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英语老师发试卷时，发现有一份忘记写名字的试卷，成绩是A，请帮助老师分析一下，这份试卷是班上那位同学的?以whosepaperisthis?为题写一篇短文。参考词汇：can’t;must;might;tidy;topstudent;goodhandwriting;begoodat;dowellin;书面表达列题纲(outline)1.读要求(demands)2.抓中心(graspthemainidea)3.排结构(beginning-body-ending)一、审题英语老师发试卷时，发现有一份忘记写名字的试卷，成绩是A，请帮助老师分析一下，这份试卷是班上那位同学的?以whosepaperisthis?为题写一篇短文。参考词汇：can’t;must;might;tidy;topstudent;goodhandwriting;begoodat;dowellin;书面表达中心FourStepsinWriting二、写作1.words(字)2.sentences(扩展成句)3.paragraphs(组句谋篇)4.Improvingthepassage(合理润饰)1.words(字）参考词汇：can’t;must;might;topstudent;goodhandwriting;begoodat;dowellin;tidy;情态动词名词短语谓语部分形容词主-----谓-----宾(状语）2.sentences(扩展成句)Eg:1.Itcan’tbelongtoJack.2.Tomisgoodatwritingskill.3.paragraphs(组句谋篇)ThepapermustbeTony’s.BecauseshedoeswellinEnglish.4.Improvingthepassage(合理润饰)Fromthegoodhandwritingweknowthatthispaperwithoutanamecan’tbethestudents’whosehandwritingisnotgood.Itmustbelongtotheonlythreestudents’handwritingisasgoodasthatonthispaper.Bill,JessiseandLucy.Thepapercan’tbeBill’sbecauseheisn’tgoodatEnglish.ItmightbeJessie’s,forsheisoneofthetopstudentsinourclassandshedoeswellinEnglish.Butshehasfoundherpaperinherdesk.SoitmustbeLucy’s.ShelikesEnglishandsheoftengetsan“A”intheexam.Andshehasn’tgotherpaperyet.SothepapermustbelongtoLucy.单句改错：1.Weareneedahealthyeatinghabit.2.Becauseitbadforyourhealth.3.Threemealsisveryimportant.4.Youeatssomenoodles.5.Wemusthaveabreakfasteveryday.6.goodlucktoyou.(Str:主+谓+宾)∧isareG(Str：主+系+表)(Sv：主谓一致)(Sv：主谓一致)(A：冠词)(Cap：大写)三、检查找错Cap大写字母capitalletterSp拼写spellingSV主谓一致subject-verbagreementStr句子结构sentencestructureVT动词时态verbtenseP标点punctuationA冠词articleWW错词wrongwordNum数(=单数/复数)number(=singular/plural)∧缺成分常见错误类型：Eg:IverylikeEnglish.Eg:IlikeEnglishandChinese.Idon’tlikemath.IlikemyEnglishteacher.改为:IlikeEnglishandChinese.Mathisboring.MyEnglishteacherisfriendlywithus.Eg:Whereismytrousers?areEg:Didyoufoundtheanswertothequestion?Eg:Ittookustwohourstowalkacrosstheforest.throughFirst,second,finally,firstofall,so,but,however,because,until,when,since,before…审题，抓点造句，成文改错，誉写Howtowritetheexpression?写作技巧小结：认真审题，抓住要点。确定体裁，注意格式。草拟提纲，理清思路。语言规范，把握时态。多用简句，慎用长句。巧用连词，行文连贯。拼写正确，书写规范。全面检查，万无一失。卷面潦草一定要扣分!书写规范卷面整洁Homework友谊是一片照射在冬日的阳光，是人感到人间的温暖；友谊是一泓出现在沙漠里的泉水，使人重新看到生活的希望。三年充实而多彩的初中生活，你一定拥有一段最珍贵的友谊或一个最知心的朋友。请通过叙事，让我们一起来分享你的友谊。要求语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰，用词准确，80-100词左右