英语漫画写作

2010年开放式作文（生活*社会*......）请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。InyourspokenEnglishclass,yourteachershowsyouthefollowingpicture.Youareaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstandit.开放作文评分原则:以内容和语言定档定分◆立意明确，逻辑清晰(立意-----细节描述）◆语言达意•得分要点：观点鲜明、积极健康、理由充分、思维独特、有创造性•写作要领：内容充实、逻辑合理、发散得当、语言正确、句式多样、词汇丰富、行文连贯四、写漫画性开放作文不变的特点人称：图片描述用第三人称；自己观点用第一人称时态：描图用一般现在时；解图一般现在时；议论和联系自己用一般现在时和一般将来时；变化的是：话题2010年北京卷请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。InyourspokenEnglishclass,yourteachershowsyouthefollowingpicture.Youareaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstandit.立意----细节描述立意1：勇于克服困难（小树在不规则大楼中间顽强生长）立意2：成功来自于不懈的努力（小树努力克服各种困难，最终获取了阳光）立意----细节描述把图中的内容描述清楚4-6分过渡句——2分含义——5分1描图句Inthepicture,…Thepictureshowsthat…Ascanbeseenfromthepicture,Aswecanseeinthepicture,FromthepictureIcansee…Asis(vividly)showninthepicture,….怎样用语言描述图片？在描述图片时，推荐以下模式：a.常量主语推进模式例1：Whataninterestingpictureitis!(Whatastrangepictureitis!)Atreeistwistedbytwoclosely-locatedbuildings.Itbendsinthemiddle.Butitstruggles(triesitsbest)allthewaytoreachthesky(theSun).Whataninterestingpictureitis!Atreeisstandingbetweentwoneighbouringbuildings.Thetreeisnotstraight(outofstraight,bendsinthemiddle),becauseitisaffectedbythebuildings.Butitstruggles(triesitsbest)allthewaytoreachthesky(theSun).b.总说-分说(-总说)推进模式例1：Inthispicture,wecanseetwobuildings,atree,and(thesun).Thetwobuildingsarecloselylocatedtoeachother(arecloselystandingoppositetoeachother.).Thetreebendsinthemiddleandsqueezesitswayoutofthebuildingssoastogetmoresunshine.例2：Inthispicture,wecanseetwobuildings,atree,and(thesun).Thetwobuildingsarelocatedoppositetoeachother.Thetreeisstandingbetweenthetwobuildingsandbendsinthemiddle.Thesunisshiningabovethetree.Thoughtwistedbythesetwobuildings,thetreestillstrugglesallthewayuptotheair.过渡句（描述图片---个人看法）如:Thispicturetellsusthat……Whatimpressesmemostaboutthispictureisthat.......Thispicturemeansthat……Thepicturemakesmethinkof...Thispictureshowsusthat……Thepicturerevealsthefactthat...Thispicturedemonstratesthat…….Thispictureremindsmeof......Thispictureintendstotellusthat……Thesituationinoursocietyisthesameaswhatthepictureportrays.MorethoughtscanbefiguredoutfromthispictureFromthispicturewefind(begintorealize)that…..Thepictureconveysanimportantmessagetous.Thepictureconveysadeepmessagethat…Whatthepictureconveystousisthat…意义延伸（Icon---Index）例1：Formypart,thispictureintendstotellushowtopursuesuccessinreality,withthetreestandingforthoseindifficultiesandthetwobulidingsforbarriersandfrustrations.Onourwaytosuccess,wemaybehinderedbyobstacles.Butifwepersistandnevergiveup,wecanreachtosuccessintheendjustasthetreedoesinthepicture.sample1Inthepicture,betweentwoclosely-locatedbuildingsgrowsabigtree.Unlikemosttrees,thisonebendsinthemiddle,strugglingallthewayuptogetmoresunshine.Thepictureremindsmeofthosewhosucceedinunfavorableconditions.Facedwithdifficulties,theynevergiveupbuttrytheirbesttofindawayout.Lifecanbehard.Butifwehavethecourageanddetermination,wewillfinallygetthesunshinewewantasthetreeinthepicturedoes.sample2Inthepictureweseeatreegrowingupbetweentwostrangebuildings.Althoughinsuchpoorcondition,thetreedoesn'tgiveup.Likethetreegrowingthere,Ibelievethatwecanovercomemanydifficultiesinthefutureifwearepersistent.Forusasstudentswehavetosolvemanyproblemsandworkhardinourstudies.LetmetakeEnglishlearningforexample.Keepworkinghard,youwillseesomeoneofvalue,someonewhoisgoingtobemoresuccessful,someonewhoisgoingtowin.Youwillseesomeoneworthyofwinningbecauseyouhaveworkedforit.Inaword,astheysay:“Justdoit,nevergiveup”.漫画的画面细节漫画的夸张寓意(与现实的矛盾之处）细节夸张寓意Don’tcopyother’swayofsolvingtheproblem.Doeverythingintherightway.读图与立意细节夸张寓意Thestudentsaswellastheirparentsonlyfocusontheiracademicachievements,neglectingpsychologicalqualityandmoralstandards.1.Don’tbetooconfidentinreallife.2.Behonestandmodest.3.Don’tjudgeabookbyitscover.开放作文的立意•1)两个物象（大树和小草）的对比。大树虽然强壮，但经不住狂风；小草虽然弱小，但是很坚韧。内心的力量强大很重要。•2)尺有所短，寸有所长。每个人都有自己擅长的一面。不要因为自己在某方面比别人强，就因此而看不起别人。他人也有你所不及的地方。取长补短，互相学习才能自我完善。开放作文的立意3）不以外表判断人；4）坚持真理，刚直不阿；5）学会适应环境，适者生存；6）面对不同的形势要学会灵活的改变；7）遇到困难要学会改变自我；8）攀登越高，风险越大；