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CET-4WrtingBEAConfidential.|2Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopic:CollegeStudents’JobHunting.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.1.近几年出现了大学生就业难的现象；2.产生这种现象的原因（如大学生追求的目标过高，专业不对口等）；3.如何解决这一问题（改变就业观念，大学生再培训等）。点评：本预测题为社会热点话题之一。近年来大学生就业难日益成为各级政府及社会各方面关注的焦点，媒体也广泛报道了大学生就业形势严峻，呼吁全社会共同努力。此外，该预测题也与大学生就业密切相关，也是四级作文选题重点之一。BEAConfidential.|3CollegeStudents’JobHunting•Inrecentyears,collegestudentsfinditincreasinglydifficulttogetajob.Itsoundsstrangesinceyoungcollegestudentsareusuallyintelligent,well-educatedphenomenon,aspirantandeagertobringtheirtalentintofullplay.Thenwhatunderliesthestrangephenomenon?BEAConfidential.|4Thereareseveralreasonsforthis.Tobeginwith,nowadayscollegestudentsaimtoohigh.Alltheywantare“good”jobswhichcouldoffergoodsalary,comfortableworkingconditions,highsocialstatusamongothers.Consequently,mostcollegestudentsareunwillingtoacceptvacantjobstheyconsidernot“good”enough.Anotherreasonisthatthereisabiggapbetweenthemajorssomestudentsstudyinschoolandthedemandsofvacantjobs.Socompaniesthinksomestudentsarenotfitforthejobs.BEAConfidential.|5Solutiontotheproblemrequireseffortsonboththesocietyandthestudents.Thecompaniesshouldvaluethestudents,talentandknowledgewhilethelattershouldnotmerelyaimatmaterialgains.Theyshouldbedown-to–earthinbuildinguptheircareer.Furthermore,theyshouldfacetheirweakpointssoastoimprovethemselvesandbemorecompetent.BEAConfidential.|6一、主语错误1.主语缺失1)Inourcountryfeelsveryfree.Peoplefeelfreeinourcountry.2)Inmyhometownaren’tverybusy.Peopleinmyhometownareverybusy.2.非名词主语1)Richdoesn’tensureahappylife.Beingrichdoesn’tmeanahappylife./Wealthdoesn’tensureahappylife.2)Keeptwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.Keepingtwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.3.主谓错位1)Readingbookscanacquireknowledge.Peoplecanacquireknowledgefrombooks.2)Nowpeople’slivescan’tleaveTV.Nowpeoplecan’tdowithoutTV.BEAConfidential.|7二、谓语错误1.多重谓语1)Inourmodernsociety,therearemanyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated.Inourmodernsociety,manyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated./Alargenumberofpeoplehavefallenvictimtovarioustricks.2)Povertymakesmanypeoplecan’tstudyabroad.Povertymakesmanypeopleunabletostudyabroad./Povertymakesitimpossibleformanypeopletostudyabroad./Povertypreventsmanypeoplefromstudyingabroad./Manypeoplecan’tstudyabroadbecauseofpoverty.BEAConfidential.|82.非动词谓语1)Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersagainstit.Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersareagainstit.2)Itissaidthattheplaceworthstouring.Itissaidthattheplaceisworthtouring.3.主谓不一致1)IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachmeCollegeEnglish.IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachesmeCollegeEnglish.2)Iuseadiskbecauseitholdplentyofdata.Iuseadiskbecauseitholdsplentyofdata..4.误用词组1)Theyinsistonpost-graduatestudyisveryimportantforthem.Theyinsistthatpost-graduatestudyisveryimportantforthem.2)Iamafraidofthatit’sgoingtorain.Iamafraidthatit’sgoingtorain.BEAConfidential.|9三、冠词错误1)Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.Inmyopinion,thefutureofthebicycleisverypromising.2)Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlythegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadones.Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlygoodbookstoreadandnevertouchbadones.BEAConfidential.|10四、代词错误1.偷梁换柱1)Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,youshouldnotplagiarize.Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,heshouldnotplagiarize.2)Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveusandtheywillleaveusalong./Ifyoucheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.BEAConfidential.|112.指代不明1)Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,whichnobodybelieved.Hegaveareason,whichnobodybelieved,fornotattendingthemeeting./Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,areasonwhichnobodybelieved.2)Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdentheyhavetobear.Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdenstudentshavetobear.BEAConfidential.|12五、形容词、副词错误1)Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferently.Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferent.2)Surprisingenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.Surprisinglyenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.BEAConfidential.|13六、分词误用1)Comparingwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.Comparedwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.2)Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewingthroughmycamera.Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewedthroughmycamera.BEAConfidential.|14七、修饰语误置1)SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforlearningEnglishpeople.SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforpeoplelearningEnglish.2)Tokeeptheairclean,wemustmovethefactorieswhichgiveoffpoisonousgasestothecountryside.Tokeeptheairclean,wemustmovetothecountrysidethefactorieswhichgiveoffpoisonousgasestothecountryside.BEAConfidential.|15八、垂悬修饰语1)Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,people’slivingstandardhasbeengreatlyimproved.Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,peoplehavegreatlyimproved