英语写作常见错误分析..

英语写作常见错误二、语言表达的错误从题目或给出的关键词中照搬，不注意单词在句中所做的成分及大小写忽视第三人称单数忽视被动语态的用法三、语言表达的错误重点分析。1．句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整或句子成分多余2．词性误用3．主谓不一致4．根据中文逐字硬译5.名词可数与不可数的误用6.介词to和不定式符号的混淆7.动宾搭配不当8.词组搭配错误9．综合性语言错误:有诸如时态，语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误三、语言表达的错误重点分析1．句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整或句子成分多余。句子不完整（SentenceFragments）在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生．例1．Therearelargenumberofpeoplediefromthedisasters.改为1：Therearealargenumberofpeoplewhodiefromthedisasters.改为2：Therearealargenumberofpeopledyingfromthedisasters.改为3：Alargenumberofpeoplediefromthedisasters.例2．Thereisafirehappened/brokeout.TherewasoccurredafireinHonghuaHotel.改为：Afirehappened/brokeout/occurred.例3．Shelearnknowledgedependonherself.改为：Shelearnsknowledgebyherself.例4．Thedriveroftheredcarwasdiedonthespot.改为：Thedriveroftheredcardiedonthespot.例5．Helpingotherswealsoknowthesignificanceoflife.改为：Wealsorealizethesignificanceoflifethroughhelpingothers.例6．Thepublicserviceadvertisementcatcheveryone’seyes,enableuspaymoreattentionaboutourlivesandsocieties.改为：Thepublicserviceadvertisementscatcheveryone’seyes,whichenablesustopaymoreattentionaboutourlivesandsocieties.例7．Theagingofpopulationbringsomeproblems,suchasthelackoflabor,seniorsfeellonelyandsoon.改为：Theagingofpopulationbringsaboutsomeproblems,suchasthelackoflabor,seniors’senseoflonelinessandsoon.例8．Childrentakecareoftheseniorsshouldmeettheirmaterialneeds,butthisisnotenough,concerningtheirspiritualneedsismoreimportant.改为：Whenitcomestotakingcareoftheseniors,childrenshouldmeettheirspiritualneedsaswellasmaterialneeds.例9．Whenyouropportunitycoming,youattainsuccesswillbeeasier.改为：Whenyouropportunitycomes,itwillbeeasierforyoutoattainsuccess.2．词性误用(MisuseofPartsofSpeech)“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等．例１．It’slikelytosuccessifyouhaveconfident,diligentandintelligence.改为1：Youarelikelytosucceedifyouhaveconfidence,diligenceandintelligence.改为2：It’slikelythatyouwillachievesuccessifyouareconfident,diligentandintelligent.改为3：Itislikelythatyouareonthewaytosuccessifyouhaveconfidence,diligenceandintelligence.例2．Youcan’tsuccesswithoutyourefforts.改为1：Youcan’tsucceedwithoutyourefforts.改为2：Youcan’tobtainsuccesswithoutyourefforts.改为3：Youcan’tbecomesuccessfulwithoutyourefforts.改为4：Successisnolongeroutofreachwithyourgreatefforts.例3．Asthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,---改为：Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,---/Asthescienceandtechnologydevelop---例4．Iusuallydosomepublicservicesforfree,tryingmybesttoserviceforthepublic.改为：Iusuallydosomepublicservicesforfree,tryingmybesttoservethepublic.例5．Thepublicserviceadvertisementisbenefittous.改为1:Thepublicserviceadvertisementisbeneficialtous.改为2:Thepublicserviceadvertisementbenefitsus.改为3：Thepublicserviceadvertisementisofgreatbenefittous.改为4:Webenefitsalotfromthepublicserviceadvertisement.例6．Someseniorswerediedbecauseofwithouttheirchildren’ssupport.改为：Someseniorsdiedforlackoftheirchildren’ssupport.例7．Theoldmanwashitbyacarwhenheacrossthestreet.改为：Theoldmanwashitbyacarwhenhewascrossingthestreet.例8．Thechildrenaresupposedtosparesometimetocompanytheirparents.改为：Thechildrenaresupposedtosparesometimetoaccompanyourparentschatting.例9．Withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomic,theconditionsofourlifeisimproving.改为：Withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomy,theconditionsofourlifeareimproving.例10．Theyneedeconomicalconcerned,butalsomentalconcerned.改为：Theyneednotonlyfinancialsupport,butalsoemotionalsupport.例11．Withthedevelopmentofthemordernsocial,moreandmorefamiliesprefertohaveonechildorevennone,whichcausethesumoftheseniorshasbeenincreasequickly.改为：Withthedevelopmentofthemodernsociety,anincreasingnumberoffamiliesprefertohaveonechildorevennone,whichcausetherapidincreaseofthesumoftheseniors.causesth.causesb.todosth.例12．Thefirewasbecauseofthewrongofelectricity.改为：Thefirewasduetoelectricfault.例13．Thecauseofthefireincludespeople’scarelessanddryweather.改为：Thecauseofthefireincludespeople’scarelessnessanddryweather.例14．AlthoughIamnotaspecializestudentofcomputer,IhaveenoughknowledgeaboutcomputerandIhaveevertakeapart-timesummerjobasasellmanbefore.改为：AlthoughIamnotacomputermajor/astudentmajoringincomputer,IhaveenoughknowledgeaboutcomputerandIhaveevertakenapart-timesummerjobasasalesmanbefore.例15．Manystudentschoicegotothelibraryintheirsparetimeinordertogetmoreknowledge.改为：Manystudentschoosetogotothelibraryintheirsparetimeinordertoupdatetheirknowledge.3．主谓不一致例１．Therearetoomuchthingwecandotoprotectourearth.改为：Therearetoomanythingswecandotoprotectourearth.例2．Thehardwork/hard-workingthenachievethesuccess.改为1：Hardworkthenenables/helpsustoachievethesuccess.改为2:Weareboundtosucceedthroughhardwork.例3．Happymindleadsalonglife.改为:Withhappymindseniorswillleadalonglife.4．根据中文逐字硬译例1:makeusmoreperfect改为：improveourselves/makeusperfect/perfectourselves例2．Ifsomeone’sfamilysituationisnotwell,hecanapplyforscholarship.改为：Ifone’sfamilyisnotwelloff,hecanapplyforscholarship.例3．keepagoodbodyhealth改为：keepfit/healthy例4．Dormitorywashappenedtoafire.改为：Afirehappened/brokeoutinadormitory.例5．Studentsshouldhardtolearnknowledge.改为1：Studentsshouldstudythenewknowledgedi