考点2短文改错

代词的误用与漏用考点2：真题再练1.(2015新课标卷I)Wemustfindwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we’lllivetoregretit.前后都是第一人称复数，改为our/the后前后人称一致。our/the2.(2013新课标卷I)Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothers…因作宾语的反身代词应与主语是指同一人或物，而此句为定语从句，其主语不是he，而是代表adeepvoice的which，所以不能用himself，要改为him。意为：这种声音使“他”与别人分离。him3.(2012新课标卷)Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingswentwrong,Igotangryandbrokeit.指代前句中的thetoys，是复数，应用them作broke的宾语。them4.(2012新课标卷)Forawhile,parentsboughtmenewtoys.由后面的me可知，应是“我的”父母给我买新玩具。my5.(2015新课标卷II)Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.意思是Tony看到“他的”父母，故加his。his思路点拨解答这类题需注意两点：1.弄清指代对象。凡是核查代词是否有错，关键是核查该代词的指代对象，即到底是指代谁或什么，弄清指代的对象是人还是物，是男还是女，是单数还是复数。2.留意三无名词。即要特别留意前面无冠词、无物主代词、无不定代词的名词。遇到三无名词，要自问：是泛指吗？如果不是泛指，具体又是谁的呢？如［真题再练］第4题，“父母给我买了新玩具”，是泛指天下所有的父母？不是！是谁的父母给我买玩具？我的父母！故parents前应加上my。考点归纳代词是短文改错的常考点，5年8套题中考了5次。主要从5个方面考查代词。1.前后人称不一致。如［真题再练］1，your与前后的we不一致。2.前后单复数不一致。如［真题再练］3，it与指代对象thetoys在单复数上不一致。3.前后的性别不一致。如前后谈的是一个女人，却冒出he或his来，反之亦然。4.物主代词的漏用。如［真题再练］4、5题。5.this,that,it的区别；anything与everything的区别。考点练透1.(2010新课标卷)Convinced,Nickhasbroughtthepricedownto10centsapiece.Withoutamoment’sdelay,myneighborpickeduptheboxandannounced“I’lltakethem.”由上文可知是指我朋友Nick的邻居，即“他的”邻居。his2.(2009新课标卷)I’mgladtosaythatanythinghasworkedoutfineinthedorm.因anything常用于否定句或疑问句中，这里不合适；作者是想说，很高兴告诉你，“一切(everything)”都很好。everything3.(2009新课标卷)I’mgoingtoattendminefirstlessonthisafternoon,soI’vegotsomepreparationstomake.Keepintouch.在名词前作定语要用形容词性物主代词，指“我的(my)”第一堂课。my4.(2008新课标卷)Weareorganizinganartexhibitionforhighschoolstudentsinthecity.Thiswillbeheldonthe9thofJulyintheExhibitionHallofBeihai.指上句提到的艺展。It5.(2008新课标卷)Wewouldbegratefulifyoucouldjointhemthatday.人称与上文的we一致。us6.(2007新课标卷)Threeyearsago,LiMing’sparentsinvitedItospendtwowonderfulweeksinQingdaowiththemduringthesummerholiday.作invited的宾语，人称代词要用宾格。me7.(2014大纲卷)Otherwise,itisimpossibleforhimtohelpeachotherandtomaketheirfriendshiplastlong.由helpeachother可知，用复数。them8.(2012大纲卷II)I’mwritingtotellyouopinionaboutwatersaving.将“我的”看法告诉你。my9.(2012大纲卷II)Manycountriesintheworldfindwedon’thaveenoughwater.指“世界上许多国家”用they。they10.(2011大纲卷I)NangisaspecialkindofcakeinXinjiang.Ilikethemverymuch.替代前句中的aspecialkindofcake，是单数。it11.(2011大纲卷II)Wearenowbackhome.Thankyouverymuchforshowingthemaroundyourcityandprovidinguswiththewonderfulmeals.指代上文的we，即谢谢你带“我们”游览你们的城市。us12.(2010大纲卷II)Beforeherleaving,Ipreparedagifttoshowmybestwishestohim.Shesaid…由文中的she,her可知朋友是女的。her13.(2009大纲卷I)ThefactoryatthecornerofFriendshipStreetandZhongshanRoadhasbeenmovedoutofthecity,andasportscenterhasbeenbuiltintheirplace.指原来那家工厂所在的地方。its14.(2009大纲卷II)Alittlegirlwashurtandhismotherneededhelp.指代不一致，应是指前面提到的“那个女孩的”妈妈。her15.(2008大纲卷I)MyfathersuggestedIgotoEnglandforaholiday…Ihaveoftendreamedoftalkingfacetofacewithyou…Perhapsyoucouldgoouttodosomesightseeingtogether.指“对方和我”要用代词we。we16.(2008大纲卷II)Finally,Ishouldbeabletotellvisitorsaboutourhistoryandcultureandshowthemtheirgreatachievements.因向他们展示的是“我们的”伟大成就。our17.(2007大纲卷I)Iwasonlyaboutsixwhenheheldhishandouttome.Itookitinmeandwewalked.将他的手放到“我的手(myhand)”里，相当于myhand的应是mine。mine18.(2007大纲卷II)Whiletheothersarejumpingaboutintheair,Icanrunundermylegsandgettheball.虽然其他人在空中跳来跳去，但是我可以在“他们的”腿下跑。句中的While=Although(虽然)。theirTHANKYOU!