从句).Also,weoughttoeathealthilyandsafely.Eatingfood(动名词作主语)thatgoesbad(定语从句)willdoharmtoourhealth.Lastbutnottheleast,summeriscoming,andwemustrememberitisdangeroustoswim_in_the_river(it作形式主语，toswimintheriver为真正的主语)．Inshort(进行简要总结),safetymustcomefirst!近来，全国正在进行平安校园建设，作为一名学生，我们更应该珍惜自己的生命，更加注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Daming，担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。内容提示：(1)不带管制刀具到学校；(2)不私自下河洗澡；(3)不打架；(4)上学放学的途中应该注意安全；(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。……参考词汇：restrictedknivesorthings(管制刀具)；haveabath(洗澡)；fight(打架)；emergency(紧急情况)；payattentiontothetraffic(注意交通安全)写作要求：(1)用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。(2)可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dearstudents，Asweknow,safetyisthemostimportantthinginourlives.So,weshouldtryourbesttomakesurewearesafe.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，DamingDearstudents，Asweknow,safetyisthemostimportantthinginourlives.So,weshouldtryourbesttomakesurewearesafe.Wemustn'tbringrestrictedknivesorthingstoschoolbecausethesethingsmaycauseseriousproblems.Donothaveabathinriversorpondsalonewithoutourparents'permission.And,weshouldbefriendlytootherssofightingisstronglybanned.Makesurethatwealwayspayattentiontothetrafficonourwaytoschoolorhome.Furthermore,ifwemeetsomeemergency,wemustcallforhelpfromthepoliceorourteachers.Inaword,followingthesesafetyrulesabovecanmakeusliveinpeace.Yours，Daming