英语作文提分技巧

范文赏析Today,moreandmorestudentsgotoschoolwithmobilephones.Students’attitudestowardsthisvaryfrompersontoperson.Thosewhosupportthissayithelpsstudentstokeepintouchwiththeirparentsandfriends.Moreover,usingmobilephonescanbefun.However,otherstudentsholdtheoppositeopinion.Theythinkthatusingmobilephonescancauseproblems.Firstly,studentswithmobilephonesatschooldonotconcentrateonstudyingduringclass,butplaygamesorsendtextmessagesinstead.Besides,itcostsalottouseamobilephone.Asforme,thereisnodenyingthatusingmobilephoneshasitsadvantages,butI’dstillpreferstudentstousethemathomebecausestudyshouldcomefirst.书面表达系列讲练之赢取高分策略NMET书面表达评分原则1、先根据文章的内容,语言和整体感觉初步确定档次。第五档.21~25分第四档.16~20分第三档.11~15分第二档.6~10分第一档.1~5分0分语言地道，规范覆盖所有内容要点2、主要内容：内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；语言的得体性应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分3、拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。4、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。技巧1.使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.Weallthinkheisagreatman.3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.4.Thestudentsthereneedn’tpayfortheirbooks.5.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇Weallthinkhighlyofhim.Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.Booksarefreeforthestudentsthere.二丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。1.感叹句e.g.HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!Whatakindboyheis!Howdisappointedhewas!2.强调句e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.3、倒装句e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.Therecomesthepolicecar.Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman.4、省略句e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.5、with短语e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.6、定语从句e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.Let’scometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.7、各种名词性从句e.g.That’swhatIshoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent.8、各种状语从句e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Themomentwereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.Solongasweworkharderatourlessons,we’llcatchupsoonerorlater.DocallmebeforehandsothatIcanmeetyouattheairport.Theyhadtowaitbecausetherainwasgettingmoreandmoreheavily.三高考大纲中常用的连接词1.表示递进;另外，还有：whatismore;besides;also;moreover;inaddition2.表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：but;however;yet;instead;ontheotherhand;onthecontrary.3.表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:since;as;because(of);so;thus;therefore;asaresult;4.表示条件关系如果，只要:if;oncondition(that);aslongas除非:unless否则:orelse5.表示时间关系当…的时候:when;while在…之后:after在…之前:before直到:until一…就…:assoonas后来，然后:later;afterwards不久:soon近来:lately;recently自从…:since从那时起:fromthenon常见的对称关系的过渡词语1.Foronething,…foranotherthing,…2.Ononehand,…ontheotherhand,…6.表示特定的顺序关系首先，最主要的:aboveall其次:secondly然后:then;next最后:finally;intheend；lastbutnotleast7.换一种方法表述换句话说:inotherwords;thatistosay;8.进行举例说明例如，比如:forinstance;forexample;like;suchas9.用于陈述事实实际上:infact;actually;asamatteroffact跟你说实话:totellyouthetruth10.对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说:onthewhole;inshort;allinall;ingeneral;inaword；inconclusion;;.Tosumup;inbrief11.其它常用到的表达•1.intermsof就而言2.asfaras……beconcerned3.inmyopinion/view4.AsfarasIknow……5.Asforsb,……假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let'sRideBicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1．汽车虽然便利但带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2．骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。参考词汇：低碳生活lowcarbonlife节能energysaving注意：1.词数：120词左右；2．演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，且该部分不计入总词数。Goodmorning,everyone,IamLiHuafromXingguangMiddleSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“Let'sRideBicycles”．_______________________________________Dearclassmates,I'mverygladtohavethischancetotalktoyou.ThetopicofmyspeechisLet'srideabicycle.Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.However,theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.Howcanwesolvetheseproblemsthen?AsfarasI'mconcerned,ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution.Foronething,bicyclesdon'tneedanypetrolandtheyareenergy-saving.Foranother,bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecausetheywon'tgiveoffwastegas.What'smore,ridingbicyclesisagoodwayforustoexerciseanditisgoodforourhealth.Therefore,let'staketheresponsibilitytobuildupalow-carboncitybyridingbicycles.Comeonandjoinus!Thankyouforlistening!2001年春季高考作文给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclasseseveryday.Ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool.Iwenttobedat11:30intheevening.Ihadnotimetoplay.Iwasverytired.NowIcanvisitmuseums.Icanlearncomputeranddrawing.Intheevening,IcanreadbooksandnewspapersandwatchTV.Igotobedat10:00now.17分高考满分作文I’mverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylifesinceourhomeworkhasreduced.Beforethat,learningduringthedaywasverysimple.Havingclassanddoinghomeworkwastheonlythingweshoulddo.Intheevening,wealsohadalotofhomeworktodo.Wecouldnotgotobeduntil11:30.Nevertheless,sincereducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuchmoreinteresting.Ioftenvisitmuseumsandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesinmysparetime.Intheevening,IalsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnew