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写作——申请信贺楠，胡晨光，解佳琪，林森森，宋立勇写作2012年全国卷1/新课标贺楠一、试题--2012年全国一/新课标卷第二节书面表达(满分25分)假定你是李华，从互联网(theInternet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.希望获准。一、试题--2012年全国一/新课标卷注意:1.数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好.DearSirorMadam,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Regards,LiHua二、试题解读–申请信1.写作的体裁属于应用文--信件类之申请信，在写作题的命制上，不刻意注重形式，而更加注重内容。2.对于本篇文章，文章的格式不是重点，对于这样一封申请信信，题目只给出了三条简单的内容提纲，并没有过多细节，这就要求考生们能够联系生活实际、充分发挥合理想象力来完成一篇字数有限制而又言之有物的文章。3.写申请信的三个步骤是：你好—我好—大家好的过程。即：除了要涵盖题目要求的三个要点：1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.希望获准。还要从实际角度出发增加相关细节。（具体见写作思路）三、申请信写作思路•第一步：自我介绍+获取信息途径+夸赞对方，表示兴趣(即介绍参加意图)•IamLiHua,a16-year-oldboyfromChina,presentlyinmysecondyearofhighschool./thechairmanoftheStudentsUnion.•IreadtheannouncementofthesummercampthatyouhavepostedontheInternetandIaminterestedinit.•Asaseniorhighschoolstudent,Iamveryinterestedinthecampandeagertoparticipate.三、申请信写作思路•第二步:我的申请资格（列举自己的优势，即“我好”）此处总分结构，注意列举时句子之间的过渡总：Generalacknowledgementisverygoodofmypersonalityandtheknowledgecapabilities.•Iamasuitablepersontodo•Ihaveseveralreasonstodo分：Iamgoodat/excelat•Iregard…asagoldenopportunityformetodo….•IbelieveIwillbeanicehelperintheteam.要有过渡：also/besides/meanwhile/what’smore/moreover/furthermore/inaddition三、申请信写作思路•第三步：希望获准+畅想获准后的好处（即“大家好”）•IhopeIwillbeacceptedasamemberofyoursummercamp.•IhopeIwillgetadmittedtoyourcampandIcan’twaitforit.四、官方范文DearSirorMadam,I'mLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentfromChina.IreadtheannouncementofthesummercampthatyouhavepostedontheInternetandIaminterestedinit.IknowthatyouwelcomestudentsfromdifferentcountriesandI'dliketotakepartinit.I'vebeenlearningEnglishfor10years,andIspeakfluentEnglish.Whatismore,I'llbeabletotellstudentsfromothercountriesaboutChinaandlearnabouttheirculturesaswell.IhopeIwillbeacceptedasamemberofyoursummercamp.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Regards,LiHua五、优秀范文DearSirorMadam,I'mLiHua,aboyofseventeen,amiddleschoolstudentfromChina.IlearnfromtheInternetthatyouareorganizingasummercampinSingapore,whichwelcomesstudentsfromallovertheworld.Asaseniorhighschoolstudent,Iamveryinterestedinthecampandeagertoparticipate.Generalacknowledgementisverygoodofmypersonalityandtheknowledgecapabilities.IhavebeenlearningEnglishformorethan10years,andIcancommunicatewithpeopleinfluentEnglish.Meanwhile,Iregardthiscampasagoldenopportunityformetointroducemymotherland,China,tomyoverseascounterpartsandgettoknowabouttheircountriesaswell.IhopeIwillgetadmittedtoyourcampandIcan’twaitforit.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Regards,LiHua六、课堂练习注意：1．词数不少于60。2．可根据需要适当增加细节。3．信的开头、结尾已给出。DearHarry,I’mwritingtoapplyforthephotographerforOurSteps.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.YoursSincerely,LiHua姓名：李华性别：男年龄：16年级：高一兴趣：摄影、写作、户外运动其他：活泼、开朗、精力充沛；曾获北京市摄影比赛青少年组二等奖应聘目的：参加社会实践活动，丰富业余生活六、参考范文DearHarry,Iamwritingtoapplyforthephotographerforoursteps.Ireadtheannouncement/informationontheschoolpublicationandIaminterestedinit.IamLiHua,aboyofsixteen,presentlyinmyfirstyearofhighschool.AndIamoutgoingandenergetic.IbelieveIamtherightpersonofthisposition.Ｉaminterestedinphotographybecauseitallowsmetorecordthebeautifulmomentsinmylife.LastyearIwonthesecondprizeinyouthgroupatBeijingPhotographyCompetition.Besides,Iamgoodatwriting,whichmightbehelpfulforthework.Takingpartinallkindsofoutdoorgroupactivitiesisalsooneofmyhobbies，whichenablemetobeanteam-workstar.IwouldliketoworkforOurStepssinceitwouldbeagreatopportunityformetojoininsocialactivitiesandenrichmylife.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.YoursSincerelyLiHua七、课后练习HOSTFAMILIESWANTEDTeachersandstudentsfromCentralHighSchoolPhoenixwillstudyinourschoolduringthesummervacation.Hostfamiliesarewantedtoaccommodateourfriends.REQUIREMENTS:◇GoodEnglish.◇Goodcommunicationskills.◇ASEPARATEroom.◇Convenienttransportation.◇…Ifinterested,pleasesendyourAPPLICATIONINENGLISHtotheInternationalDepartmentbeforeTHURSDAY.Pleaseconsultusforanyfurtherinformation.2012全国1写作宋立勇假定你是李华，从互联网((theInternet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.希望获准。注意:1.数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好.**************************************************************************相关重点词句总结常用语：开头•Ihavelearnedthatyouarehiring-•Iwouldliketoapplyfor---•Iaminterestedina---positioninyourfirm.结尾•Thankyourforyourconsideration.•Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.例题••假定你是李华，从互联网((theInternet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡•(Singapore)•举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。•内容主要包括:•1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);•2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);•3.希望获准。••注意:•1.数100左右;•2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;•3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好.•官方范文五、OnePossibleVersionDearSirorMadam,I'mLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentfromChina.IreadtheannouncementofthesummercampthatyouhavepostedontheInternetandIaminterestedinit.IknowthatyouwelcomestudentsfromdifferentcountriesandI'dliketotakepartinit.I'vebeenlearningEnglishfor10years,andIspeakfluentEnglish.Whatismore,I'JIbeabletotellstudentsfromothercountriesaboutChinaandlearnabouttheircountriesaswell.IhopeIwillbeacceptedasamemberofyoursu