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PET5写作：困难与攻关刘云雁讲课思路从整体到局部篇章结构——段落展开——句子编织——词汇替换——总结各种困难观点选择无法展开无话可说观点选择什么是观点选择？AgreeorDisagree是不是只有这两种？观点选择完全同意基本同意分情况讨论基本不同意完全不同意一边倒观点选择完全同意基本同意分情况讨论基本不同意完全不同意让步观点选择完全同意基本同意分情况讨论基本不同意完全不同意折中方案观点的体现无处不观点开头时表明主体中展开结论时强调一边倒PK：凤姐应该在世界选美大赛上获得冠军Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Lifetodayiseasierandmorecomfortablethanitwaswhenyourgrandparentswerechildren.一边倒Thesisstatement:Bornin1980s,Ithinktoday’slifeiseasierandmorecomfortablecomparedtothedayswhenmygrandparentswereyoung.一边倒TopicsentenceFirstly,withtheadvancementoftechnology,peopletodayhavemoreentertainmentoptions.Secondly,thetransportationtakespeopletotheirdreamdestinationsThirdly,educationisaccessibletomorepeoplethaninthepast.一边倒ConclusionLifetodayismuchmorecomfortableandeasierthanbefore让步PK：吴彦祖和范伟，你应该嫁哪个？让步我对吴彦祖是充满无限向往的，尽管范伟有一点点优势吴彦祖长的帅吴彦祖会演戏但是吴彦祖有太多fans，使我感到不安，而范伟叔叔比较安全但是，这也无法阻挡我对吴彦祖的向往让步Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Advertisingistheonlycauseofunhealthyeatinghabits.让步Thesisstatement:AlthoughIconcedethatadvertisingisoneofthefactorsaccountingforpeople’sunhealthyeatinghabits,it’stooexaggeratedtosaythatadvertisingistheonlyreason,becausethereareanothertwoelementsthatcannotbeneglected.让步Topicsentence：Heavyworkloadkeepspeoplefromhavingtheirmealsregularly,whichisconsideredasoneofunhealthyeatinghabits.Besides,theso-calledjunkfoods,suchasfriedchicken,cheeseburgersandcola,areindeedmoredelicious,especiallyforchildren.让步ConclusionAdvertisingisoneofthecausesofunhealthyeatinghabitsbutnottheonlyone.分情况讨论Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Itismoreimportantforstudentstounderstandideasandconceptsthantolearnfacts.分情况讨论Thesisstatement:Ideasandfactsareequallyimportantaspectsoflearning分情况讨论TopicsentenceOntheonehand,ideasandconceptscanrenderinnumerablefactsandphenomenontoconciseandelegantrules,principlesandlaws,whichareeasiertograsp.Ontheotherhand,factscanhelpstudentstovalidateideasandconceptstheylearnedintheclasses.分情况讨论ConclusionIdeasandfactsareofequalimportance.各种困难观点选择无法展开无话可说段落展开因果展开对比展开例证展开细节因果展开衔接词It’sbecauseThereasonisthatWhathappensisthatAsaresult真题练习MoviesandTVprogramsmadeinone’sowncountryaremoreinterestingthanthosemadeinothercountries万能理由CostConvenienceSafetyHealthStressCharacterKnowledgeandinformationEco-friendly对比展开不同事物比较同一事物比较举例：春节是一个重要的节日。例证展开一般性例证个人生活例证名人例证假设情况调查和研究名人例证MoviestarSingerPoliticianBusinessmanScientist假设情况一周只工作三天可以帮助我安排假期旅行。假设我打算去夏威夷看旅游······调查和研究常用句型AccordingtothesurveyconductedbyChina’sResearchGroupUniversityResearchAgency调查研究表示百分比20percentofthe…表分数基数+序数onefifth;twothirds练习任选一种例证方法展开Increasingteachers’salariesbooststeachers’enthusiasmanddevotionIncollegesoruniversities,studentscanmeetfriendsofdiversebackgrounds.细节何为细节whowhenwherewhatwhyhow刘翔获得了冠军。刘翔经过每天的刻苦训练，获得了2004年雅典奥运会田径项目男子一百一十米栏的冠军。各种困难观点选择无法展开无话可说Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Lifetodayiseasierandmorecomfortablethanitwaswhenyourgrandparentswerechildren.先想中文意思再硬翻过去的人冬天没有暖气，出门见不到汽车，连吃肉都困难，哪有什么幸福可言？过去的人冬天没有暖气，出门见不到汽车，连吃肉都困难，哪有什么幸福可言？Thepastpeopleinwinterdonothaveheatinggas,canseecarexitdoor,wherehavewhathappinesscansay?过去的人冬天没有暖气，出门见不到汽车，连吃肉都困难，哪有什么幸福可言？Thereisnoheatinginwinter,nobustogooutandnomeatonthetable.Wherecanwefindhappiness?过去的人冬天没有暖气，出门见不到汽车，连吃肉都困难，哪有什么幸福可言？过去的人们感觉不幸福，因为没有暖气，他们在冬天会感觉到寒冷；没有汽车，难以到达远方；很难找到肉吃，没有营养。Peopleinthepastdidn’tfeelhappy.Theyfeltcoldwithoutradiators;theyfoundithardtoreachremoteplaceswithoutautomobiles;theymaylackofnutritionwithoutmeatontheirtables.句子太过抽象所有的句子，用词都是一样一样的娱乐圈的女明星都很有特点。周迅很有特点。赵薇很有特点。林志玲也很有特点。娱乐圈的女明星各具特色。周迅声音低沉，赵薇眼睛很大，林志玲腿很长。ExamplePeopleshouldpayforcitybuses英文满分作文Firstly,peopleshouldpayforthecitybusesforbetterservicequality.Foronething,theprofitscanactasadrivenforceforthebuscompaniestoimprovetheirservice.Theytendtoincreasethenumberofbuses,optimizethedrivingcoursesanddowellinmaintainingthebustoattractmorepassengersandenlargetheprofits.Foranother,profitswillsurelyintensifythecompetitionbetweenbuscompanies,whichwillfinallyleadtotheentireimprovementofthebusservicesystem.ExampleDoyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Intwentyyearsfromnowprintedbookswillnolongerexist.