(新高考)2020版高考英语二轮复习第二编三短文改错考法3行文逻辑错误练习新人教版

考法3行文逻辑错误语篇出处：2019年全国卷Ⅱ语篇类型：记叙文主题语境：职业1.MrandMrsZhangallteachinourschool.________________________________________________________________答案：all→both考查代词。上文提到两个人，用both作同位语。all指代三者或者三者以上。2．Myfirstonejobwastohelpotherstakecareoflittlechildren.________________________________________________________________答案：去掉one考查代词。myfirstjob“我的第一份工作”，one多余。3．Myparentshavedonealotforme,andIthinkIshoulddosomethingspecialtoexpressmythankstohim.________________________________________________________________答案：him→them考查代词。此处指代上文提到的Myparents，用them代替。4．Hespokeinsuchaloudvoicethathewantedtomakehimheardclearly.________________________________________________________________答案：him→himself考查代词。当主语和宾语指代同一个人时，用反身代词作宾语。5.I'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutyouropiniononwatersaving.________________________________________________________________答案：your→my考查代词。根据句意，应该是分享“我”自己的看法。6．Ihavegrownnotonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.________________________________________________________________答案：and→but考查连词。notonly...butalso...“不但……而且……”。7．IlikeEnglish,butIhavelearneditformorethantenyears.________________________________________________________________答案：but→and/so考查连词。前后分句之间是并列关系，不是转折关系。8．IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,itisanadvantagewhenapplyingforajoblikethis.________________________________________________________________答案：it前加and考查连词。两个分句之间是逗号时，要有连词连接。9．ThoughIdidn'tlikemaths,butIstillworkedhardatit.________________________________________________________________答案：去掉but考查连词。though与but不能同时在一起连用。10．Ididn'tgiveupwhenIwasintrouble.However,IkeptontryinguntilIsucceeded.________________________________________________________________答案：However→Instead考查副词。句意：“我”遇到困难没有放弃，而是(instead)继续努力直到成功。(原创)语篇类型：记叙文主题语境：学校生活Toenrichourschoollife,everyyearweheldanactivity,appealstonewmemberstojoinavarietyofstudentsocieties.ForalongtimeIhavebeenlongingtoorganizeseveralEnglishclubandthrowEnglishpartiesifpossibly.WhereIshoulddoisputupattractiveposters.I'veheardTomisexpertatdesigning,butI'dlikehimtodomethefavortohelpcreateposter.Iamwonderingwhetheryoucansparemeafewminutes.Ifheagrees,soIwillcometohishouseatthetimemostconvenienttohim.I'dbegratefulifhe'dliketooffersmeahelpinghand.答案：Toenrichourschoollife,everyyearweheld①holdanactivity,appeals②appealingtonewmemberstojoinavarietyofstudentsocieties.ForalongtimeIhavebeenlongingtoorganizeseveralEnglishclub③clubsandthrowEnglishpartiesifpossibly④possible.Where⑤WhatIshoulddoisputupattractiveposters.I'veheardTomisexpertatdesigning,but⑥soI'dlikehimtodomethefavortohelpcreate∧⑦theposter.Iamwonderingwhetheryou⑧hecansparemeafewminutes.Ifheagrees,so＼⑨Iwillcometohishouseatthetimemostconvenienttohim.I'dbegratefulifhe'dliketooffers⑩offermeahelpinghand.1．held→hold考查动词的时态。这里表示客观事实，故用一般现在时。2．appeals→appealing考查非谓语动词。此处用作状语，表示主动，所以用现在分词形式。3．club→clubs考查名词。club是可数名词，前面有several修饰，故用其复数形式。4．possibly→possible考查省略。ifpossible是ifitispossible的省略。5．Where→What考查主语从句的连接词。what引导主语从句，在从句中作动词do的宾语。6．but→so考查连词。前后两个分句之间是因果关系，所以用so。7．poster前加the考查冠词。上文提到poster，此处表示特指。8．you→he考查代词。上文提到Tom,he和him，此处指代Tom。9．去掉so考查连词。此处是一个主从复合句，if引导条件状语从句，后面是主句。10．offers→offer考查非谓语动词。不定式符号to后用动词原形。专题强化训练(一)(1)(2019·深圳一模)Ihaveadreamtobeadoctor.Threeyearsago,Iambadlyinjuredincaraccident.Theambulancerushedmetothenearesthospital,thatthedoctorsandnursesdidtheirbesttolookaftermyself.Fivedayslate,Iwasgettingbetter.Iwatchedthedoctorstoperformtheirdutiestirelesslybutofferalltheirpatientsthebesttreatmentavailable.Myexperienceinthathospitalgreatinfluencedme.Eversincethen,Ihavemadeitmylife'sambitiontofightagainstdiseasesandsavelife.IknowmydreamwillcometrueifIkeepworkhardforit.答案：Ihaveadreamtobeadoctor.Threeyearsago,Iam①wasbadlyinjuredin∧②acaraccident.Theambulancerushedmetothenearesthospital,that③wherethedoctorsandnursesdidtheirbesttolookaftermyself④me.Fivedayslate⑤later，Iwasgettingbetter.Iwatchedthedoctorsto＼⑥performtheirdutiestirelesslybut⑦andofferalltheirpatientsthebesttreatmentavailable.Myexperienceinthathospitalgreat⑧greatlyinfluencedme.Eversincethen,Ihavemadeitmylife'sambitiontofightagainstdiseasesandsavelife⑨lives.IknowmydreamwillcometrueifIkeepwork⑩workinghardforit.1．am→was考查动词的时态。时间状语是threeyearsago，用一般过去时。2．car前加a考查冠词。accident是可数名词，第一次提到，所以前面用不定冠词。3．that→where考查定语从句的引导词。定语从句中不缺少主语、宾语，用关系副词引导定语从句，修饰表示地点的名词hospital，故用where。4．myself→me考查代词。句意：医生和护士竭尽全力照顾我。用宾格代词作宾语。5．late→later考查副词。fivedayslater“五天以后”。6．去掉to考查非谓语动词。watchsb.dosth.“观察某人做某事”。7．but→and考查连词。前后是并列关系，不表示转折，故用and。8．great→greatly考查副词。修饰动词influenced，用副词形式。9．life→lives考查名词。此处life表示“人命；性命”，用复数形式。10．work→working考查非谓语动词。keepdoing“继续做……”。(2)(2019·河北衡水中学模考)ThisisthefirsttimeI'vecrossedhalftheworldtoAmerica.I'veexperiencedwhatonlyexistsintextbooks.ThefirstpartisAmericacustoms.Almosteveryoneexercisesregular,whetherthey'reboysorgirls,oldpeopleorchildren.What'smore,theyhaveastrongsenseofrules.Forexample,majorfamilyhavedomesticdisciplineandfamilyrules,everyoneinthecarmustwearaseatbeltandthedriverwillbefined.Otherpartisthelifeatschool.Thestudentsarepermittedtouseourcellphonesinclasses,andtheycansitdowninrandominclasses.Sofar