写作课件-my_hobby

WritingMyhobbyMountain-climbing2Surfingtheinternet3Swimming1Whichisyourfavoritehobby?swimminggoodformyhealthkeepgoodshapewhenIwas10yearsoldWhat?1When?2…4Why?3SometipsWhatexactlyyourhobbyis?Whenandhowyoubecameinterestedinthishobby?Whydoyouenjoyyourhobby?Myfavouritehobbyisswimming.IlikeditwhenIwas6yearsold.ThereasonwhyI’minterestedinitisthatitisnotonlygoodformyhealth,butalsocanhelpmetokeepgoodshape.MyhobbyMyhobbyiscollectingstamps（集邮）.Therearemanystampsinmyroom.IstartedcollectingstampswhenIwas12.IenjoycollectingstampsbecauseIcanlearnmanythingsfromthesestamps.Theyarecolorfulandbeautiful.AfterschoolIusuallygotothepostofficeandtherearemanypeoplethere.MyhobbyDifferentpeoplehavedifferenthobbies.MyhobbyislisteningtoEnglishmusic.BecauseIthinklisteningtomusicisagoodwaytorelax.Ioftenlistentocountrymusicinmyfreetime,itnotonlymakesmefeelrelaxbutalsohappy.AndIthinkitcanmakemerememberalotofEnglishwords，itcanhelpmeimprovemyEnglish，SolisteningtoEnglishmusicbecamemyhobby.Hobbyisrealimportantforeveryone，itmakesourlifecolorful.Myhobby•Differentpeoplehavedifferenthobbies.Myhobbyistolistentomusic.WhenIamintrouble,musiccanmakemehappy.WhenIamverytired,itcanmakemecomfortable.Listeningtomusickeepsmeinagoodmoodandit'sgoodformyhealth.SoIlikelisteningtomusic.MyFreeTime•课余时光是我们忙碌学习生活的调节剂。你是如何支配自己的闲暇时间的呢？看电视、做运动、听音乐、阅读书报、郊游、帮父母做家务，还是…•请你以MyFreeTime为题，描述一下自己的课余生活。•要求:1.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数80词左右。2.不得写出自己和学校的真实名称。MyFreeTime•Ihavealotofthingstodoinmyfreetime.UsuallyItakeexerciseafterschool.Ilikebasketballandvolleyballverymuch.Sportshelpmetokeephealthyandstudybetter.IoftenwatchTVordosomereadingintheevening.SometimesIlistentomusicforawhile.Ifinditagoodwaytorelaxmyself.Ofcourse,Ihelpmyparentswiththehouseworkattheweekends.Icleanthehouse,washclothesandlearncooking.SometimesIgoonafieldtripwithmyfriends.Wealwayshaveagoodtime!•在一次英语班会上，老师请同学们以ProudofMySchool请根据下面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。内容包括学校面貌，你在校的活动，以及你喜欢学校的原因。•提示词：big\small,trees,playgames,family,bekindto,be\feelproudofProudofMySchoolMyschoolisverybigwithseveraltallbuildings.Wehaveabeautifulplaygroundwithlotsoftreesaroundit.Therearemanyflowerseverywhere.Mybusyschoollifealwaysmakesmehappy.Ihavelotsoffunatschool.Inotonlyhaveallkindsofclasses,butalsotakepartincolorfulactivitiesafterclasses.Iplaygamesanddolotsofsports,likeplayingbasketball,footballandtabletennis.Ilovemyschoolbecauseit’slikeabigfamily.Thestudentsarefriendlyandtheteachersinmyschoolareaskindtous.Ifeelproudofmyschoolbecauseitisoneofthebestschoolsinmyheart.•现分析该篇作文如下：第一步：会意。所谓会意，就是要考生进行细心地审题。1）“Z”就是重要性。根据内容要点的提示，知道这篇文章的主题是自信。这篇文章可以以自信的重要性开始，强调某物的重要性，2）“B”就是并列。用两至三个并列点来阐述文章的主题。内容提示中的“自信给人勇气尝试，使人成功”和“梦想和自信使人勇于面对困难”阐述了自信的两个好处givesbthecouragetotrynewthingsandachievesuccess和keepusgoingoninthefaceofdifficult。两个并列点可以用what’smore,inaddition或besides连接。（3）“Q”就是强调。用一个总结句，对上述的并列点进行强调。此题中的“没有梦想和自信，不会获得成功”就是对以上的内容进行总结和强调，可以用双重否定句来表达“Noonecanachievesuccesswithoutthem.”（4）“G”就是感悟。第四步：感悟。感悟部分，主观性较强，考生可以根据自己对自信的理解写出一点即可，也可以运用平时积累的一些关于自信的英语格言。如Youhavetobelieveinyourself.That’sthesecretofsuccess.或Confidencedoesn'tneedanyspecificreason.Ifyou'realive,youshouldfeel100percentconfident.第二步：定态。通过审题，知道这篇文章是以自信为主题的议论文，不涉及事情的发展顺序，因此用简单的一般现在时就可以了。第三步：润体。如何才能让文章出彩，绚丽，就需要考生从三个方面出发。首先是词汇。要能够将题中的重要词汇写出来，如：重要性important、勇气courage、困难difficulty、获得成功achievesuccess等。其次是短语的恰当使用，如在解释“自信就是要相信自己”的时候，“相信自己”应为believeinoneself；“给人勇气”可以翻为giveonecourage；“尝试”可以是trynewthings.最后是句型，在这篇文章中宾语从句的使用会使文章增色不少。如，“这首歌告诉我们……”可以翻为Thissongtellsusthat…。表语从句的使用同样可以使文章更加简洁，如，“梦想和自信使人勇于面对困难”，可以翻为：Dreamsandconfidencearewhatkeepusgoingoninthefaceofdifficulties。双重否定表示肯定，用双重否定句可以增加文章的气势，“没有梦想和自信，不会获得成功”就可以用一个双重否定句来描述：Noonecanachievesuccesswithoutthem。第四步：检查。文章写完以后，并不一定是完工了，考生还需要对时态，词性，以及主谓一致问题进行检查，看是否存在错误。IBelieveIcanFlyIBelieveICanFlyisanicesongbyR.Kelly.Thissongtellsusthatconfidenceisveryimportant.Whenapersonhasconfidence,hebelievesinhimself.Hebelievesthathecanandwillsucceed,andthisgiveshimthecouragetotrynewthings.Dreamsandconfidencearewhatkeepusgoingoninthefaceofdifficulties.Noonecanachievesuccesswithoutthem.Ifyoubelieveyoucanfly,thenyoucanreallyflysomeday.IthinkIwillnevergiveupwheneverImeetanydifficulties.I’llrememberconfidenceisthepromiseforachievingsuccess.•TheSpringFestival•SpringFestivalisthemostimportantandpopularfestivalinChina.BeforeSpringFestival,thepeopleusuallycleananddecoratetheirhouses.Andtheygotobuysomeflowers.Childrenlikethefestivalverymuch,becausetheycanhavedeliciousfoodandwearnewclothes.Theycanalsogetsomemoneyfromtheirparents.Thismoneyisgiventochildrenforgoodluck.DuringSpringFestival,Peopleoftengettogetherandhaveabigmeal.Somepeopleeatdumplingsfordinner.•IloveSpringFestival.Q&AThanks!!!