高考英语写作中常见的问题

高考英语写作中常见的问题1.写作中常见错误：1).动词与主语关系不清误：IsawanoldmangoingoutofCityParkandwasabouttocrossParkRoad.正：IsawanoldmangoingoutofCityParkandhewasabouttocrossParkRoad.误：Butthecarranoffimmediatelyinsteadofstoppingtoapologizetotheman.正：Butthedriverdroveoffimmediatelyinsteadofstoppingtoapologizetotheman.误：Theparkshouldchargetheentrancefee.正：Theentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.正：Peopleshouldpayfortheentrancefeeiftheygototheparks.2).主谓不一致误：FatherandIamgoingtovisither.正：FatherandIaregoingtovisither.误：Therehadmanypeopleonthebus.正：Thereweremanypeopleonthebus.3).时态、语态混用误：Themealissonicethatweallenjoyeditverymuch.正：Themealwassonicethatweallenjoyeditverymuch.误：Theoldmanknockeddownbythecarandinjuredbadly.正：Theoldmanwasknockeddownbythecarandinjuredbadly.4).句子成分残缺误：Theyoungmanrunninginthestreetfast.正：Theyoungmanwasrunninginthestreetfast.误：Theythinkwhethergotocollegeornotdoesn’tmatter.正：Theythinkitmakesnodifferencewhethertheygotocollegeornot5).中文式英语误：Nextmonthhaveasportsmeeting.正：Nextmonthwewillhaveasportsmeeting.误：Havesomestudentsthinkthatcollegeissoexpensivethatcommonfamiliescan’taffordit.正：HaveSomestudentsthinkthatthecollegetuitionissohighthatcommonfamiliescan’taffordit.6).名词单复数不分误：HewillgiveatalkonAmericanfilm.正：HewillgiveatalkonAmericanfilms.误：Heisoneofthebestplayerinourschool.正:Heisoneofthebestplayersinourschool.7).赘词现象严重误：Atlast,thelostboyreturnedback.正：Atlast,thelostboyreturnedback.误：Ononeday,hewenttothecinema.正：Ononeday,hewenttothecinema.8).用词不当误：Ihopeyoutohelpthegirlwithherhomework.正：Iwishyoutohelpthegirlwithherhomework.误：Noonelettheseattoher.正：Nooneofferedtheseattoher.9).前后人称不一致误：Swimmingandfootballarehisfavoritesports,andhelikesitallhislife.正：Swimmingandfootballarehisfavoritesports,andhelikesthemallhislife.10).分词作状语，逻辑主语不一致误：Havingheardthenews,herheartbeatfasterandfaster.正：Whensheheardthenews,herheartbeatfasterandfaster.2.机械翻译修改前：Myhobbiesareswimming,skating,collectingstamps,popmusic.修改后：Inmysparetime,Ienjoylisteningtopopmusicandcollectingstamps.Myfavoritesportsareswimminginsummerandskatinginwinter.修改前：Inthedaytime,wetooklessonsandhadtodoourhomework.Intheevening,wehadtosoourhomework.修改后：Wehavetogotoschoolevenatweekendsanddomuchhomeworkbothinthedaytimeandintheevening.误：Inthepasttenyears,themillhastakenplacegreatchanges.正：Inthepasttenyears,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinthemill.3.句子之间的逻辑关系不清误：Ithittheoldmandownbutthedriver,awoman,didn’tstophercar.Findingshehadcausedanaccident,thewomanspedhercartofleeaway.TheoldmanandIsawthecar’snumber.It’sAC864.Theoldmancouldn’tmove,Idecidedtohelphim.正：Ithittheoldmandownbutthedriver,whowasawoman,didn’tstophercar.Findingshehadcausedanaccident,thewomanspedhercartofleeaway.Fortunately,Isawthecar’snumber.It’sAC864.Noticingtheoldmancouldn’tmove,Idecidedtohelphim.4.画蛇添足、过多的长句使句子复杂化（语言不简洁）修改前：Afamoussportsmanwasgivingaspeechwhichwasratherinteresting.修改后：Afamoussportsmanwasgivinganinterestingspeech.修改前Nowadays,somepeoplearestillcuttingdowntreeswithoutpermission.Theairpollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreseriouswhichiscausedbybusesandcars.What’smore,somanyriversarepollutedbydirtywaterwhichisfromfactory.Inaddition,sandstormstruckusnowandthen,fromwhichwesufferedalot.修改后Nowadays,somepeoplearestillcuttingdowntreeswithoutpermission.Asaresult,peoplehavetosuffersandstormsnowandthen.What’smore,asbusesandcarsgiveoffalotofpoisonousgases,theairisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Moreover,therearemanyriverspollutedbydirtywaterfromfactories.Thesituationisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.修改前：Assoonascamein,weheardsomevoicemadebyinstruments.Thereweresomestudentsplayingpianoviolinandsoon.修改后：Assoonaswecamein,weheardapieceofbeautifulmusicplayedbythestudentsbydifferentinstruments,suchas,piano,violinandsoon.5.过于简单的句子使文章缺少逻辑性，可读性。修改前Yesterday,therewasapolicemaninthestreet.Hestoppedacar.Thecarwasatthecorner.ItlookedlikeaHonda.Therewasaboyonthesidewalk.Hewasridinghisbicycle.Thebicyclewasatwo-wheeler.Thecarnearlyknockeddowntheboy.修改后Yesterday,apolicemanstoppedacar—Hondaatthecornerofthestreet,becauseitnearlyknockeddownaboywhowasridingatwo-wheelbicycleonthesidewalk.修改前Suddenly,acarrunquicklyfromthethirdstreetandturnedtothewest.Thecardidn’tstopandhittheoldman.Thedriverdidn’tstopandhavealook.Thecarranawayquickly.Thecarwasyellowandthedriverwasawoman.修改后Suddenly,acarturnedwestfromthe3rdStreettotheParkRoad.Ithittheoldman,butitdidn’tstopandranawayquickly.Inoticedthecarwasyellowandthedriverwasawoman.6.正确使用从句为文章增色修改前：Westudyinthenewteachingbuilding.Itmakeseveryoneexcited.Wewalkinthebuilding.Wearehappy.Wecanenjoymanypaintingsandhandwritings.Weuseourownworkstodecorateit.Itiscool.Ourschoolprovidesusconvenience.Itisthegoalofourschool.Thecabinetisanexample.Webringmanythingstoschool.Wecanputtheminthecabinet.Thereishotwatertoo.Howcanwekeeptheteachingbuildingcleanandbeautiful?Wearediscussingit.修改后：Thatwearestudyinginthenewteachingbuildingmakeseveryoneexcited.Evenwalkinginthebuildingbringsushappinessforwecanenjoymanypaintingsandhandwritings.Itiscoolthatweuseourownworkstodecorateit.Toprovideusconvenienceisthegoalofourschool.Thecabinetisanexample.Whatwebringtoschool