托福作文 开头和结尾

开头段落Tension开头段落的三个目的：1、吸引读者（介绍写作的背景）2、介绍话题（限定话题）3、介绍主题（通过主题句表达你的立场、态度或观点）IntroductoryparagraphGeneralstatementLimitingtopicThesisstatementConnectivewords1.背景的写法社会上关于话题的特点问题关于话题的常识Parentsarethebestteachers.Obviously,theearliestteacherswehaveinourlivesinmostcasesareourparents,andtheyaregenerallyinvolvedinthedevelopmentandeducationoftheirchildren.Somepeoplethinkgovernmentsshouldspendasmuchmoneyaspossibleexploringouterspace.OtherpeopledisagreeandthinkgovernmentsshouldspendthismoneyonourbasicneedsonEarth.Whichofthesetwoopinionsdoyouagreewith?例子:Theenormoussumsofmoneyspentonexploringouterspaceisanissuethatisarousingmoreandmorecontroversy.1.题目改写Theenormoussumsofmoneyspentonexploringouterspace替换Topicword“money”2.常用于引题背景的句型…isanissuethatisarousingmoreandmorecontroversy.一.题目改写，要具备利用同义、近义词进行改写的能力。二.积累并灵活运用一些经常用于引题写作的句型，但是杜绝生搬硬套。套用句型一:Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconcernedaboutthephenomenonthat…Doyouthinkthatyoungpeopleshouldtakeseveraldifferentkindsofjobsbeforetheytakeacareerinalongterm?Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconcernedaboutthephenomenonthatyoungpeoplearealwayscomplainingabouttheirjobs.Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconcernedaboutthephenomenonthatyoungpeopleoftenjumpfromonejobtoanother.Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconcernedaboutthephenomenonthatuniversitygraduatesarehelplessatwork,fortheycanhardlyapplywhattheyhavestudiedintowhattheyarecurrentlydoing.Doyouagreeordisagree:Thepurposeoftelevisionistoeducate,nottoentertain.Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconcernedaboutthekindoftelevisionprogramsaccessibletochildren.Parentsareworriedabouttheirchildrenwilllearnsomethingbadontelevision.例句：Nowadays,agrowingamountofattentionisbeingpaidtothekindoftelevisionprogramsaccessibletotheyoungpeople.套用句型二:…playanincreasinglyessential/indispensable/vitalrolein…2010年5月16日Doyouagreeordisagreethatimprovingschoolsisthemostimportantfactorinsuccessfuldevelopmentofacountry.Itisundeniablethatschoolsplayanincreasinglyessentialroleinthedevelopmentofacountrybecausestudentscanlearnknowledge,developskillsandcultivatecharactersinschools.Itisundeniablethatschools,wheretheyounggenerationslearnknowledge,developskillsandbuildcharacters,playanincreasinglyessentialroleinnurturingacivilizedsociety.2009年3月14日Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Itisbettertospendmoneyontravellingandvacationthantosavemoneyforthefuture.WiththegloomyoutlookofeconomyintheUnitedStates,itseemsthatsavingmoneyforfutureplaysanincreasingessentialroleinpreparingforthe“rainydays”.套用句型三：…ischanging/hastransformedourlives.适用于高科技Doyouagreeordisagree:Peoplemustusevariousresourcestogetnews.例句：Theinformationtechnologyhastransformedhumanhistory.Intheolddays,societalnewscanonlybeannouncedbythegovernmentofficialsthroughradiobroadcastsornewspapers.Whileintoday’sworld,asamepieceofnewscanbepresentedwithfreedombyallkindsofmedium.套用句型四：…isincreasinglyprevalent/popularinthecontemporaryworld.Doesthepublicneedtopayformasstransit?例句：Asprivatetransportsareincreasinglypopularinthecontemporaryworld,manyresidentsquestionthatwhetherpeoplestillneedtopayformasstransit,orfurther,whetherthereisstillaneedforpublictransportsystem.Governmentsshouldfocusmoreonpreservationofenvironmentratherthaneconomicdevelopment.例句：WithrapiddevelopmentofeconomyintheUnitedStatesinthe1990s,protectionofenvironmentgainedanincreasingpopularityinthematerializedworld.2.话题和主题句的写作一.开门见山“Noteverythingthatislearnediscontainedinbooks.”Bothexperiencesandbooksareveryessentialresources,andbothofthemhaverelevantmerits.Childhoodyearsarethemostimportantyearsinaperson’slife.Itisgenerallyacceptedthataperson’schildhoodyearsareveryimportantyearsofaperson’slife,butitishardlyappropriatetosaythoseyearsarethemostimportant.二.引蛇出洞Shouldaschoolteachstudentsgeneralsubjectsorspecificcareers?Somepeoplebelievethattheschoolshouldteachstudentsaboutgeneralsubjectsinsteadofspecificcareersandjobs.HoweverIhavetheoppositeopinionSomepeoplesuggestthatstudentsshouldwearuniformsinschool,Idoubtwhethertheargumentcanbearmuchanalysis/makemuchsense/holdmuchwater.Insomecountries,teenagershavejobswhiletheyarestillstudents.Doyouthinkthisisagoodidea?Asateenagerstudent,Ienjoyedhavingajob,becauseitprovidedmewiththemoneythatIneededformyschooling.However,asanadult,Icantrulyappreciatethepressureofateenagerwhohastodividehisorherenergybetweenstudyandanafter-classjob.Ithinkkeepingajobasateenagerstudentisrelativelydifficultandthesestudentsshouldnothaveorbeforcedtohavejobs.参考句型：1.Somepeoplethinkthat….Tobefrank,Icannotagreewiththeiropinionforthereasonsbelow.2.Somepeoplesuggestthat….ButIcanhardlysharethispointofviewforseveralreasons.三.审时度势Whichdoyourprefer,atraditionalhouseoramodernhouse?1.Choosingahomeisaverypersonaldecisiontomake.Somepeopleprefertoliveintraditionalhouses,whileotherswouldratherliveinmodernapartmentbuildings.Personally,Iwouldprefertoliveinamodernbuildingoveratraditionalhouse.Modernbuildingsprovidebetterservices,theyarestrongerandsafer,andtheyaremoreconvenientlylocated.