雅思写作―课件1

1IELTS写作21.雅思写作概述及评分标准1.1课程目标1.2课程安排1.3授课理念1.4小作文基本情况1.5大作文基本情况1.6分数计算1.7答题纸1.8书写格式1.9雅思写作评分标准说明31.1课程目标1.1.1官方信息来源1.1.2全球三大考区总体情况1.1.3中国大陆考区总体情况41.1.1官方信息来源全球三大考区总体情况61.1.3中国大陆考区总体情况71.2课程安排雅思写作授课大纲《新东方雅思写作基础教材》《剑桥系列》81.3授课理念动脑+动笔没有理解，练习亦是枯燥没有练习，理解亦是空白课堂互动+作业提交91.4小作文基本情况1.4.1数据类图表题1.4.1非数据类图表题101.4.1数据类图表题39/4881%Line5Pie8Bar13Table12Combination1111.4.1非数据类图表题9/4819%MapDiagramFlow121.5大作文基本情况1.5.1议论类1.5.2说明类131.5.1议论类DiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinionDotheadvantagesoutweighdisadvantages怎样的观点“正确”？怎样写顺手？141.5.2说明类Problem+Reasons+Solution151.6分数计算分数构成Thatistosay…Overall=40%×task1+60%×task2Task1:8Task2:3Overall=3.2+1.8=54:6161.7答题纸12wordsperlineTask113linespage1-2Task220linespage3-4见好就收171.8书写格式1819201.9评分标准说明2122TaskResponse是否涵盖要点；是否切题、合理CoherenceandCohesion句语句、段与段的衔接LexicalResources用词的准确性和灵活性GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy语法多样性和准确性232.小作文透析及派图解析2.1小作文总体审题特点2.10派图介绍2.2小作文写作必备能力2.11派图的写作技巧2.3小作文考点热点2.12派图的重难点2.4小作文综合预测2.13派图词汇基础之占据2.5小作文注意事项2.14派图词汇基础之倍数2.6小作文开头段写法2.15派图主语替换技巧2.7小作文主体段要求2.16派图的常用句型2.8小作文主体段顺序2.9小作文结尾段写法242.1小作文总体审题特点2.1.1审题2.1.2构思252.1.1审题先阅读introduction的内容，找到两个基本要素——描写对象&时间◎找出描写对象：有助于加速写出引言段◎找出时间：有助于确定时态262.1.2构思◎各类题型构思方向﹟Linegraph曲线图：按时间顺序﹟Barchart柱状图：按时间顺序（含时间要素）与其他对象比较（无时间要素）﹟Piechart派图：类似柱状图﹟Table表格：注意纵向、横向比较﹟Diagrams图表：注意顺序承接性&被动语态（流程图&地图）272.2小作文写作必备能力◎迅速确定描写对象&构思方向◎迅速筛选出有用信息◎迅速根据筛选出的信息组织相应的语句282.3小作文考点热点数据类图表为主导派图：占有线图：趋势，速度柱图：比对表格：数据分析292.4小作文综合预测302.5小作文注意事项◎看清属于什么题型的图表，是一幅图还是两幅或者是以上的图；◎注意不同类型图表的技巧（包括时态、语态、关键描述词语与句型）；◎划出并分析题目中的关键内容，分析图表中的关键特征点（依据各种图表的特点来决定）◎考虑结构（开头引言，描述特征，可能总结）312.6小作文开头段写法同义替换32Opening轻松写第一句之单词改写：Thediagrambelowshows…chart=graph=diagram(line/curve,pie,bar)table=figures=statisticsdiagram=pictureShow=display/reveal/indicate/reflect=illustrate/demonstrate=giveinformationabout=unfoldaclearpictureof33Opening轻松写第一句之万用句型：1,ThisbarchartdisplaysthenumberofmenandwomenenrolledinfutureeducationinBritainduringthreeperiods.2,Itisimmediatelyapparentfromthediagramthatin1970theprocessionsinMalaysiawerealmosttotallydominatedbymen.3,ThepercentageofvarioustypesofhouseholdsstruckbypovertyinAustraliain1999isindicatedinthetable.4,Asisrevealedinthediagram,thenumberofhoursperweekspentonunpaidworkisunequallydistributedbetweenmenandwomen.34时间的描述1,In+月份、年、年代In1980s;Intheperiodbetween…and...2,From…to…,Between…and…,At/bytheendof,Until/before/after,About/someFrom2008onwardstill…At/bytheendofthisyear/centuryAbout/some200yearsago3,For/during+时间段,Overa…yearperiod,Throughout…,Whenitenters…,Attheturnofthe…Duringthefirst/secondhalfoftheyear;Duringtheremainderoftheyear;Overatenyearperiod=overadecade;Throughoutthe20thcentury;Whenitentered2009;Attheturnofthenewcentury35Opening轻松写36Opening轻松写Paraphrase单词替换Demand=used/need/requirement/consumptionTypical=average/representative/commonuse=consumeHome=household/family37Opening轻松写CompoundSentence句子合成ThecurvechartrevealstheelectricityneededinEnglandduringaveragedaysinwinterandsummerandthepiegraphindicateshowelectricityisconsumedinatypicalEnglishhousehold.38Opening轻松写PassiveVoiceTheneedforelectricityinEnglandduringaveragedaysinwinterandsummerandhowtheelectricityisconsumedinatypicalEnglishhouseholdarerevealedinthecharts.39Opening轻松写Paraphrase单词替换proportion=percentage/share/statistics/figuresDifferent=variousCategory=type/kind/groupFamily=household/homeFamilieslivinginpoverty=poorfamilies=families(whowereliving)inpoverty=families(whowere)struckbypoverty40Opening轻松写41Opening轻松写1,ThetableoffersinformationaboutthepercentageofvarioustypesofhouseholdswhowerelivinginpovertyinAustraliain1999.42Opening轻松写2,ThetablegivesastatisticsofdifferenttypesoffamilywhowerelivinginpovertyinAustraliain1999.43Opening轻松写3,ThepercentageofvarioustypesofhouseholdsstruckbypovertyinAustraliain1999isindicatedinthetable.44Opening课堂练习45Opening课堂练习Travel=tour/trip/visitTheUK=Britain(notEngland!!)Most=topPopular=favorite/fashionable/stylishCountry=nationUKresidentstovisit=UKtravelers/visitors/tourists46Opening课堂练习ThediagramsrevealvisitstoandfromBritainandthetop5favoritenationsin1999forUKtourists.47Opening课堂练习VisitstoandfromBritainandthetop5favoritenationsin1999forUKtouristsarerevealedby/inthediagrams.484950512.7小作文主体段要求数字文字比对Thepercentageofmalesandfemalesarrestedduringthelast5yearsandcausesofarrestin2007areindicatedinthediagrams.522.8小作文主体段顺序数据类非数据类532.9小作文结尾段写法数据类加结尾非数据类省结尾54Ending轻松写Ending常用套句：1,Fromthediagramitcanbesafelyconcludedthatintheyears1978-1987FloridadevelopedmuchmorerapidlythantheUnitedStatesasawhole.2,Whatisworthmentioningisthatnuclearpowerdidn’tmakeitsdebutuntil1998.3,Asawhole/Ingeneral/Tosumup/Inconclusion/Insummary/Inanutshell,thedatasuggestthattheincreasedpresenceofwomeninthepaidworkforcehasyettoleadtoanincreasedroleformenathome.55Ending轻松写Overallthetablesuggeststhathouseholdsofsingleadultsandthosewithchildrenweremorelikelytobelivinginpovertythanthoseconsistingofcouples.5657ThelinechartillustratesthedataaboutpeopleataLondonsubwaystationfrom6amto10pm.582.10派图介绍单派双派多派5