简单句写作

一、正确使用动词谓语写作中容易出现的两类错误：一是乱用be动词，二是句子没有谓语动词。MybrotheristeachEnglishinaseniorschool.MybrotherteachesEnglishinaseniorschool.Somepeoplethinkingthatpollutionwilldoharmtohumanbeings.Somepeoplethinkthatpollutionwilldoharmtohumanbeings.二、句子结构要完整一个句子必须有主语和谓语。两个或两个以上的句子，要么是并列句，要么是主从复合句。两个句子不能直接写在一起，也不能只用逗号隔开，否则会导致句子结构不完整。1、Therewereforeignerscametoourschool.Therewereforeignerswhocametoourschool.2、Youreadmore,youwillimproveyourreadingability.Ifyoureadmore,youwillimproveyourreadingability.3、Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,theboysmoppedthefloor.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs;theboysmoppedthefloor.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,andtheboysmoppedthefloor.注意简单句中，若只有一个主谓结构，逗号连接的不是句子，而是短语。Hearingthesadnews,Sandycouldn’thelpcrying.Toourdisappointment,TeamChinadidn’tbeatTeamThailand.一、改错1、Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitedtemplesandtoldstories.2、Childrenshouldbedevelopthehabitofreadingcarefully.Childrenshoulddevelopthehabitofreadingcarefully.3、Theoldmanlikeslisteningtoradioprograms,radioscanbeverynoisy.Theoldmanlikeslisteningtoradioprograms,althoughradioscanbeverynoisy.4、Seeingfromthespace,theearthlooksbeautiful.Seenfromthespace,theearthlooksbeautiful.二、翻译1、这个苹果尝起来真甜。Theappletastedsweet.2、他发现学英语好难。HefounditdifficulttolearnEnglish.3、他递给我一张纸。Hehandedmeapieceofpaper.4、这支钢笔书写流畅。Thepenwritessmoothly.5、我们没有决定去哪里。Wedidn’tdecidewheretogo.6、花园里有很多蝴蝶。Therearealotofbutterfliesinthegarden.高级简单句一、使用分词短语（非谓语）1、Whenheheardthesadnews,hecouldn’thelpcrying.Hearingthesadnews,hecouldn’thelpcrying.2、Shelayinbed.Shewaslisteningtomusic.Shelayinbed,listeningtomusic.分词短语作状语放在句首，可表原因、时间、条件等。分词短语作状语放在句末，可表伴随、结果等。LiMingdidn’tfinishhiswork,sohewascriticizedbyhisteacher.(用分词改成简单句）Notfinishinghiswork,LiMingwascriticizedbyhisteacher.她出生于北京的一个工人家庭，5岁就开始打乒乓球。（用过去分词短语）Bornintoaworker’sfamilyinBeijing,shebegantoplaytabletennisattheageof5.二、使用介词with的复合结构现在分词过去分词with+n./pron.+不定式形容词副词介词短语这种复合结构多作状语，介词短语、副词、形容词表示宾语所处的状态或特征。1、由于得到许多人的帮助，最终我成功了。Withsomanypeoplehelpingme,Isucceedatlast.2、那项工作做完以后，我们就去中国度假了。Withthejobfinished,wewenttoChinaforaholiday.3、有这些人的帮忙，她试着写一篇论文。Withthesepeopletohelpher,shetriedtowriteapaper.4、他经常开着窗睡觉。Heoftensleepswiththewindowsopen.5、约翰不在,我们有了更多的地方。WithJohnaway,we'vegotmoreroom.6、卫兵手持枪站在门口。Theguardstoodatthegatewithaguninhishands.1、那个男孩低着头站在那儿。Theboystoodthere,withhisheaddown.2、Icouldn’tdomyhomework.Allthatnoisewenton.(用with的复合结构改成简单句)Icouldn’tdomyhomeworkwithallthatnoisegoingon.三、使用形容词短语作状语形容词短语作状语一般用逗号隔开，根据情况可位于句首、句末，也可位于句中，相当于一个从句。Richintouristresources,Beijingattractsagreatnumberofvisitorsfromhomeandabroadeveryyear.形容词或形容词短语作状语，放在句首，作原因、时间、条件或让步状语。Wetorfine,hegotupatsix.形容词或形容词短语作状语，放在句末，表示主语的状态。Sheislyinginbed,awake.他盯着脚印看，内心充满着恐惧。Hestaredatthefootprint,fulloffear.J.K.Rowling,《哈利波特》的作者，出生于英国，从很早的时候就梦想着成为一名作家。BorninEngland,J.K.Rowling,thewriterofHarryPotter,dreamtofbeingawriterfromanearlyage.最近,越来越多的学校成立了名为“起床俱乐部”的协会,来鼓励学生早起床。为此，你校学生会发起了讨论。请按要求写一篇英文报道。【写作内容】讨论话题我校是否要成立“起床俱乐部”时间上周一地点学校会议室讨论范围高一、高二学生代表120人讨论结果67人赞成；理由：培养良好生活习惯，利用好早上的时间。48人反对；理由：是否早起是个人习惯，不需要强求。其余：个人可以按照自己的意愿和方式。Recently,moreandmoreschoolshavesetupspecialorganizationscalled“WakingUpClub”toencouragestudentstogetupearlyinthemorning.AdiscussionconcerningsettingupasimilarassociationinourschoolwasorganizedbytheStudentUnioninthemeetingroomlastMonday.120studentsfromSeniorOneandSeniorTwoparticipatedinit,ofwhom67approveofitbecausetheybelieveitwillgetthemtodevelopgoodhabitsandmakefulluseofthemorningtime.However,48studentsdon’tthinkitagoodideaforthereasonthatwhethertogetupearlydependsonone’shabitandthereisnoneedtoforcethemtodoso.Asfortherestofthestudents,theyinsistthateveryoneshouldfollowtheirownwishesandtheirownlifestyles.你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇通讯。[写作内容]请根据以下信息，写一篇关于揭阳市政府禁止电动摩托车的通讯。市政府决定：从2015年12月31日起市内禁止电动摩托车上路行驶。市民反响：38%支持，43%反对，19%不发表意见。支持理由：电动摩托车车主无证驾驶，经常不遵守交通规则，威胁交通安全。反对理由：使用电动摩托车可节省能源；有助于环境保护；占地少，可缓解停车难问题。参考词汇：电动摩托车electricmotorcycle缓解alleviate[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。[评分标准]句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯TheJieyanggovernmenthasdecidedtobanelectricmotorcycleridinginthecityfromDecember31,2015,whicharousesaheateddiscussionamongcitizens.38%ofthecitizenswelcometheban,43%disapproveofitand19%makenocomment.Citizensinfavorofthebansaythatelectricmotorcyclersdonothaveadrivinglicenceandoftenbreaktrafficrules,posingathreattotrafficsecurity.Thoseagainstitarguethatridingelectricmotorcyclescansaveenergyandishelpfulinprotectingtheenvironment.Besides,electricmotorcyclesoccupylessspaceandthuscanhelpalleviateparkingproblems.