高中英语漫画作文

高考英语书面表达写作指导之漫画作文(议论类)2013届Difficulties?1.读图2.解意3.谋篇读图1.漫画的题目眼睛2.漫画的画面细节3.漫画的文字观点4.漫画的夸张寓意读图题目画面文字夸张读图Theunderwearisafunnywaytolookathowdesperateparentsget-tryingtopreventchildrenfromseeingthingstheyshouldnot-andmaybeunderwearisn'tagoodthingtoseeeitherbutalotbetterthansomeofthematerialsontheInternet!夸张解意1.辨明褒贬，找准角度夸奖褒扬or批评讽喻？解意２.联系生活，明晰主旨Imagination!解意注意:文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)，切记要认真阅读！！！谋篇3parts:1)describethepicture2)interpretitsmeaning3)giveyouropinionsaboutthephenomenonPart1DescribethepictureThepictureistalkingabout/shows…Thepictureshowsacommonphenomenon.Thepicturedescribesaninterestingphenomenon.Asthepictureshows,…Thepictureaboveisabout…Let’spractise!DescribethepictureWecanseeinthepicturethatachildisburdenedwithheavyschoolbagsaswellashugementalpressure.Whenhewasakid,hewasexpectedtobeabletogotoakeyelementaryschool,andlaterakeyhighschool.Andnowheisexpectedtobeadmittedtoakeyuniversity.Part2InterpretthepictureItseemsveryridiculousthat…However,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.Thepictureshowsthat…Itistheexactreflectionof…Thepictureindicatesthatwe…Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenonthat…Thisisaironical(讽刺的)cartoonwhichdescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamong…Part3Giveyouropinions•Ithink/believethat•AsfarasI’mconcerned,•Inmyopinion,•Frommypointofview,•mightaswell•Itisbetter/advisableto…•Iconsideritnecessary…Onlyinthiswaycan….•must•haveto•Do/Don’t…Polishupyourarticle!1.Touselinkingwordsifnecessary2.Tousecomplicatedstructuresifpossible1.Touselinkingwords表示平行、对等或选择关系aswellas,togetherwith,notonly…butalso...表示转折关系however,inspiteof,nevertheless,otherwise,while表示对比关系onthecontrary,ratherthan,ononehand…ontheotherhand...表示因果关系therefore,asaresult(of),owingto,dueto,thanksto.表示时间、顺序关系first,second…,then,next,finally,foronething...foranother,intheend,表示递进、强调关系besides,what’smore,inaddition,tomakemattersworse,aboveall表示解释、说明关系suchas,forexample,forinstance(例如),inotherwords,andsoon表示结论inshort,inbrief,inaword,ingeneral,onthewhole,inconclusion1.Touselinkingwords2.TousecomplicatedstructuresPeoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff.Shewalkedoutoftheroomandmanystudentsfollowedher.Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutoftheroomTohissurprise,thelittlegirlknewsomanythings.Whatsurprisedhimwasthatthelittlegirlknewsomanythings.被动语态非谓语动词从句Thecouplewassocuriousaboutwildplantsthattheydecidedtotraveltotheforest.倒装Socuriouswasthecoupleaboutwildplantsthattheydecidedtotraveltotheforest.Regularradiobroadcastsbeganin1920.强调句Itwasnotuntilin1920thatregularradiobroadcastsbegan.Manylivesweresavedbecausethereweretheeffortsoffirefighters.虚拟语气Butfortheeffortsoffirefighters,manyliveswouldnothavebeensaved.再叮嘱几句：1.保证三要素－体裁、时态、人称正确体裁：议论文时态：一般现在时人称：第三人称２.避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误1)误解图意大忌！2)不明寓意白写！3)中心不明混乱！再叮嘱几句：1.保证三要素－体裁、人称、时态正确体裁：议论文人称：第三人称时态：一般现在时２.避免漫画类作文的一些常见错误３.控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆）４.搞一精辟的结尾！！Enjoythisexcellentending!•Inmyview,thisphenomenonisnogoodtous,nortooursociety.It’stimethatwetooksomemeasurestoimproveit.Peoplelivinginthesamezonecanbeorganizedtohavesomeactivitiestogether.Weshouldcallonpeopletobefriendlytoeachother.Asapopularsongsays,“Ifeverybodygivesalittlelovetoeachother,theworldwillbecometheseaoflove.”Enjoythisexcellentending!Frommypointofview,reducingthechildren’sheavyburdenrequireseffortsfromtheschools,thesocietyaswellastheparents.Educationthatbreakstherulesofchildren’sdevelopmentinbodyandmindisboundtofail.Thus,parentstogetherwithteachersshouldbecomeactivesupportersofall-aroundcharactereducationandworkcloselywitheachotheringuidingthestudentstowardsabalanceddevelopment.一篇好的英语漫画作文•仔细审题•准确立义•规范行文•整洁书写Neat!例：(2011·江苏卷)下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家的妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：1．描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；2．结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；3．举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。注意：1.可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。思路点拨：本文为看图作文，考查角度独到新颖(为家长减负)，主题是孝敬父母。描述图片内容时应使用第三人称，在写自己的感想和减负措施时应用第一人称。短文基本时态应为一般现在时。可按题目提供的内容来安排写作顺序。文章可分为三个部分：(1)描述图片内容；(2)自己的感想；(3)举例说明自己为家长减负可做的事情。后两个部分为开放性写作，考生可根据自己的生活体验来自由发挥。【参考答案】Theburdenofstudentshasbeenahottopicforyears,buttheloadofparentshasreceivedlittleattention,especiallyfromtheirownchildren.Thepictureshowsusatouchingmomentwhenalittlegirlcomestogreetherworkingmom.Realizinghermommustbeverytiredafteraday'swork,thegirlhelpstoremovethebagfromhershoulder.Inresponse,themomkneelsdowntoshowhowhappyandthankfulshefeels.【参考答案】Allthisremindsmeofmymotherwhohasbeendoingwhatevershecouldtoletmehavethebest.But,totallyengagedinmyownstudy,Iseldompayattentiontowhatmotherneedsandfeels,andalwaysthinkstudyingwellistheonlythingIcoulddoinreturn.NowIknowIcandomybittohelpwiththeeverydaywashing,bedroomcleaning,oratleastpreparebreakfastmyself,soastosharemother'sdailyburden.Thepictureconvincesmeitisevenmoreimportanttobeagooddaughterthana“good”student.•高考作文分析遣词———三原则高考写作中的遣词可以遵循三原则：复杂原则，多变原则和温暖原则。1.复杂原则是指可以用一些“牛词”来代替一些“土词“比如说，“忙于做某事”，一般的说法是：bebusydoingsth,使用复杂原则后，我们可以用beengagedindoingsth.;beabsorbedinsth;beburiedinsth等。2.多变原则就是当文章中要写两处相同中文意思的词时，善于用不同的词或者词组代换，比如最后一段，两处写到“努力”就可以使用不同的短语“sparenoeffect”和“tryone’sbest”。3.温暖原则就是，任何一个名词都可以用一个形容词，或者定语从句，或者是