高考英语写作技巧

NMET对书面表达的要求要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。本部分满分25/30分，所需时间约为30分钟。NMET书面表达评分原则1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。第五档.21~25分第四档.16~20分第三档.11~15分第二档.6~10分第一档.1~5分0分语言地道，规范覆盖所有内容要点2、主要内容：内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；语言的得体性应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分3、拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。4、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending小结；呼应主题技巧1.使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。1.感叹句e.g.HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!Whatakindboyheis!Howdisappointedhewas!2.强调句e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.3、倒装句e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.Therecomesthepolicecar.Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman.4、省略句e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.5、with短语e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.6、定语从句e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.Let’scometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.7、各种名词性从句e.g.That’swhatIshoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent.8、各种状语从句e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Themomentwereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.Solongasweworkharderatourlessons,we’llcatchupsoonerorlater.DocallmebeforehandsothatIcanmeetyouattheairport.Theyhadtowaitbecausetherainwasgettingmoreandmoreheavily.1Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）3.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)4.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)5.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）Onhisarriving,pleasegivemeane-mail.Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.6.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)7.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)8.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（使用状语从句）9.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（用并列句）10．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.ⅡCoherence（连贯性）一、过渡用语⑴表示时间关系的过渡用语：first,inthebeginning,firstofall,next,second,then,soon,meanwhile,meantime,inthemeantime,now,earlier,later,afterthat,afterward,atthatmoment,bythattime,fromthenon,presently,eventually,atlast,finally,before...,after...,since...,when...,while...,assoonas...,once...,until...⑵表示添加的过渡用语：and,also,too,again,besides,also,another,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,aswellas,whatismore⑶表示比较的过渡用语：like,alike,incomparison,likewise,inthesameway,atthesametime,similarly,inlikemanner,as,aswellasⅡCoherence（连贯性）⑷表示对照的过渡用语：but,yet,still,however,unlike,instead,whereas,inspiteof,despite,onthecontrary,incontrast,ontheotherhand,though,although,foronething…foranother⑸表示原因的过渡用语because,for,since,as,becauseof,dueto,owingto,thanksto⑹表示结果的过渡用语：so,thus,therefore,hence,sothat,asaresult,inthis/thatway⑺表示例证的过渡用语：forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatis,namely,inparticular,specifically,asproofof⑻表示总结的过渡用语：tosumup,toconclude,tosummarize,onthewhole,allinall,lastly,inshort,inbrief,inaword,inconclusion,inclosing,insummaryⅡCoherence（连贯性）⑼表示强调的过渡用语：surely,certainly,truly,undoubtedly,clearly,indeed,infact,afterall,aboveall,mostimportant,tobesure,withoutdoubt,withoutaquestion,asamatteroffact⑽表示重述的过渡用语：inotherwords,thatistosay,insimplerterms,simplystated,toputitdifferently⑾表示综述的过渡用语：generally,generallyspeaking,ingeneral,inaword,inshort,onthewhole,asarule,forthemostpart⑿表示让步的过渡用语：anyhow,anyway,ofcourse,however,inanycase,atanyrateⅡCoherence（连贯性）二、启、承、转、合（1）启：用于引导主题句，或用于主题句的后面，引导第一个发展句。first(ly),atfirst,firstofall,inthebeginning,atpresent,tobeginwith,lately,foronething,now,recently,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,inmyopinion,obviously。（2）承：用于承接主题句或第一个（或前一个）发展句Second,third,besides,furthermore,inaddition,moreover,whatismore,whatisworse,forexample,forinstance（例如）,inotherwords,inpa-rticular,inthesameway,afterawhile,fromnowon,meanwhile,atthesametime,bythetime,ofcourse,forthepurpose,infact,inreality,nodoubt,certainly,surely,obviously.（3）转：用来表示不同或相反的情况Afterall,but,yet,however,although,though,inspiteof,onthecontrary,incontrast,ontheotherhand,infact,asamatteroffact,otherwise,orelse,instead（4）合：用于总结段落中上文的内容，引导一个发展句或结论句，或用于文章的最后一句Finally,inconclusion,inbrief,inshort,insummary,therefore,toconclude,aboveall,asaresult,atlast,ingeneral,inaword,onthewhole.Ononesideoftheroadthereisanewclassroombuilding.Ontheotherside,wheretheplaygroundusedtobenowstandsanothernewbuilding—ourlibrary.(NMET1999范文)AsfarasIknow,everyoneishappyabou