雅思议论文开头段落的写法

议论文的结构开头段(Backgroundinformation+thesisstatement)主体段落2～3段（Topicsentence+supportingsentences）…结尾段落Conclusion三、开头段落的写法开头段(Backgroundinformation+thesisstatement)sample•剑7test3•Asmostpeoplespendamajorpartoftheiradultlifeatwork,jobsatisfactionisanimportantelementofindividualwellbeing.Whatfactorscontributetojobsatisfaction?Howrealisticistheexpectationofjobsatisfactionforallworkers?范文开头段：Nowadaysmanyadultshavefull-timejobsandtheproportionoftheirlivesspentdoingsuchjobsisveryhigh.Sofeelingsaboutone’sjobmustreflecthowanindividualfeelsabouthisorherlifeasawhole,andbecauseofthis,jobsatisfactionisindeedveryimportantforwellbeingofthatperson.开头段一般可以分为三个部分第一部分：背景句（1－2）第二部分：主题句1第三部分：观点句或者写作目的陈述（也就是简单介绍下文内容）1背景句的写法•如何写背景句：首先确定题目讨论的是哪个方面的问题，然后以这个问题为中心，写一句介绍性的话•注意的问题：不要把背景给的过于宽泛或者狭窄，要起到引出主题的作用。•例1.Incountrieswherethereisahighrateofunemployment,mostpupilsshouldbeofferedonlyprimaryeducation.Thereisnopointinofferingsecondaryeducationtothosewhohavenohopeoffindingajob.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement?(08.01.26)•Unemploymentisoneofthegreatestsocialproblemsofourtime.Therelationshipbetweeneducationandunemployment,inparticular,hasbecomeatroublingissuepreoccupyingmanygovernmentsacrosstheworld.•例2.Manypeopleusedistance-learningprograms(studymaterialpost,TV,Internet,etc.)tostudyathome,butsomepeoplethinkthatitcannotbringthebenefitasmuchasattendingcollegeoruniversity.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?(08.10.23=04.11.13)•Tokeepabreastofthe21stcentury,largenumbersofpeopleareseekingtotertiaryeducation.Distancelearning,amoderneducationalmodel,hasreceivedwidecurrencyamongqualificationseekers.•例3.Itisgenerallybelievedthatsomepeoplearebornwithcertaintalents,forinstanceforsportormusic,andothersarenot.However,itissometimesclaimedthatanychildcanbetaughttobecomeagoodsportspersonormusician.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyouropinion.•••Therelativeimportanceofnaturaltalentandtrainingisafrequenttopicofdiscussionwhenpeopletrytoexplaindifferentlevelsofabilityin,forexample,sport,artormusic.背景句可以使用的套句（1）Thedevelopmentof…(设置一些背景的铺垫)isinevitableandundeniable.•换词:•1、progression,evolution，growth•2、unavoidable，irreversible,irrefutable••（1）Thedevelopmentof…isinevitableandundeniable.•（2）Thethorny\pressingproblemof…hasbecome\isofahottopic\issue\potatoinrecentyears.•（3）…hasbecome\isofatopicofpublicinterestandconcerninrecentyears.•（4）…isoneofthemostremarkablephenomenaofthiscentury\duringthepastdecades.•（5）Withincreasingnumberof…,…hasbecomeasocialissue.（5）Withincreasingnumberof…,…hasbecomeatopicalissue.
•例：随着越来越多的妇女参与全职工作，由谁来照顾孩子已经成为了社会上的一个问题。
Withincreasingnumberofwomentakingpartinfull-timejobs,whoshouldtakecareofchildrenhasbecomeatopicalissue.
•练习题：讲义第2题Withincreasinginvestmentandemphasisoneducation,theimportanceofeachsubjecthassparkedpeople’sinterestandconcern.
•例子：随着人们对教育越来越多的投资和关注，每一个学科的重要性已经渐渐引起人们的关注。

•练习题：讲义第25题*Theoverwhelmingimpactoffashiononclothespreferencehasbecomeatopicofpublicinterestandconcern.*Withtheimprovementoflivingstandard,people’sdemandsonclotheshavebeenexpandingtoafashionlevel.
•练习题：讲义第19题Whenpeopleenjoythebenefitsoflivinginmetropolis,theyhavetofaceandtacklewiththeheadachesthatbroughtbyurbanlife.
•练习题：讲义第21题*Withincreasingattentionhasbeengiventohealth,muchcontroversyissparkedonthisissue.
••第二句：•写法一：改写文章的题目•（问题类之外的题目）•写法二：直接交代问题产生的原因（问题类题目）
••写法一：改写文章的题目•改写时注意的两个问题：•1）改写题目，而不是照抄题目•2）简洁地改写题目，避免累赘•改写题目的方法：方法一：改词–改变关键词的词性–同义词替换–增加或删减原题内容•改写题目可用的句式•方法二：改句式•Whatisundercontroversyiswhether…(讨论的话题)•Whenitcomesto…,someindividualsmaintain…,whileotherspossesstheperceptionthat….表“认为、持有看法”：Insist,maintain,argue,consider,deem,reckon,declare,profess,assert,advocate,pronounce,harbor\hold\possesstheview\standpoint\viewpoint\perception\argumentthat
•＊Thereisaperceptionthat…,whileacounter\converseargumentisthat…＊Therecropsupasocialdilemma/ambivalenceovertheissuethat…＊People,nevertheless,holdvariousopinionsintermsoftheissuewhetheritisablessingoracurse.＊Differentpeopleholdvariousviewpointsastotheissuewhether…isbeneficialto…•
•第三句：＊阐明个人立场（观点类题目）＊说明写作目的（其他类型题目）•写法一：阐述自己的观点和立场(支持反对或者中立)•＊Inmyopinion…在我看来：•inmysubmission,asIseeit,frommypointofview,frommyperspective,Itismyconsideredviewthat…•
••＊Personally,Iaminfavoroftheformer/lateropinion.(=Iam,personally,infavorof…)•结构：开场词+观点的表达•开场词：tobefrank\honest,frankly\honestly(speaking)坦诚地说，老实说,assuredly,indeed,admittedly•表示支持的动词：support,favor,espouse，propup，standby，sustain，brace，subscribeto•表示反对的动词：object，oppose，protest，combat，goagainst，haveanobjectionto•
••也可以说“我是…的支持者/反对者”•＊Iamasupporteroftheargument/theory/standpointthat…•＊Being\Asthesupporteroftheformer/laterargument,Iholdtheperspectivethat…•支持者：supporter;sustainer;proponent反对者：discommender，dissenter，foe，objectoropponent
••写法二：说明写作目的、简单描述中间内容（针对观点类之外题目）•＊Here,Iwouldliketoexplorethecomplicatedtopic\issuefromdifferentaspects.••
••＊Thisminiessaywillcompareandcontrastthebenefitsanddownsidesinacomprehensiveperspective/fromvariousangles.(用于讨论优缺点的题目）优点：merit，pro,positiveside,shiningsidestrongpoint,benefit,virtue,缺点：demerit，con,negativeside，darkside,weak