高考英语作文讲解课件(共9张PPT)

2020/1/21高考英语作文常见错误剖析及写作2020/1/21学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析•1、汉语式思维•Seethefilmwilltookmemuchtime.•Hehappenedanaccidentyesterday.2、谓语缺失Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatessittingintheclassroom.Sheintheclassroomyesterday.3、Therebe句型出错Therearefivestudentsplaybasketballontheplayground.Therearesomeworkersareworkinginthefield.(Seeing)(Anaccidenthappenedtohimyesterday.)werewasFive2020/1/216、非谓语动词出错Beingseriouslyill,hisclass-matessenthimtohospital.Seeingfromthespace,theearthlookslikeaball.学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析•4、谓语动词用法出错•Hedressedinanewcoat.•Greatchangeshavebeentakenplace.•WhenIarrivedHongKong,mymotherwastherewaitingforme.•Hedidn’tnoticetheteachertocomeintotheclassroom.5、词性混用SheenjoysstudyEnglish.Ifanyoneagainsttheplan,pleaseletmeknow.isin(studying)isAsheisseriouslyill,(Seen)2020/1/21学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析•7、分数与百分数作主语•Inourclass,20%sthdentsaregirls,butthreefifthsstudentsareboys.8、定语从句错误Thetwoboysarereadingaremybrothers.ThebookIboughtitislost.I’llneverforgetthedayswhenwespentinthevillagetogether.9、连词出错Althoughhetried,buthestillcouldn’tkeepupwiththeothers.Mysuggestioniswetryforasecondtime.10、形容词、副词混用Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.oftheofthewhothatthatnervoushard2020/1/21•DearSue,•I’mLiHua,isoneofyourstudentsinChina.It’salmostamonthsinceyouleftus.Weallverymissyouandareverygratefulforyoudidforus.•Wearebusyasusually.WehadanEnglishspeechcontesttheotherday.Iwonthefirstprize.Thisagainremindsmeofallyourkindhelp.Doyoustillrememberthetreesweplantedthemtogetheronthehillbehindtheschool?Yesterday,wewentthereandwaterthem.Thetreeyouplantedyourselfisgrowinggood,andthewholeclassdecidedtonameitSueWood.WillyoucomebackseeSueWood?•Howiseverythingwithyoulately?WehopetoknowmoreaboutyouwithyourAmeicanstudents.Hopetokeepinclosetouch.•Allthebest,•LiHua作文修改whatusual-edwelltoand2020/1/21实例写作(2010全国Ⅱ)假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告诉招聘信息。内容主要包括：1．教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等2．授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）3．工作量：—每周12学时，任选三门课—担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信写出来。DearPeter,IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina.________________________________________________________Best,Lihua2020/1/21•写作技巧点拨1、提纲式作文为半开放型写作。2、要点均为4—5个（多为4+1个要点），要点提示比较简洁，考生111有发散思维的空间；3、英语作文多为三段式：1para.——Topicsentence(mainidea,writer’sattitude)2ndpara.——Body(differentpoints)3rdpara.——Ending(writer’sownidea)4、尽量避免第一印象词汇出现5、好的连词与表达法的使用。2020/1/21•提炼文章要点•理解每个要点的含义，然后讨论每个要点的正确表达方式。•形成文章。2020/1/21•范文DearPeter,IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina.①Ourschoolislookingforanative-speakertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.②Ifyou’dliketocome,youcanchoosethreeofthefollowingfourcourses:Speaking,Writing,BritainTodayandAmericaToday,andteach12periodsaweek.③ThestudentswhoaregoingtotakethesecourseshaveatleastthreeyearsofEnglishlearningexperiences.④Besidesteaching,youwillalsoworkasanadvisorforourstudents’Englishcluborourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.⑤Pleaseletmeknowifyouareinterestedandifyouhaveanyotherdecisions.Best,Lihua