英语人教版八年级下册Unit4 Writing

ShashiExperimentalMiddleSchoolByWangXiuqinEnjoyasong.Doyouagreethattroubleisafriendorafoe?2.Aretherelationsbetweenyouandyourparentsgood?Howdoesitwork?1.Canyougetonwellwithyourfamily?3.Whodoyouaskforhelpwhenyouhaveproblemswithparents?Thinkabouttheseproblems.Andthengiveusashortreportlikethis.Self-reportIthinkIcangetonwellwithmyfamily.Becauseweloveandunderstandeachotherandwecancommunicatewell,sotherelationsbetweenmeandmyparentsaregreat.Ican’tgetonwithmyparents.Inmyopinion,althoughmyparentsloveme,theycan’tunderstandme,andtheyaretoohardonme.MaybeIwilltalkwiththemandtellthemwhatIthinkformyself.请你以TeenagerHotline节目主持人Mary的身份给Lucy提出建议，并以MakeHomeaHappierPlace为题，将你的建议整理成一篇80字左右的英文短文。DearMary:MyproblemisthatIcan’tgetonwellwithmyparents.WhenIwanttodressinamodernwaytohangoutwithmyfriends,theywon’tallowmetowearamini-skirt.WhenIammakingphonecallstofriends,theyarealwaysaskingifI’mspeakingtoaboyoragirl.That’stoobad！Isthatnormal?Ialwaysfeelawfulandnervous.WhatshouldIdo?LucyReadtheinformationinyourpapersquicklyandanswerthequestions.Shecan’tgetonwithhisfamily.Shealwaysfeelsawfulandnervous.2.Howdoesshefeelathome?1.WhatareLucy’sproblems?Herproblemisthat….Heranotherproblemisthat…ReadingIfyou’reMary,whatadvicecouldyougivetoLucy?1.Talkaboutthefeelingswithhisfamily.2.Tellthemaboutyourschoollifeandyourplansforthefuture.3.Tellthemthetruth.4.Understandthemandthankthem.5....DiscussionWritingguide(写作指南）•Howtowritethecomposition(作文)?Tips:1.审题，确定人称、时态、要点；2.细化要点，列出提纲；3.巧用短语句式、连词、副词及过渡句，连贯行文4.卷面整洁，书写端正。HowtoMakeanoutline(提纲)?Title:Beginning（开头）Mainpart（正文）Ending（结尾）StatementLucy’sproblems.GiveadviceaboutherproblemsShowyouropinionsandhopes.MakehomeahappierplaceMakeHomeaHappierPlaceGiveyouradvicetoLucyaboutherproblems.书面表达要求1.卷面整洁，书写端正。2.恰当使用长短句及各种句式，巧用副词。3.运用所学语言知识，以书面形式完成信息沟通。4.使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。5.运用所学语言知识阐述意见和观点，表达真实思想。Maybeyouthinkyourparentsdon’tunderstandyou.Evaluation（评价）Readyourpartner’scompositionanddecidehowmanystarshe/shecanget,thengivethereasons.Checklist1根据提纲，作文内容完整，层次分明，行文连贯。2给出至少3个方面的建议及相对应的理由。3恰当使用多种句型（至少3种句型）。4语法、句式、拼写正确（小于3处错误为满分）。5正确使用连词、副词、过度词/句，有逻辑顺序。6卷面整洁，书写端正。***********星星数量DoyouagreeordisagreewithMary’sadvice?Why?1.Iagreewithhis/heradvice.Becausemorecommunicationcanmakefamilymembersunderstandeachotherbetterandknowaboutthefeelingstheyhave..2.Idon’tagreewithhis/heradvice.Idon’tthinksheshould….Inmyopinion,sheshould….Unit4Whydon’tyoutalktoyourparents?MakeanoutlineTitle:Beginning:Mainpart:Ending:Howtoimproveyourwriting•Tips:•1.审题，确定人称、时态、要点；•2.细化要点，列出提纲；•3.巧用短语句式、连词、副词及过渡句，连贯行文.•4.卷面整洁，书写端正。Westoreast,homeisthebest！SummaryHomeworkWeChatRewriting:RewriteyouradvicetoLucy&shareitonWeChat.Thanksforlistening!