英语书面表达高分技巧和策略

NMET对书面表达的要求要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。本部分满分30分，所需时间约为30分钟。NMET书面表达评分原则1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。第五档.25~30分第四档.19~24分第三档.13~18分第二档.7~12分第一档.1~6分0分语言地道，规范覆盖所有内容要点2、主要内容：内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；语言的得体性应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分3、拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。4、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？3学会使用较高级的词汇---完美句子词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。从评分标准可知，运用高级的词汇对提高书面表达的分数至关重要。本节课的学习目标⒉学会使用较丰富的表达方式---美化句子在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句型，要灵活运用各种语法结构，运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。1.学会使用恰当的连接词---连接句子使用恰当连接词，对写出一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使整篇文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章有一定的流畅性，以使文章层次清晰，行文连贯。在同一句话题上补充内容1）房租合理，地理位置也很好。2）我不想去了，另外，我也太累了。可以采用的连接词：whatismore,besides,also,moreover,inadditionTherentisreasonable,andmoreover,thelocationisperfect.Idon’twanttogo;besides,I‘mtootired.换一种方法表述可以使用的连接词：inotherwords,thatistosay,namely,eg.1）让我们回到我们最初的计划，也就是说，你先乘飞机去，我们接着带这设备开车去。Let’sgobacktotheoriginalplan,thatistosay,yougoaheadbyplaneandwe’llfollowbycarwiththeequipment.2)你在考试中的表现没有达到预期的要求，换句话说，你考试没及格。Yourperformanceintheexamdidnotreachtherequiredstandard—inotherwords,youfailed.对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说：onthewhole,inshort,allinall,ingeneral,inaword，tosumup,tosummarize,inbrief,finally,inconclusion,generallyspeaking,asyouknow,intheendeg.1)总的来说，世界上沙漠的面积在逐年增加。Onthewhole,theareaofdesertintheworldisgrowingeveryyear.2)总的来说，这是我看过的最好的电影。Inshort,thefilmwasthebestI’veeverseen.5.其他TransitionalWord举例类(强调类）(递进）让步类转折类Forexample,forinstance,foronething,foranother,namely,suchas,thatisindeed,aboveall,inanycase,infact,Mostimportantofall,what’smoreinaddition,besides,again,also,moreover,furthermore,What’smore,Worsestill,afterall,but,evenif,although,as,evenso,despite,inspiteof,wh-everbut,however,yet,instead,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary1、词的灵活多变1、很，非常1)Sheis____happy.2)I’m_____sorry.3)Themoviewas______good.4)Hewas_______kindtome.5)Wewere_______shockedatthenews.6)Thisstoryis________significant.7)Thebossfelt________pleasedwithmywork.8)Wewere_________excitedatthenews.9)WhatIsaidis________clear.10)Ifelt__________exhaustedbythetimeIgothome.veryterriblyprettymostgreatlyhighlyquiteextremelyperfectlytotally2.喜欢：1)Idon’t______baseball.2)She_______playingthepiano.3)Manyfootballfans______________Beckham.4)Myson____________football.5)Manypeople______________JinYong’smartialartsfictions.6)Hehas_____________thedrug.7)Someadults____________computergamesaswell.8)He____________rockmusic.9)She_______________________personalcomputers.careforisfondofarecrazyaboutismadaboutarekeenon/aboutbeenaddictedtoarehookedonhasapassionforhasagreatenthusiasmforThereisagirl.Sheissittingbetweenus.Thisisabook.Thebookwasboughtyesterday.Thereisagirlwhoissittingbetweenus.Thisisabookwhichwasboughtyesterday.Mymothersatinachairwithanewspaperinherhand.Sheleftwithoutsayinggoodbye.Hediedwithhisworkstillunfinished.使用倒装句ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.→Hedidn’thavesupperuntilhismothercameback.→WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.Notuntilhismothercamebackdidhehavesupper.使用强调句Itwaswhattheheadmastersaidatthemeetingthatreallysurprisedus.Whattheheadmastersaidatthemeetingreallysurprisedus.使用感叹句Howgladweweretoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.Weweretoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.Let’scometothemainteachingbuilding.TheschoollibrarystandsatthebackofthemainbuildingLet’scometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.使用定语从句1.Pleasecallmebeforehand.Icanmeetyouattheairport.DocallmebeforehandsothatIcanmeetyouattheairport.2.therainwasgettingmoreandmoreheavilyandtheyhadtowaitTheyhadtowaitbecausetherainwasgettingmoreandmoreheavily.使用各种状语从句使用虚拟语气Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.→①Icouldnothavepassedthephysicsexambutfor/withoutyourhelp.→②Ifyouhadnothelpedme,Icouldnothavepassedthephysicsexam.改变语态Weshouldmakeeffortstoreduceairpollution.Ourgovernmentshouldtakestrongandeffectivemeasurestoprotectourenvironment.→Strongandeffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoprotectoutenvironment..Greateffortsshouldbemadetoreduceairpollution.使用短语Thequalityofthecarisgood.Thepriceofthecarisreasonable.→Itwasrainingheavily,buttheywentonwiththework.→….Inadditiontothegoodquality,thepriceofthecarisreasonableaswell.Despite/Inspiteoftheheavyrain,theywentonwiththework.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.Theplanturnedout(tobe)afailure.Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.Atthenewsofhisdeath,shewentpalewithsorrow.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.ShewenttoAustriafor/withthepurposeofstudyingmusic.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.Weallthinkheisagreatman.3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.4.Thestudentsthereneedn’tpayfortheirbooks.5.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.一、你能用较高级的词汇改写下列句子吗Weallthinkhighlyofhim.Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.Booksarefreeforthestudentsthere.以上我们可以看出，要使文章连贯、流畅，就要使用较高级词汇、复杂句子结构以及恰当的连接词，才能给人一种美的享受，才能在考试的评分中得到较高的档次。但是高级词汇不等于生僻词汇，复杂的句子结构不等于句子越长越好，总