大学英语四级写作强化

用词是否恰当，准确，形象，关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；Good—advisable/sensible/informative/useful/instructive;Good—beneficial,advantageous,helpful;excellent,outstanding;Bad—undesirable/mindless/worthless;Bad—harmful,baneful,detrimentalLotsof—ahostof,avastnumberof—(可数名词），agreatdealof,avastamountof–(不可数名词）--substantial;considerable;heapsofImportant—crucial,vital,significant,key;P4;indispensable/integral;desire替换wantpourattentioninto替换payattentiontobearinmindthat替换remember促进/提高/增强/改善giveaboostto/enhance/motivate/better/promote角色与功能Playanimportant(active,major,central,crucial,essential,integral,prominent,vital)role—Playabigpart---Takealeadingpart---允许与阻止Make…possible—电脑的使用促使人们在家上班:Theuseofcomputersandotherhigh-techofficeequipmenthasmadeitpossibleformorepeopletoworkfromhome.Enable,encourage,entitle谈中国的老年人如何受到社会的尊重—适用于个人/社会类话题InChina,respectforseniorcitizensisshowninthefactthattheyareentitledtomanypublicservicesfreeofcharge.Stop,keep,prevent,prohibit太多的学业压力对学生的负面影响—Toomuchacademicpressuredeprivesyoungstudentsoftheopportunitytotakepartinanyextracurricularactivitiesandpreventthemfromenjoyingtheirschoolyears.(hinder---obstruct—hedge)Deprive—privilege;--shelter—pension—compensate;--courtesy;Increasing(ly),growing替换moreandmore(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.非常地exceedingly/extremely/greatly/remarkably/significantly/utterly)在当代Incontemporarysociety,inpresent-daysociety,inthisdayandage;formypart,frommyownperspective替换inmyopinion破坏Destroy;impair;undermine;jeopardize;devastate;支持观点（befor/convince/insist/voiceasupportfor/votefor)(win)反对观点(argueagainst/combat/disagreewith/disregard/oppose)(goastray—flourish—rival—thrive—administration)Transform—change(应用:科技改变我们的生产和生活方式,环境变化—教育思路—取消文理分科,通才教育—generalist);Preserve—protect--保护某种资源，naturalresourcesoroldbuildings---demolish—teardown;--英国人尊重历史和文化。解决:Solve,dealwith,copewith,handle,resolve,address,tackle—(economiccrisis,deterioratedenvironment,shortagesofwater,unemployment,trafficjams….)_;培养：：Develop,cultivate,foster,culture—(education—cultivatethespiritofindependence认为：maintain,assert,,hold,argue,beconvinced,befirmlyconvinced,消除：Eliminate,clear,remove,clearup,Alleviate—ease;减轻,缓解(就业压力,新能源缓解资源紧张;经济增长方式转变缓解发展压力---Anumberofmeasuresweretakentoalleviatetheproblem.)Worsen—deteriorate;aggravate(环境恶化)人们认为：itisgenerally/widelybelieved/held/agreedthat适应的形势/变化：adapt/adjust/accommodate(使适应)oneselftonewenvironment/change;接触各种思想/经历：beexposedtonewideas/experiences/problems影响与冲击Profound/SignificantDamagingDevastatingDestructivedisastrousInfluenceImpactEffectaffectWhenaskedaboutthefunctionofmedia,manypeopleagreetothefirstview.此外，表示“多”的词还有：vast,quiteafew,anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,agreatnumberof…Cheatinginexamhappensinourdailylife.Dishonestyoccurredmoreandmoreinoursociety.theoverwhelmingmajorityofhasbecomeacommonoccurrenceObviously,thepictureshowsthatacultureofonenationmaybecomeinternational,whichisbeneficialtoallthehumanbeings.show:indicate,reveal,suggest,proveAsthenumbershows,nearly200billiondollarsarelostintobaccoeveryyear.number:figure,statistics用词的生动性is首先前者的问题在于be动词是静态的，没有活力的，therebe也是如此。makemakesb.dosth---英语的词化程度较高，存在大量词语，一个单词的存在使得很多词语不再被需要dismay使震惊，convince使信服.避免be形式表达，尽可能选择表示强有力的行为动词，写出生动，简洁，有力，耐读和连贯的文章。Thereisabeautifulparknearmyhouse.ThenameoftheparkisTian-TanPark,whichwasbuiltseveralhundredyearsago.ItisthebiggestparkinBeijing.TheTian-Tanparkisfamousnotonlyforitsbeautybutitsquietnessaswell.NearmyhousestandsTian-Tan,thebiggestparkinBeijing,builtseveralhundredyearsagoandfamousnowfornotonlyitsbeautybutalsoitsquietness.Ecologicalimbalancesisthebiggestthreattothesurvivalofwildanimalsandplants.Ecologicalimbalancesthreatenthesurvivalofwildanimalsandplants,evenhumanbeings.TheInternetmakesmelearnEnglishmoreconveniently.TheInternetfacilitatedmyEnglishstudyHiscriminalrecordmadehimunabletobeadmittedtotheuniversity.Hiscriminalrecorddisqualifiedhimfrombeingadmittedtotheuniversity.避免一味用Thereis开头。Therearemoreandmorepeoplewhorealizetherelationbetweenexaminationandteachingmethods.Therelationbetweentheexaminationandteachingmethodsisincreasinglyrecognized.避免一味用People,I,We开头Wewillalwaysrememberthesmileonherface.Thesmileonherfacewillbefirmlyrootedinourminds.Wecertainlyshouldoffergoodservice.Goodserviceiscertainlyrequired.It---句型的广泛使用Itmustbepointedoutthat...必须指出……Itmustbeadmittedthat...必须承认……Itisimaginedthat...人们认为……Itcannotbedeniedthat...不可否认……Itwillbeseenfromthisthat...由此可知……Itshouldberealizedthat...必须认识到……Itis(always)stressedthat...人们(总是)强调……Itmaybesaidwithoutfearofexaggerationthat...可以毫不夸张地说……变换句式优化文章Lecture1长句和短句变换Lecture2主动句和被动句变换Lecture3非谓语从句变换Lecture4比较句变换Lecture5松散到紧凑变换变换句式优化文章短句变长句受汉语思维习惯影响，很多考生往往会直接将脑子里的意思译成英语，而忽略句与句之间的联系，导致写出来的句子无法体现英语作为“形合语言”的特点。因此，在平时写作时，考生要注意前后句子之间是否存在联系，善于发现各个简单句之间的关联，用恰当的连接词将简单句连接起来，组成准确地道的复杂长句，增加文章的气势。【例1】【原文】Liesdoharmtothosewhoarebeingtoldlies.Liesalsodoharmtothosewhotellthem.【优化】Liesnotonlydoharmtothosewhoarebeingtoldlies,butalsodoha