英语观点对比类作文写作技巧

观点对比类作文写作技巧书面表达(满分30分)暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。(2006年陕西卷）优点缺点待在家中花费少，舒适方便不能亲身了解外界外出旅游增长知识，开阔眼（horizon/view）花费多，旅途不便注意：1.词数100-1202.短文必须包括表中所列要点。3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Thesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.thestructureofthearticletopicsentencefortheopinionagainsttheopinionendingsentencediamond1.convenientandcomfortablecostless/savemoneylosethechanceofgettingtoknowtheoutsideworld2.increaseone’sknowledgeandwidenone’shorizons/views1.(待在家中)花费少，舒适方便不能亲身了解外界2.(外出旅游)增长知识，开阔眼界花费多，旅途不便spendmoremoneyandgothroughsometroubleonthewaybeginning1.havedifferentviewsonsth/2.reacttosthindifferentways.3.differintheirattitudestowardssth.conclusionmyopinion(待在家中)(外出旅游)Thesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.someothersThesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.Studentsreacttothisproblemindifferentways.Someareinfavorofstayingathome.Theysayit’sbothconvenientandcomfortable.What’smore,theycansetasidemoneyforotherpurposes.ButTheywilllosethechanceofgettingtoknowtheoutsideworld.However,othersprefertogoouttravelingasitcanenrichtheirknowledgeandbroadentheirviews.Buttheywillspendmoremoneyandgothroughsometroublewhiletraveling.Inmyopinion,itwouldbemuchbettertostayathome.ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit.Whenstayingathome,IgettodowhatIlike,suchasreadingbooks,watchingTV,andhelpingmyparentswiththehousework.Inaword,tostayathomeisbetterthantotravel.thestructureofthearticletopicsentencefortheopinionagainsttheopinionendingsentencediamond介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是……WehadadiscussionaboutwhetheritisnecessarytostartlearningEnglishfromchildhood我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生如何选择高考志愿……We’vehadasurveyonhowtochoosetheircourses,majorsanduniversities.我写信是要告诉你我们的一场讨论，讨论内容是……Wehaveheldadiscussionaboutwhetheritisgoodornotforatopstudenttoshareadeskwithaslowerstudent.过渡句Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups.Differentpeople,however,havedifferentopinionsonthismatter.Differentpeople,however,thinkquitedifferentlyonthismatter.在这个问题上大家意见有分歧。主要有两种不同意见。然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。介绍正方观点：Sixtypercentofthestudentsarefortheidea.Sixtypercentofthestudentsthinkitnecessaryto…Somepeoplethinkthat…Accordingtothem,allofusshould...Somebelievethat…进一步介绍正方观点What’smore,wecan…aswellas…Besides,it’s…,which…介绍反方观点However,…ofthestudentsthink…Ontheotherhand,…ofthestudentsthink…However,othershavedifferentopinions.But…ofthestudentsthink…Othersarguethat…Intheiropinion,…进一步介绍反方观点What’sworse…What’smore…Inaddition,…Besides,…Plus,…First,…Second,…Third,…总结句(未达成一致)Inshort,noagreementhasbeenreachedyet.Sofar,noagreementhasbeenreached.Inshort,thestudentshavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.本人观点：AsfarasIamconcerned,…….(Inmyopinion,…….;It’smyopinionthat……)Foronereason,……….Foranotherreason………Inaword,…….对比类写作实战模版★★★议论文的框架---对比观点题型（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1．有一些人认为…2．另一些人认为…3．我的看法…Thetopicof①-----------------（主题）isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof②-----------------（支持A的理由一）Whatismore,③-------------(理由二).Moreover,④---------------(理由三).WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).Frommypointofview,Ithink⑧----------------（我的观点）.Thereasonisthat⑨--------------------(原因).Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawisechoice.（2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点Somepeoplebelievethat①----------------（观点一）.Forexample,theythink②-----------------（举例说明）．Anditwillbringthem③---------------(为他们带来的好处).Inmyopinion,Ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint.Foronething,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).Foranotherthing,⑤---------(反对的理由之二)．FormallwhatIhavesaid,Iagreetothethoughtthat⑥-----(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．(3)不同观点列举型（选择型）Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat__作文题目.Butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.Amajorityofpeoplethinkthat_观点一______.Intheirviewsthereare2factorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows:inthefirstplace,___原因一_______.Furthermore,inthesecondplace,___原因二____.Soitgoeswithoutsayingthat___观点一_____.People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeopleholdtheideathat_观二_____.Intheirpointofview,ontheonehand，___原因一_______.Ontheotherhand,____原因二_____.Therefore,thereisnodoubtthat___观点二______.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat__观点一或二_.Itisnotonlybecause________,butalsobecause_______.Themore_______,themore________.词汇,句型,语法多样化1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？1.(因为)_____hishelp,Ifinishedtheworkatlast.ThankstoAsaresultofOwingtoDueto因为Becauseof/with2.Moreroadswillhavetobebuiltwithmorecars,__________（所以）we’llhavelessfieldtogrowrice.thereforeSoasaresult/consequencethus结果3.Therentisreasonable,__________,thelocationisperfect.房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。what’smoremoreover/furthermoreinadditionbesides另外(递进）4.Theyoungmandidn’tenjoyhisoldjob._________(相反)hefinds