高考英语作文写作公开课

英语写作训练•英语看图类作文：•1.记叙文•2.议论文•3.说明文（含图表）遇到不会写的单词怎么办？2种方法：（1）同义替换遇到不会写的单词怎么办？(1）这人很变态：BT?bedifferentfromnormalpeoplestrange/odd/peculiar（2）难民•difficultpeople？•thepeoplewhosufferedfromadisasterX√√X√遇到不会写的单词怎么办？（3）老百姓•oldhundredsex•thegeneralpublic•ordinarypeople•peoplefromallwalksoflife四喜丸子fourhappymeatballsmeatballsXX√遇到不会写的单词怎么办？（2）上义词或下义词代替上义词是对事物的概括性、抽象性说明下义词是事物的具体表现形式。遇到不会写的单词怎么办？（3）铁锹、锄头、镐：thetoolswhichareusedtoplanttrees拐杖：•Thetoolwhichisusedtohelpthedisabledtostand/walk•二氧化碳：carbondioxide•一氧化碳：carbonoxide•poisonousgasesspade,hoe,pickstick没有不会写的，只有不会想的！残疾人：•thepeoplewhocannotmove/speak/thinknormally大众媒体大众媒体的具体表现形式是TV，radio,newspaper,internetthedisabledmassmedia•北京很迷人。•Beijingissobeautifulthatmanypeoplecomehere.•Beijingissobeautifulthatmanypeoplecomehereeveryyear.•Beijingissobeautifulthatthousandsofpeoplecomehereeveryyear.•Beijingissobeautifulthatthousandsofpeoplecomehereeveryyearfromallaroundtheworld.•Beijingissobeautifulthatthousandsofpeople,nomatteryoungorold,menorwomen,comehereeveryyearfromallaroundtheworld.•高考英语看图作文五步曲•一“抓”为抓主题。•二“列”为列要点。•三“变”为变要点为句子。•四“连”为连句成篇。•五“检”为文章检查。假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公园野餐。你们的英国朋友Peter也应邀参加。请根据下面的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。注意：词数80-100。开头语已为你写好。(’95)DearPeter,We’resogladthatyouarecomingtojoinusonSunday.Hereishowyoucanfindus.LiHua一“抓”为抓主题。•Type:•Person:•Tense:•What:•When:•Where:说明文（书信）第一人称一般现在时，一般将来时通过看示意图来野餐星期天人民公园thekeypointstobeincluded1.在人民公园野餐2.从公园正门进3.进门后朝前走4.到小河过桥5.向右拐后朝前走6.绕/爬过小山7.我们在（湖畔）小树林里1.haveapicnic,inPeople’sPark2.enterpark,bymaingate3.walkstraight4.crossstream5.turnright6.totheothersideofhill7.insmallwoods,bylake二“列”为列要点。Expandthekeypointshaveapicnic,inPeople’sParkWewillhaveourpicnicinthePeople’sPark.WearegoingtothePeople’sparkforapicnic.WearegoingtothePeople’spark,wherewewillhaveapicnic.•三“变”为变要点为句子。enterpark,bymaingate•Entertheparkbythemaingate.•Gothroughthemaingateofthepark.walkstraight•Walkstraightontillyoucometoastream.•Walkalongtheroaduntilyougettoabridgeoverthestream.crossstream•Crossthestream.Gooverthebridge.turnright•Turnright.totheothersideofhill•Walkroundtotheothersideofthehill.Climbthehill.insmallwoods,bythelake•We’llhaveourpicnicinthesmallwoodsbythelake.确定提示要点的益处：4）便于使用恰当的连接词。1）不丢重要信息点。2）避免中文式英文。3）连词成句时能够注意到时态、语态等问题。连句成篇DearPeter,We’resogladyou’recomingtojoinusonSunday.Hereishowyoucanfindus.We’llhaveourpicnicinthePeople’sPark.Youknowwherethatis,don’tyou?Afteryouentertheparkbythemaingate,walkstraightontillyoucometoastream.Crossthestreamandturnright.Afterwalkingforawhile,youwillcometoahill.Walkroundtotheothersideofthehill.Thereyouwillseealake.We’llhaveourpicnicinthesmallwoodsbythelake.I’msureyou’llhavenotroublefindingus.Docome!PossibleversionDearPeter,We’resogladyou’recomingtojoinusonSunday.Hereishowyoucanfindus.We’llhaveourpicnicinthePeople’sPark.Youknowwherethatis,don’tyou?Afteryouentertheparkbythemaingate,walkstraightontillyoucometoastream.Crossthestreamandturnright.Afterwalkingforawhile,youwillcometoahill.PossibleversionWalkroundtotheothersideofthehill.Thereyouwillseealake.We’llhaveourpicnicinthesmallwoodsbythelake.I’msureyou’llhavenotroublefindingus.Docome!LiHua•仔细观察下面一幅图画，根据图画的内容，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。情景：假定你叫李红，家住香港。你和几个朋友约定星期六在中心公园(CentralPark)聚会。现请你写封信邀请Brown女士参加，并根据下图告诉她来中心公园的路线。••参考词汇：haveagatheringparty(聚会)这是一篇图画说明文，根据图画，指明路线，如何到达中心公园。注意观察图画，确定出发点、行走路线、目的地，灵活使用表达路线的表达语。•DearMrsBrown,Wearesogladthatyou'recomingtojoinusonSaturday.Hereishowyoucanfindus.•Type:•Person:•Tense:•What:•When:•Where:•DearMrsBrown，•Wearesogladthatyou'recomingtojoinusonSaturday.Hereishowyoucanfindus.We'llhaveourgatheringpartyintheCentralPark.Maybeyou'vebeenthere，haven'tyou？Gostraightonwhenyougetoutoftheschoolgateandcometothestreet.Thenturnrightatthesecondcrossingandyou'llfindahospital.JustoppositeitisaNo.7busstop.Takeabusandgetoffatthefourthstop.CentralParkisjustinfrontofit.We'llhaveourgatheringpartyinaboatonthelake.Whatafunnything！Docomeontime.We'llwaitforyouattheparkgate•Yours，•LiHua2009年高考全国卷II英语作文•假定你是李华，你的美国朋友sarah打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：•1.简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺；•2.位置：天安门广场南面；•3.交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；•4.特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。•参考词汇：步行街pedestrianstreet•当当车trolleycar地铁subway•注意：•1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；•3.开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。•Dearsarah.•ThankyouforyouletteraskingabouttherebuiltQianmenstreet.Hereissomethingaboutit.•DearSarah,ThankyouforyourletteraskingabouttherebuiltQianmenStreet.Hereissomethingaboutit。QianmenStreetisafamousstreetofover600yearsold.Alongthis800-metrestreet,therearemorethan300shops.AsthestreetisinthecenterofBeijing,justtothesouthofTian’anmenSquare,it’sveryconvenienttogettherebybus.YoumaytakeBusesNo.17,69or59.subwayLine2hasastoptheretoo.QianmenStreetisapedestrianstreet,buttherearetrolleycarstotakeyounotonlytotheshops,butalsototheatersandteahouseswhereyoucanexperienceatrulyChinesewayoflife,I’msureyou’lllikeit。•(06·湖北)•受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇100左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。•调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种。•调查范围：湖北省的10所中学•调查对象：高中生•调查人数：1000•调查方式：访谈•调查结果：（见下图）•【参考范文】•ReadingInterestsofSeniorMiddleSchoolStudents•Recentl