句型升级

提高英语写作水平的一种可行途径——句型句式升级知识与技能：在写作时能把某些简单句转换为一些高级句型，从而提高英语成绩情感、态度与价值观：激发学生学习写作的兴趣教学目标：1.句型句式升级的一些简单可行的途径2.针对性训练教学内容：教学内容的重要性：高考作文第五档(21-25分）的评分标准是1.完全完成了试题规定的任务2.覆盖所有内容要点3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑6.完全达到了预期的写作目的1.Wewillholdameetingtomorrow.2.Wewilldiscusshowtoreduceairpollution.课前热身：将下的简单句变为复合句1.Thetopicoftomorrow'smeetingishowtoreduceairpollution.2.Wewillholdameetingtomorrow,aimingtoreduceairpollution.句型句式升级的具体办法1.巧用定语从句［原文1］Hewasadmittedintoakeyuniversity.Itmadeusveryexcited.［原文2］Heisafamouswriter.Hewasborninapoorfamily.［修正1］Hewasadmittedintoakeyuniversity,whichmadeusveryexcited.［修正2］Heisafamouswriterwhowasborninapoorfamily.2.活用强调句［原文1］MyfriendsalwayshelpmewhenIamintrouble.［原文2］NotuntilheturnedbackdidIrealizeheismyoldfriend［修正］Itismyfriendswho/thatalwayshelpmewhenIamintrouble.［修正2］ItwasnotuntilheturnedbackthatIrealizedheismyoldfriend.3.妙用倒装句［原文1］IfwelearnEnglishinthisway,wecanlearnitwell.［原文2］Althoughheisalittleboy,heknowsalot.［修正1］OnlyinthiswaycanwelearnEnglishwell.［修正2］Boyas/thoughheis,heknowsalot.4.With的复合结构（可以将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with结构）。［原文］Chinaisalargecountry.Chinahasalonghistory.［修正］Chinaisalargecountrywithalonghistory.5.非谓语动词（可以将状语从句或并列的动词简化为非谓语动词，增强句子的连贯性和表现力）。［原文1］Iwastired.IwenttobedassoonasIarrivedhome.［修正1］Tired,IwenttobedassoonasIarrivedhome.［修正2］Usingitproperly,wecanbenefitalot.［原文2］Ifweusecomputersproperly,wecanbenefitalot.6.Therebe句型［原文1］ManypeoplearelearningEnglishinChina.［原文2］Thereisapictureonthewall.Thispictureispaintedbymyfather.［修正2］Thereisapicturepaintedbymyfatheronthewall.［修正1］TherearemanypeoplelearningEnglishinChina.7.too...to...结构［原文1］Iamverygladtomeetyou.［原文2］Youareverykindtohelpme.［修正1］Iamtoogladtomeetyou.［修正2］It'stookindofyoutohelpme.8.用it做形式主语或形式宾语［原文］Realizingtheimportanceoflearningaforeignlanguageisveryimportant.［修正1］Itisveryimportanttorealizetheimportanceoflearningaforeignlanguage.［修正2］Ithinkitveryimportanttorealizetheimportanceoflearningaforeignlanguage.9.其他亮点句型1）the比较级...,the比较级...例句：Themoreyoueat,thefatteryouwillbe.2)祈使句表示条件，陈述句表示结果（用将来时态）。例句：Workhard,andwewillsucceed.Workhard,orwewillfail.summary好作文的其他要素1.内容上:要点覆盖要全面2.句式上：简单句和复合句结合，分词和短语灵活应用，会使作文显得灵动3.字数上：不宜太长或太短，110-120最佳4.其他注意事项：尽量完全避免大小写错误，标点符号错误，简单的主谓一致以及时态上的错误HOMEWORKTofinishexerciseonP254Themoreyoupractice,thehigermarksyouwillget.Thankyou!