高考英语作文如何展开观点

TaskWriting--Howtodevelopaparagraphinanexpositionorargumentation?Learningaims•1)•2)•学生的压力来源•Sample1•Maybesomeonewillaskwhythestudentsshouldrelax.Asastudent,wemustdothehomeworkeveryday,anddealwithschoolwork.Forexample,…What’smore,wefeellotsofpressurefromstudies.•是否该建此墙•Sample2•Somestudentsthinkthestresswallshouldbebuilt,becausetheyhavestress.Theymayfeelpressurefromparents,teachersandeventhemselves.…Iagreetobuildthestresswall.Studentscanrelaxthemselvesandtakeawaystressinthisway.•Sample3•Obviously,thewallshouldbebuilt.Itcannotonly…butalso….However,problemcan’tbesolvedinsuchasimpleway.•理想的大学生活。（2008广东高考）•Sample4•Afterfinishingmyhighschoollife,Iampreparingmyselfforcollegelife.IamsoexcitedandIalsolookingforwardtothecollegelife.SoIimaginemuchaboutit.Thecollegelifewillbewonderfulandfree….Skills：1.Putitattheverybeginning.2.Statedirectlyandclearlywhatyou’regoingtowrite.•a.学生的压力来源•(梁清华)It’sobviousthatmostofstudentsfeelalotofpressurefromstudyorotherreasons.•/Nowadays,studentsareundergreatpressure,whichmainlycomesfromtheirschoolworkaswellaspeersrelationship.Howtowriteatopicsentence?•b.是否该建此墙？•(欧阳泳仪)AsIseeit,thestresswallshouldbebuiltforthefollowingreasons.•C.理想的大学生活（2008广东高考）•Ihopetohaveahappyandcolorfullifeinthecollege.•1）直接回答要点•Practice•1).你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法（2010广东高考）•2).你赞同熬夜的做法吗？请简述原因。•1).你对用金钱鼓励孩子学校的看法（2010广东高考）•Whenitcomestothewaytoencouragechildrentostudybygivingmoney,Idon’tagreewithit.•2)你赞同熬夜的做法吗？请简述原因。(为什么)•Idon’tsupportstayinguplateforthefollowingreasons.•Iamstronglyagainststayinguplatebecauseitdoesgreatharmtoourhealth.•Atpresentit’sauniversalphenomenonthatmanystudentsstayuplateatnight.Myattitudetowardthisisnegativeandthereasonsforthisarenotfartoseek.•……•2）重述要点•a.学生压力的来源•(刘婉钗)Nowadays,manystudentsarelivingunderstress.•b.其它减压方法•(郑碧君)Besides,therearemanyotherwaystoreleaseourstress.•c.中学生活与大学生活的差别（2008广东高考）•（何婷婷）Inmyopinion,collegelifewillbequitedifferentfromthatinhighschool.Howtowriteatopicsentence?•Practice•1).请谈谈电子书(E-book)的普及带来的利与弊•2).谈谈独立的重要性。•3).我们该如何践行低碳生活？•1)请谈谈电子书(E-book)的普及带来的利与弊。•E-bookshavebothadvantagesanddisadvantages.•E-bookshavemoreadvantagesthandisadvantages.•IthinktheadvantagesofE-booksoutweightheirdisadvantages.•AlthoughE-bookshavemanyadvantages,theyarenotwithout（不无）theirdisadvantages.•……•2).谈谈独立的重要性。•(Inspiredbythestory,)Isuddenlyrealizedtheimportanceofindependence.•/Nobodywilldenythatindependenceplaysaveryimportantpartinourlife.•3).我们该如何践行低碳生活？•Asastudent,wecandomanythingsinourcampustolivealow-carbonlife.•/Inordertolivealow-carbonlife,somemeasuresshouldbetaken.•Whatshouldwedotolivealow-carbonlifeasstudents?Ithinktheanswersareasfollows.(说明必要、重要或意义)(怎么做)Writeoutthefollowingsentences(asmanyasyoucan)•★Topicsentencestoshownecessity/importance/significance•★Topicsentencestoshowwhattodo•★Topicsentencestoshowreasons★Topicsentencestoshownecessity/importance/significance：•Sth.isnecessary/important/significant…tosb.•Itis.necessary/important/significant/…forsb.todosth.•Sth.playsaveryimportantpart/rolein…•Thesignificanceof…cannotbeovervalued.★Sometopicsentencestoshowwhattodo•Weshouldtakeeffectivemeasuresto…•Somemeasuresmustbetakentopreventthisfromhappening.•It’stimeforthegovernmenttodosomethingtoimprovethecondition.•Wecansolvetheproblembythefollowingmethods.•......★Sometopicsentencestoshowreasons•Therearemanyreasonsforthis.•Wehavegoodreasonstobelievethat…•Thereasonswhy…arenotfartoseek.•….becausetheadvantagesareenormousforeveryoneconcerned.•Manyreasonsaccountfor…•……Howtowritesupportingsentences•1)解释原因•是否该建此墙？Inmyopinion,thepracticeofbuildingastresswall,whichthestudentscanhit,isnotappropriate.Thismayleadstudentstosolveaproblemwithviolenceordevelopabadtemper.•2)逐条列举•你认为建设绿色校园应该采取哪些措施?•(主题)Inordertobuildagreencampus,effectivemeasuresshouldbetaken.(列举)Foronething,theschoolshouldmakerulesandregulationstopreventstudentsdoingharmtoourgreencampus.Foranother,studentsshouldtakesomeclassestoenhancetheirawareness.3)举例说明督促学生认真学习的其他办法(2011佛山一模)Thereareotherwaystomakestudentsworkhard.Forexample,teacherscanrewarduswithsmallgiftsifwedoagoodjob.Besides,studentscanbedividedintogroupstocompetewitheachothersothatwewillworkharder.Skills：1.运用罗列要点或举例的方法从不同方面展开;2.要点一般为2-3个;3.注意衔接，恰当使用连接词。Howtowritethesupportingsentences?•Inordertobuildagreencampus,effectivemeasuresshouldbetaken.Foronething,theschoolshouldmakerulesandregulationstopreventstudentsdoingharmtoourgreencampus.Foranother,studentsshouldtakesomeclassestoenhancetheirawareness.•Agoodparagraphusuallyinclude:•thetopicsentence(主题句)•supportingsentences(说明或支持主题句的拓展句)•thecoherence(连贯)SummarySomeconnectivewords1）first,second,third,last2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally3）tostartwith\tobeginwith,next,then,furthermore,finally4）firstofall,besides,inaddition,what’smore,lastbutnotleast5）ontheonehand,ontheotherhand（适用于相对立的两点的情况）6）foronething,foranotherthing（适用于两点的情况）……Practicemakesperfect!•Jackieisperhapsthemosteasilyannoyedkoala(考拉)attheFeatherdalewildlifeparkinsouthernAustralia.Allthekoalasthereareunhappyandcomplaining.Youwouldbetooifyouwereusedtonightactivitiesandsomeonekeptwalkingyouupall