2015届高考英语一轮复习短文改错练习5

12015高考英语：短文改错练习（5）【英语卷（解析）·2015届广西桂林十八中高三上学期第一次月考（201409）】第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）（注：本题为新课改内容）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。InthefirstdaywhenIwenttoworkinaveryfamousrestaurant,mybosscomplainedthattherewereveryafewpeoplecomingfordinner.SoIam“invited”tohaveamealintherestaurant.AfterorderedtwoFrenchdishesandsomefood,Ibegantolookfrequentlyattheirwatchtimingtheservingofthemeal.Meanwhile,Ilookedaroundtoseethattherewasanythingelsewrongthere.Iwrotesomethingimproperdownsecret.Mymealwasnotservingyet.Ilookedatmywatch32minutespassed!Irealizedthatwaittoolongforservicewasthemainreasonwhythebusinesswaspoor.ThenIwroteareportaboutmyfindingsandpresentedittheboss.【答案】【知识点】E1短文改错记叙文【答案解析】71.第一句第一个in改为on。在具体的某一天用介词on。72.afew改为few。老板抱怨没几个人来餐馆吃晚饭。73.第二句am改为was。讲述过去的事情，用一般过去时。74.第三句ordered改为ordering。Order的逻辑主语是主句的主语I,I和order是逻辑上的主谓关系，所以用ordering。75.their改为my。本句的主语是I,它的形容词性物主代词是my。76.第四句that改为whether。我环顾四周看看是否还有别的不对的地方。77.第五句secret改为secretly修饰动词短语writedown,要用副词。278.第六句serving改为served。Meal和serve是被动关系，饭还没有被端上来。79.第八句wait改为waiting。动名词短语作主语。80.第九句theboss前加to。presentsthtosb将某物呈献给某人【英语卷（解析）·2014届西藏自治区高三最后一次模拟统一考试（201405）】E1第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：把缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：1.在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Iamwritingtoaskforwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.Iwanttohaveapenpal,hopefullyagirlintheearlytwenties,andwithinterestssimilarlytomine.Inmymind,heissomeoneinterestingintraveling,swimming,andplayingtabletennis.Beside,itwillbebetterforhertohaveapetdogasIhavebeenkeepingoneathomeforsometime.Withsuchpenpal,IhopeIcansharewithhermyexperiencesintraveling,takingcareofpets,orwhicheverwehaveincommon.IbelievedIwillimprovemyEnglishbydoingsoandlearningmoreabouthercountry.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.【答案】1.把for去掉askfor意为“请求”。这里是“问询”之意，故去掉for2.the改为herinone'stwenties在某人二十几岁的时候3.similarly改为similarsimilarto是后置定语修饰interests。要用形容词形式。4.he改为she这里指代的是agirl，所以要用she。5.interesting改为interestedbeinterestedin对……感兴趣。这里同第3题，interested作后置定语。6.Beside改为Besidesbesideadv.旁边地。besidesadv.除此之外。这两个为易混词，应特别注意。37.such后加asuchapenpal这样一个笔友。sucha如此一个。8.whichever改为whateverwhatever无论什么，强调不明什么对象。whichever无论哪个，强调在明确的对象中不知要选哪个。9.believed改为believe根据后面的从句的时态可知这里是一般现在时。10.learning改为learnlearn是will的宾语所以用原形。(2013·宝鸡市三模)Jackhasregardedasayoungheroinhistownforhisheroicdeed.Theotherday,Jackwasgoinghomebybikeasusualwhileheheardawomanscreamingforhelp.Thenhewasridingquicklytowardsthedirectionofthevoice.Atthecorner,hesawawomanstoppingbyamanwithaknifeinherhand.Withouthesitation,Jackmadeaimmediatedivefortherobberandcontrolledhimbyheldhimdownagainsttheground.Afewminuteslater,threepolicemancameandtooktherobberaway.Slightwoundedashewasinthelefthand,butsincethenhehasbecomewellknownasayoungheroalloverthetown.答案：Jackhas∧beenregardedasayoungheroinhistownforhisheroicdeed.Theotherday,Jackwasgoinghomebybikeasusualwhilewhenheheardawomanscreamingforhelp.Thenhewasridingquicklytowardsinthedirectionofthevoice.Atthecorner,hesawawomanstoppingstoppedbyamanwithaknifeinherhishand.Withouthesitation,Jackmadeaanimmediatedivefortherobberandcontrolledhimbyheldholdinghimdownagainsttheground.Afewminuteslater,threepolicemanpolicemencameandtooktherobberaway.SlightSlightlywoundedashewasinthelefthand,but＼sincethenhehasbecomewellknownasayoungheroalloverthetown.(2013·长春市第四次调测)IstillremembermymiddleschoollifeinChangchun.Iwastheninschoolfor4studentfromWenchuan.Aswewerealllefthomeofanearlyage,wemetlotsofproblemsinourdailylife.Wehadtodothewashing,cleaningandshoppingbyus.However,weseldomfeltlonelyorhelplessly.Weenjoyedourhappylife.Atweekends,wewillplaybasketballontheplayground,swimminginthepoolorgoforapicnicinthepark.Wewerelivinginabigfamily.Wetreateachotherasbrothersandsisters.Ithasbeenfiveyearswhenwegraduated,butthosememoriesareassweetaseverbefore.答案：IstillremembermymiddleschoollifeinChangchun.Iwasthenin∧aschoolforstudentstudentsfromWenchuan.Aswewere＼alllefthomeofatanearlyage,wemetlotsofproblemsinourdailylife.Wehadtodothewashing,cleaningandshoppingbyusourselves.However,weseldomfeltlonelyorhelplesslyhelpless.Weenjoyedourhappylife.Atweekends,wewillwouldplaybasketballontheplayground,swimmingswiminthepoolorgoforapicnicinthepark.Wewerelivinginabigfamily.Wetreattreatedeachotherasbrothersandsisters.Ithasbeenfiveyearswhensincewegraduated,butthosememoriesareassweetaseverbefore.(2013·甘肃省二诊)Manyteachersworriedabouttheeffectsoftelevisiononyoungpeople.Accordingtostudies,anychildrenspendmoretimewatchingtelevisionthantheyspendinschool.Becausesomuchviewing,childrenmaynotbedevelopthehabitofreadandtheabilitytoenjoythemselves.Nooneworriesmuchabouttheradioprogramyoungpeoplelistento,althoughradioscanbeverynoise.Teachersalsowonderabouttheeffectsoftelevisioncommercials.Ononeyeartheaveragechildwillsee25,000televisioncommercials,allplannedandwrittenbygrownupstomakechild