SAT强化写作标准化课件

SAT强化写作WhichpartisthiscourseinSAT?•CriticalReading(SentenceCompletion+Passage-basedReading)•Mathematics•Writing(Grammar+Essay)TeachingSchedule•GeneralIntroduction(howtogetahighscoreintheEssaypart)•LinguisticSkills(thestandardofvocabularyandsentencerequiredbycollegeboard)•RealTests(P46,from2005.3)•ExamplesandReasoning•PracticalSkillsTeachingMaterial•PrincetonReview•OfficialGuide•HandoutSATEssay:argumentative,logic•1.thesis•2.example•3.reasoningreasoningthesisexampleOG389OG119OG196Discussion•Whatisyourpoint?(thesis)•Whatexamplesdoyouchoosetosupportyourpoint?(example)•Howyourexamplessupportyourpoint?(reasoning)•Example•Structure(logic)•LanguageHowtheEssaysAreScored•Effectivelyandinsightfullydevelopsapointofviewontheissueanddemonstratesoutstandingcriticalthinking,usingclearlyappropriateexamples,reasons,andotherevidencetosupportitsposition•Examples:举例子•Reason:讲道理•Otherevidence:数据，引用引用•Asanoldsaying/proverbgoes,“__________________”,whichistosay,_____________.•AccordingtoaprominentscientistXXX(andIparaphrase)___________,inotherwords,_______.数据•Accordingtothestatisticalresultofarecentsurvey•aboutX(调查主题）takenbyY(调查机构)inZ（调查时间）,•AandBhavesoared,respectively,•by___and___（增长百分比）.•Incontrast,Cdeclinedatanacceleratingrate,anditisalsothecasewithD.•Thestatisticsaboveillustratesthat___.•Iswellorganizedandclearlyfocused,demonstratingclearcoherenceandsmoothprogressionofideas•Coherence:连贯•Progression:衔接TransitionalWords--26表示先后顺序的•Previously•Anteriorly•Originally•Tobeginwith•Aboveall•Firstandforemost•Inaddition•Additionally•Furthermore•Simultaneously•Coinstantaneously•Posteriorly•Eventually•Ultimately•Lastbutnotleast表示因果关系的•Forthereasonthat•Inthat•dueto•owingto•thanksto•attributeto•onaccountof•invirtueof/byvirtueof•Asaresult•Consequently•Hence•Resultingly•Whereupon/thereupon表示类比关系的•Equally•Similarly•Approximatively•Likewise•Inlikematter•Bythesametoken表示转折关系的•Nonetheless,nevertheless•Notwithstanding•Whereas•Instead/insteadof•Conversely•Despite/inspiteof•Incontrast•Onthecontrary•Albeit表示强调关系的•Particularly•Especially•Determinately•Demonstrably•Assuredly•Authentically表示递进关系的•Ulteriorly•Detailedly•Minutely•Specifically•Exhibitsskillfuluseoflanguage,usingavaried,accurate,andaptvocabulary•Varied:多样化•Accurate:准确化•Apt:活用化•DemonstratesmeaningfulvarietyinsentencestructureVariety•长短句的变化(两长一短）•句式结构的变化（从句与分词）•主动与被动结合•这个房子的主人想把他的房子减价销售，他的妻子去世了，他的儿子在纽约工作，而他想和他的儿子住在一起•Theownerofthehouse,whosewifeisdead,whosesonworksinNewYorkandwhowantstogoandlivewithhim,iswillingtosellthehouseatreducedprice.•TheownerofthehousewhosewifeisdeadandsonworksinNewYork,wantingtogotolivewithhim,iswillingtosellhishouse.•Isfreeofmosterrorsingrammar,usage,andmechanics•Grammar:语法•Usage:拼写•Mechanics：格式•“每段之间不空行，每段之前空4个字母”SampleEssay--4One-examplestructure•1.thesis•2.summarizetheexample•3.firstTS+detail•4.secondTS+detail•5.thirdTS+detail•6.concludeabove•7.stepfurther范文补充内容1•忽略绝对化词汇•考察论证能力而不是论证全面的能力•Always/only/all/ever/best/most/every/each2:Example---3CPrinciple•Critical•Creative•Concrete(10)“5W1H”Principle•What•Who•Where•When•Why•HowDoubleNPrinciple•Names•Numbers3:Keywordsrepetition•Another•However:benefits,drawbacks•Boom•Negativeconsequences•Institutionsandregulations•Positiveresult•GreatDepression,asoundereconomy4:Progression•Paragraph3:crash•顶针知无不言，言无不尽来者不善，善者不来•Paragraph4:however•Paragraph5:also5:Coherence•Infact/unfortunately/mostnotably/indeed/suchas/notonly…butalso/inparticular/as/mostimportantly/while6:Variedvocabulary•变化词性•变同义词5组宏观词汇总结Ithink•Iassume•Isuppose•Iconceive•Iinsist•Iamconvinced•Imaintain•Tomyknowledge•Personally•Frommypersonalperspective•AsfarasIamconcernedimportant•Influential•Essential•Crucial•Vital•Fundamental•Significant•Indispensible•Playakeyrole•Playapushingroleshow•Reflect•Reveal•Convey•Confirm•Justify•Demonstrate•Illustrate•Imply•Indicate•Pointoutpopular•Prevalent•Pervasive•Ubiquitous•Universal•Rampantdifficult•Intractable•Involve•Tough•Troublesome•StubbornRequirementforVocabulary•1.StandardandWritten•2.Accurate•3.Varied•4.Apt1.StandardandWritten1.1尽量用完整的拼写•Lab•Bike•Math•TV•Exam•Laboratory•Bicycle•Mathematics•Television•Examination1.2不用缩写形式•Can’t•Isn’t•Doesn’t•E.g.•Etc.1.3不用口语表达•Gonna•Wanna•Guy•Fan•Kickout1.4不用符号•&•$2.Accurate2.1拼写准确•Pasttime•Pastime•Entertainment•Recreation•Amusement•Distraction2.2用词准确•Learnknowledge?•Gain/develop/accumulate/increase/enlarge/obtain/acquire2.3不用生僻词•Omnipotent•Senile(高龄的，衰老的)3.Varied3.1动词多样化•刺激•stimulate•motivate•Inspire•Excite•Urge•Spur•fuel3.2形容词多样化•Big•Huge•Great•Gigantic•Titanic•Enormous•Immense•Tremendous3.3名词多样化•Computer•上下义词：machine/invention/device•修辞：effectiveassistant•Machinerylover•AfricanAmericans•上下义词：vulnerablegroups/underprivilegedindividuals•修辞：miserablepeople3.4短语多样化•Forexample•Forinstance•Suchas•Agoodcaseinpointis•Acompellingexampleis4.Apt•Thecityislacedwithrivers.•Notmanyyearsago,computerswerestillenvelopedbymystery.KeyPointsinOG14UsingClear,Precise,andAppropriateVocabulary--14•Appropriatewordsareaccurateandspecific,notnecessarilylongandobscure.•Avoidtoomanyabstractandindefinitivewords,andseekco