高三英语作文后的思考课件

①SusanKrantz与《外籍教师点评英语作文》一书②《高中英语课程标准》解读一、背景介绍二、思考之一语言表达方式受传统习惯的影响/英语文化中的人士的表达方式1、中国英语教师教作文的方式与errorgravity中国人往往注意理性分析、逻辑思维,往往注重结果,总要得出结论。西方人写作则较多利用实证分析、实例分析方法。他们注重对过程和事实的描述,往往不得出结果,让读者自己分析、并得出结论。“Englishwritingismoredirect.Thingsareclearlyexplained.Detailsorfactsarerequiredtosupportthetopic.”（SusanKrantz2001）我们来看一看美国明尼苏达州雷德温市市长重访浙江衢州后，对衢州所发生的变化所发出的感言。（摘录）“OneFootintheFutureandOneFootinthePast”.ThisismyforemostimpressionasIvisitQuzhou.Onecannotmisstheoldandthenewexistingsidebyside.Asaforeigneritisdifficulttosaywhichisthe‘RealChina’.Isitthelargenumberofpeopleridingtheiroldbicyclesloadeddownwithgoodsorisittheblackshinyluxurycarbeingdrivendownthestreet?IsittheschoolinruralareaswiththeleakingrooforisitthemodernschoolsbeingbuiltinQuzhou?Isitthefourlaneexpresswayorisitthesinglelanewalkingpathtoaremotevillage?EverywhereIlookIseetheoldandthenewexistingsidebyside.“OneFootintheFutureandOneFootinthePast”.…Iamespeciallyfamiliarwithfarmsandfarmcooperatives.MystayinQuzhouhasprovidedmewiththeopportunitytoparticipateinmeetingsaboutagriculture.WhenIattendthemeetingsitseemsasifIhavebeentherebefore.Iamthinking-amIwatchingarerunof“AnOldMovie”?ThistypeofmeetingshastakenplaceinAmericancommunitiesandfarmsanumberofyearsago.Ihavewalkedalongtheriverbankwithafreshbreezeblowingthatpickedmyspiritsupandmademeforgetmyhomesickness.IhavegazedacrosstherivertothenewwesternsectionofQuzhouwhereallthenewgrowthofthetownisexpectedtogo.下面几段话是摘自美国明尼苏达州雷德温市希尔顿剧院经理、导演希恩-多尔兹先生在衢州二中任教时所写的感言。DuringmysecondweekatQuzhouNo.2MiddleSchool,Ihavethehighhonorofworkingwithagroupofdedicated,hardworking,andverysmartteachersandadministratorswhohavemademefeelverywelcomeandinstantlyapartoftheirteam.Eachdaycontinuestobeawonderfulnewadventureinfood,people,andplaces.Itisincrediblyancientyetyoung,brash,andfullofenergy.Theownerwaslounginginachairdozing.Myfriendgothisattention.Hesaid:Itprobablywon'tsoundtoogood,Iamalittledrunk.Themusicianbrokeawayfromherbusydaytotapepickstoherfingers,laboriouslytunethe21-stringedinstrument.Music,though,isuniversal,andbeingabstract,canbesharedequallyandwithouttranslation.ThisculturalbaseofChina,thisstrainofmusicthatvibratesthroughthesoulofapeople,andthiswayofmakingandsharingmusic,willserve,inthisoutsider'smostlyignorantopinion,aspartofthesolidgrounduponwhichChinacanbuildadynamicandpowerfulfuture.中国学生的句子1．原句：Ithinkifyouknowthetwosidesofthenetting,youwillhaveagoodwayofusingthecomputer.修改后句子：TheInternethastwosides,youwilljusthavetofindagoodwayofusingit.2．原句：WhenIhavefreetime,I’llenjoythemverymuch.修改后句子：IthinkwhenIhavefreetimeIwillplaywiththemalot.3．原句：Fishing,collectingstamps,Ijustlikethem.修改后句子：Fishing,collectingstamps,Ilikethemall.4．原句：Ontheothersidetheremaybeafamousemblematicbuildingofthecountry,andalsohavethevalueofthecoinandthedate.修改后句子：Ontheothersidetheremaybeafamousemblematicbuildingofthecountry,thedateandthevalueofthecoin.5．原句：Inthebasketballcourttwostrongteamswereplayingabittermatch.Oneoftheteamsisours,theotherisclass4’steam.修改后句子：Onthebasketballcourtthereweretwoverygoodteamsplayingabittermatch,oneoftheteamswasours,theotheronewasclass4’s.6．原句：Thelastminutearrivedandthescoreswereequal.Wepushedforvictoryandwewon23-21.修改后句子：Finallythelastminutearrivedandthescoreswereequal,wereallywantedtowinandsowetriedourhardestandthefinalscorewas23-21.Wewon.7．原句：IflewwithNorthwestAirlinesfromShanghaiPudongInternationalAirport，wepassedacrossthePacificOceanandourplanearrivedinDetroitat10:30inthemorning,localtime.修改后句子：IflewwithNorthwestAirlinesfromShanghaiPudongInternationalAirport，weflewacrossthePacificOcean.WearrivedinDetroitat10:30inthemorning,localtime8．原句：Thesecondfloorincludedabouttenrooms.Somewereusedtobeoffices,theotherswerebedroomsforsomeworkers.修改后句子：Somewereusedasoffices,theotherswereusedsasbedroomforworkers.9．原句：Iwasverygladwhenwewenttothecountry,becauseoftheinterestingthingsthere.修改后句子：Ialwaysenjoyseeingthebeautifulthingsinthecountryside.10．原句：OntheeveningofOct18,theChinesenationalfootballteamgotthetickettotheWorldCup.修改后句子：OntheeveningofOct.18,theChinesenationalfootballteamsecuredtheirplaceintheWorldCup.11．原句：Thefirstcompanysaidthatmysisterwasnotoldenoughandthenwelostourwayandcouldn’tfindthesecondcompany.修改后句子：Mysisterfailedingettingthatjobthatwasbecausetheysaidshewastooyoung.教材中的经典句子：1.Everynowandthen,wegettheitchtotravel.Thisphenomenon,mayexplainwhypeoplespendsomuchmoneyontripstointerestingplaces.2.DowntownRioisthecity’sculturalandhistoricalheart.3.AwalkthroughdowntownRioisahistorylessonandanadventure.4.AwalkaroundKitzbuhelisafeastfortheeyes—alivelymixofoldvillagecultureandtheexcitementofaninternationaltouristarea.5.LocatedinsouthernAustria,Kitzbuhelisaparadiseforskiers.以下两篇短文是衢州二中高三（1）班祝嘉玮同学在学习了高二课本ThewaterPlannet及Destinations后写的文章：PoorsanitationImaginethis,whenyougointoapublictoilet,anunpleasantsmellcomestoyou,thefloorisalmostcoveredbyrubbishandthetapisnolongerrunning,there'snotissueandofcoursenoliquidsoap.Whatwouldyoufeel?Itisclearthatnoonecouldtoleratesuchthings.Andwhat'smore,walkingalongthestreetandlookatthedustbins,they'resodirtyan